Chaos Jue on the Endless Journey
万载归途之混沌决
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 32k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Eastern Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 3mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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15Chapters
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It looks good, I won't update it frequently.
Finished the first chapter
The overall look and feel is very good. Now let me tell you what I saw: A cow and horse had a dream, and the dream was related to the pendant. He rode to the suburbs after get off work and traveled through time. Advantages: Very smooth. Everything should be included in the opening chapter, Characters, background, conflict, suspense. Disadvantages: 1. Some content could be better. The background can have one or two more strokes, you chose to leave it blank. This may be a personal style, but it seems a bit risky to guess a riddle. 2. Punctuation. Also, you seem to like using periods. Replace commas with periods and pauses with periods. Personal suggestion: None, your writing has its own style, we may not be on the same track. I always seem to think it is not logical enough, but it may be just right for you. End.