Azeroth's Silvermoon Past

Is there anyone who can draw pictures? . .

After reading a few chapters, I feel like I've struck gold. The writing is very touching. I wonder if there is a chance to put it on the shelves. After all, the first person is still a bit niche 😭

Don't forget the shame of the Sunwell, for the glory of the sin'dorei.

A tragic hymn belonging to Quel'Thalas, written by you every word - you accurately captured the struggle of the high elves in the shadow of doomsday. The protagonist knew that his fate was declining and the silver moon was about to fall, but he still clung to the glory of his bloodline and refused to bow his head. Your book is really brilliant, and other races dare not judge it unreasonably, but when it comes to portraying high elves, I have never seen anyone write more poignantly than yours.

I've been out of the game for a long time. I haven't played much since 85. What's wrong now?

This style of writing has not been seen for a long time. It is elegant and timeless.

Yamaguchiyama has long forgotten! ! ! ! ! !

Feeling less composed

Logistics Manager

Future Ranger General

A bit mature

Blizzard is too good at cooking things now.

Normally I really don't like to write long reviews, as they always feel verbose and time-consuming, but for your Warcraft fanfic, I really think it's worth typing out a few paragraphs. Quel'Thalas is really one of the more tragic races among Warcraft. Don't forget the shame of the Sunwell. This sentence immediately filled up the sense of weight of Quel'Thalas, which was particularly poignant. I read all the way, and the overall rhythm was very comfortable, without any delay or rush in the plot. Although I could clearly feel that some places might have been deleted, and there were occasional minor flaws, it did not affect the reading fluency at all. The most amazing thing is the control of details - settings that shouldn't appear are never added indiscriminately, and the foreshadowing and character interactions that should occur are all done naturally. For example, Alleria's ranger edge and Sylvanas' tenacity are all natural extensions of the original work, without being abrupt at all. But I have to complain: Is the protagonist going to be a scumbag? The repeated swings between Alleria and Sylvanas made me anxious for him! Fan fiction is inherently difficult to write, and everyone has a different understanding of Warcraft. What I hate the most is a large number of original characters competing for the show, but your book is well balanced. Keep up the good work!

This requiem, sung by elven souls for thousands of years, is not only a tribute to the victims, but also a sad footnote to the collapse of a racial civilization. The elegy at this moment is a redemption that spans ten thousand years; after the destruction of the Sunwell, the surviving elves bid farewell to their identity as "Quel'dorei" in their chants. The iteration of the lyrics of "Sin'dorei (Bloodson)" became a declaration of the birth of the blood elves. Those repeated "Shindu (Fall)" and "Fallah na (The enemy is breaking through)" are not only a straightforward depiction of the invasion of the Burning Legion, but also hide the inevitability and helplessness of civilization's prosperity and decline. When the last note dissipates over the dilapidated Silver Moon City, what is left is not only the sorrow for the lost glory, but also the hidden power of the survivors to rebuild civilization on the ruins - this is the deeper meaning of elegy beyond mourning: only by remembering the fall can you understand why you are moving forward. Will the protagonist let this song disappear?

Why aren't there many comments? The pace of this book is quite good, the protagonist is not invincible, the golden finger is not big, and the strength increases in levels. . . . Overwhelming other Warcraft fans

For the transfer of power, the distribution of benefits, and the survival of the race, the blood elves need a war of genocide, and there must be a war of genocide. The big toilet is actually a good thing. The solar toilet is just one of them. The prophetic ability of pig's feet is a double-edged sword. It cannot be used to confuse the public and hurt others and yourself. Pig's Feet slid towards I Can in the beginning of "I'm Good for You" and "Prove with Strength". Your configuration disc is an energy bar rather than a repeater. The best choice is still egg bath water. In short, there are still too few high elves. You can study "Multiple Birth Reproduction Technology of Sows", whether they are cannon fodder or the main force.

The writing is very good, but can it be written in paragraphs? The article is too dense.