Shrouding the Heavens: The Great Emperor Zhenwu

Just reading the synopsis tells you it's a terrible story. Why write about the Ming Dynasty when you're writing about "Covering the Sky"? Trying to write both well means you'll end up writing neither well. The author doesn't have the writing skills.

Author, you do have your own ideas, but you're too self-centered. Your initial ideas were good, but later you married someone who, well, how should I put it, was just a pretty face, not even as pretty as a pretty face. Will she help your cultivation? Do you need to have children?

Since you've already written about ancient Earth people in "Covering the Sky," why not be bolder and write about a time-traveling Hegemon of Western Chu? Double pupils plus a superhuman body would be very interesting! Just go all out and become a War Immortal.

Judging from the synopsis, it's a damn mess of ingredients; it's a complete flop.

The idea is great, and my parents and relatives can accept it, but my playmates and other relatives make me frown. The protagonist's master is passing on the legacy to you not so that you can turn the sect into your private property. Even if you don't want to, can a sect remain pure if there are too many people? Especially the arranged marriages, they're so annoying to read.

I'm tired of the opening scene with nine dragons pulling a coffin. I've always wanted to see characters cultivating on Earth, at least for decades or even centuries. I don't expect them to be as strong as the Yellow Emperor or Lao Tzu, just reaching the Immortal Platform realm would be enough. They should interfere less with reality.

The main character is nowhere to be seen in three chapters, and the main plot is nowhere to be seen in ten chapters. What made them sign this contract? ◔‸◔

Writing about the Ming Dynasty is just padding your word count. What's the point of historical background? To fight the Manchus? You might as well write history.

The author possesses profound skill, the writing is fluent and elegant, the piece is substantial, and the wording is meticulous. Damn it, something that could be written in two or three chapters has turned into more than ten.

Of all the fanfictions about the novel "Covering the Sky" I've read, this one feels like it's written about everyday family life.