Shrouding the Heavens: The Great Emperor Zhenwu

Author, you have your own ideas, but you are too self-centered. The initial idea was good, but then you married a, well, how should I put it, a vase, not even a vase. Does she help you practice? Need to continue the family line? Especially when the protagonist, the teacher, talks to matchmakers, the targets are still mortals, and strictly speaking, there is no sense of picture. In establishing a dynasty in the world of Zhetian, I feel that the lessons learned by Emperor Yuhua are not profound enough. If you want to write about a female protagonist, please don't write about one without character traits. Too inconsistent.

We have already written about the ancient people who covered the sky and the earth. Why not be bolder and write about the overlord who traveled through Western Chu? The combination of double pupils and domineering body is also very exciting! Hang up and go straight to the Fighting Immortal Road.

After reading the introduction, I knew it was a bad article. Why should I write about the Ming Dynasty when writing about Zhe Tian? If I want to write well about both, it means that neither of them can write well. Without that writing style, Zhe Tian is not as good as becoming an immortal emperor or an emperor in the mythical era and resurrecting nine worlds of mortals as an immortal. He lays out his plans in the world, gives birth to children early, preserves his own power, and deliberately suppresses the dark turmoil. I have read too many articles. It is boring. It is a nanny article, or it is only a historical article about how to choose China. The Han dynasty built for Li Zicheng was taken away, the Qing army was not allowed to enter the customs, and the three legs were protected. The protagonist destroyed the Southern Ming and the Qing Dynasty, ruled the world, kept the throne, and restricted the imperial rule. The industrial revolution would impact his dynastic rule. Do you choose whether your dynasty is gone, let the industrial revolution enter the country, or choose to give up the future development of China for your own country like the Qing Dynasty, etc. Writing both is shit, and I can't hold it without the writing style.

Judging from the introduction, the ingredients are really complex, and it's a bad idea that's thrown off the market.

I'm tired of seeing the Nine Dragons pulling the coffin at the beginning. I've always wanted to see people practicing on the earth, at least ten to dozens or hundreds of years old. Not to mention as strong as Yanhuang Emperor and I, it's enough to have the Immortal Stage realm, and to interfere less with reality.

The idea is very good, and my parents and relatives can accept it when going up the mountain, but playing with other relatives makes me frown. Master, the protagonist, I did not entrust you with the inheritance to turn the mountain gate into private property. Even if you don't want to, can a sect be pure if there are too many people? Especially the baby girl, it's upsetting to watch, you either don't write it, or you write it well, but I don't think the heroine can be so amazing in writing, so what's the use of having a background board. I don't think I can resonate with the ancient people's views. How deep of a relationship can you, an adult, have with your ancient childhood playmates?

The protagonist is missing in three chapters, and the main plot is missing in ten chapters. How did you sign the contract◔‸◔?

When you write about the Ming Dynasty, it's just a good word count. What's the use of the dynasty background? To fight Manchu people? Then you might as well write history.

The author has profound skills, smooth writing, full length, and elegant words. Damn it, I could finish it in two or three chapters, but I ended up writing more than ten chapters.

From all the Zhetian fanfics I have read, I feel that this one is written like a short story.