I Am Wang Chongyi

Too much rambling, too many examples, it's distracting.

To be honest, instead of splitting into multiple characters, it would be much more efficient and enjoyable to have a system-managed, all-out experience of martial arts adventures, temple chases, and dynastic secrets to level up and fight monsters, finally moving on to a different map to cultivate immortality. Currently, I haven't seen anything particularly enjoyable about it, so I have no desire to subscribe.

Seeing the phrase "King of One-Word Titles" in the introduction made me want to laugh a little 🙂

You could also write it like this: when faced with an insurmountable obstacle, the problem isn't internal, but external force. If you have enough knowledge, you could create a biological lightning tribulation specifically designed for destruction and rebirth, borrowing the power of heaven and earth. Even if an enemy attacks at a crucial moment, you could use them as a lightning rod.

The synopsis said it was a power-up story with easy leveling up, but I ended up reading dozens of chapters about human relationships and social dynamics. 🥵

I'm following all four books at the same time, and you used to be giving me thousands of monthly votes. Now it's the 5th, and I only have a few hundred. I don't want to write any filler. The masses have discerning eyes.

The novels on Qidian are the worst right now. The writing quality isn't the problem, it's just that they're all filler, endlessly padded. There's no way around it, authors make money based on word count.

You should really work on your writing style. There are also many Buddhist sayings that you don't understand. Look them up if you don't understand them. It's too embarrassing to read if you just imagine things out of thin air. Even after ten years of experience, your writing style and plot are still not mature!

After it was published, it became a mess. The plot took a sharp turn and turned into a Frankenstein's monster. In order to seize the elusive immortal destiny, without any external enemies, the temple's leaders actually abandoned their faith and switched to Taoism, abandoning the temple team, the people, the base, and the century-old foundation. The war and cultivation were written terribly.

Reading the comments, I initially thought the protagonist was creating clones to descend the mountain, and I wondered what kind of plot hole that was. Turns out, it involved creating two subroutines for someone else 🙂.