Man Is in the Wilderness, All Heavens Are Enlightened

Poison, poison, poison, Manghuang Ji ran to Douluo, Qin Shimingyue licked, have you never seen a woman?

I'm already writing about the Wilderness, why do I need to write about women, specifically asking someone for a maid? Throughout the entire book, the only female characters I have an impression of are Ji Ning's mother, cousin, ex-girlfriend, wife, daughter, Nuwa, Chang'e in the decisive battle of the three realms, and many NPC female characters whose names I cannot name, and a female slave of the World God Queen. There are not many women who have a sense of presence in the entire book, which has millions of words. I think it is too low to ask for female slaves specifically. Those maids are not just two randomly found in the Three Realms, but they are also specially asked to improve their strength. It is too low.

The author's writing is always a little awkward, and he doesn't feel happy when he should. Some plots are completely unnecessary, unnecessary and disgusting to readers. I don't know what the author was thinking. . . For example, when you first join Douluo, you exchange more than ten kilograms of animal head gold for ten gold soul coins. The protagonist at this time is refining the body of the innate gods and demons. It is correct to say that he is invincible in Douluo, but he ends up being taken advantage of. . . You don't need to regard money as money, but why did you write this paragraph specifically? Isn't this disgusting? Also, the Ice Emperor was really gentle with the Ice and Fire Eyes. It would be better not to write or to ask for a chance for the sisters to come in. Why write these unpleasant plots? What is the significance of the world of Tianxing Jiuge? Playing with women? It would be nice to have a name and a surname if you have some style. Why do all those buses in Zilanxuan have to be packed? Also, don't mention 18 years old all the time, there's no need. It's like saying when eating a large intestine that the feces in it have been cleaned. . . It's not impossible to teach the Dharma in a small world. Just mention it. What about raising Zifu monks?

Can a messy piece of writing still be on the new book list?

It's very poisonous to watch. After breaking through Xiantian from the Wild Age and traveling to the Douluo Continent, you are invincible at the beginning. But a dozen kilograms of dog-headed gold are exchanged for ten gold coins. A hundred thousand-year-old soul bone is exchanged for several storage soul guides and the martial spirit is the ancestor of wine. You also help people break through the title Douluo. More than 800,000-year-old soul bones are exchanged for a person with a martial spirit and a brain. There are still conditions. Return after breaking through the Zifu. Ji Mansion: "It just so happened that you broke through and I have something for you to do." You also handed over the skills and secrets that you had obtained outside. Then you returned to Douluo Continent and found your spiritual pet Snow Emperor to watch you leave. You brought the Ice Emperor with the Ice and Fire Eyes to help her break through. I didn't expect you to come back so soon. You found that the Snow Emperor didn't listen to your orders, so the Snow Emperor followed you all the time and asked the Snow Emperor to pass the skills to the Ice Emperor🤮

Douluo's only two advantages over other worlds are that he can immediately understand his natal weapon/bloodline through the awakening of his martial soul, and his long lifespan after becoming a god. There are no other advantages. You are all in the heavens, and you are from the Wilderness Period. In Douluo, apart from awakening your martial soul to clarify your destiny, anything else you do is poisonous.

Douluo is really a sewer, don't write that stuff, the God King is almost equal to the golden elixir of mortals. As for lifespan, it's all eternity in two dimensions. You Tian cannot write about Douluo. No matter how good you write about Douluo, it is just like that. You might as well read martial arts.

I have misunderstood everyone. What was said in the comment section still makes sense. Did the author bring himself into it? I always write about the kind of person who has a low-spirited personality and likes disgusting people from time to time.

It's poisonous, and it's starting to become a clone, and it's still a conscious clone. At that time, the protagonist will be working hard outside. The clone fucked the heroine hard at home. The second soul? It's so funny that it's not a customized green text!

I just saw this and I don't want to see it anymore

Endless Shennong comes out!

Title of the novel: Traveling through the wilderness, I am a licking dog in the heavens

I really want to watch studs. We know how to use the browser ourselves. Now there is no heroine in the world.

The subject matter is good. After reading it, I thought it was developed through multiple worlds and multiple opportunities. It turns out that Douluo is the one who takes in women, and he also controls his mind. He has a problem with not being able to trust people, but he still takes them in. After reading Chapter 20 Wife.

It's been a month since I last read The Eunuch, and this book travels from the Wilderness to Douluo... Well, you tell me, your character is not good, your writing is not good, and your ideas are not good either.

Basically, they are all looking for girls. Don't you think the little emperor's uncles and brothers can't find them on their own?

Any time you write about a female slave, you will get better results than this. The story of Manghuang Ji accepts servants, which is scary, but it is not that the servant girl accepts female slaves.

I don't understand. Do you have to ask him to write about eunuchs to be happy?

Original maid, why don't you accept Douluo with a surname? It's a bit disgusting.

It's a rubbish novel, and the introduction can't move to the main text.

The plot is still okay. Let me explain the poisonous points in the comment area. First: Recruiting maids. The male protagonist does not accept them casually. The ones he accepts are all special martial souls. Later, the male protagonist asks them to go to other worlds to collect skills and resources. Second: Recruiting girls. They accept almost all the girls who can be named. This is not considered a poisonous point. After all, it does not take up most of the plot. Third: Licking. There is no such thing. How many people said licking after finishing it? Where does the plot of collecting girls directly into the harem come from? Fourth: When taking people across the world, there is a limit to a person's energy. It is impossible for the male protagonist to spend time building up his power in every world. Where would he have the time to practice?

Borrow the precious place to recommend the book "Douluo: Martial Soul Essence, I am the Master" The original Martial Soul is full of soul power, not brainless, reasonable and refreshing, exploring the Martial Soul Soul Ring is half original, half research

Borrow the precious place to recommend the book "Douluo: Martial Soul Essence, I am the Master" The original Martial Soul is full of soul power, not brainless, reasonable and refreshing, exploring the Martial Soul Soul Ring is half original, half research