Cultivation of Immortality in All Realms Begins with Becoming a God

Although I saw the introduction saying that the settings will be changed, I can't figure out how to change this. Many practitioners in Fengshen have families, or they themselves are wallowing in the world of mortals. There is really no need to say this.

The writing of the main character is so rubbish, he can't do anything and it's not that exciting.

No, the source of Yin Qi is at the top of the mountain? Isn't this as outrageous as there is a ghost in the sun?

Generally speaking, using the Fengshen background has nothing to do with Fengshen. What kind of guard do you think you are? You might as well write about ordinary people.

How could there be a city god at that time in Fengshen Yanyi? Another dark plane, my God. There is no feeling of fairy spirit at all, just a feeling of cultivating immortality and flowing water.

The writing is a bit messy, maybe I read it too quickly? , I always feel that some things happened without describing them. There are no main or side stories, only the reactions of the supporting characters, such as the part where the protagonist kills Mr. Bai, and the riots in the city. I didn't notice it at all from the dialogue between the six of them, thinking that they were following. The determination of the caravan to leave ended up being a narration, and the reasons will be written later. There are also some things that may be foreshadowing. The person who smashed the bowl and said that he was a two-legged sheep, but the background was not explained, and there was no role for him before and after. Maybe it's because I'm not good enough. I'll take a look at it later.

I simply made a map, which is roughly the direction.

He is always angry and angry, which is not pleasing at all.

Write it carefully. Did you beat Yuanshi Tianzun to death?

The protagonist described by the author is really a genius among geniuses. Although he has not practiced for a long time, he can already create magic. Compared with giving time, can you become the Hunyuan Da Luo Jinxian? Sanqing is trivial, Pangu can't compare at all.

Fengshen, what you wrote is irrelevant. It should be Wen Zhong's minion at the beginning. He has his own golden finger and absorbs the enemy's power to strengthen himself. The most distinctive feature of Fengshen is the formation, and he has to wait for someone to break the formation. What are you writing?

Lu Zhao

The title of the book inexplicably reminds me of another book "Fengshen: Starting from Beihai"

You don't have to follow the original work, but the setting must be necessary, otherwise you don't want to write a book title that is about conferring gods.

The naming is not very good. It has no fairy spirit or ancient rustic flavor. It looks like a group of modern people traveling through time.

The setting collection has been updated in the work related section. Interested book friends can check it out.