America Reborn 1985

I can't remember why I wrote about a time-traveler in my previous life, so I might as well write about aborigines .

In 1985, the 14.5-Year-old Jennifer Connelly was very good, the ball was good for competitors, and the 20-year-old Monica was in her true prime.

There are too many inner dramas, and I am sensitive and startled. The setting of this protagonist has no charm at all. If there is no memory at all, it would be better to set it as a native and get a mobile phone from the future. And the first song was not chosen very well. This song shouldn't have been written by a 16 year old. It is best to choose songs with a time gap of 5 years. Because you don't know whether they have started creating or not.

I have only read three chapters so far. The first chapter is pretty good with the character's appearance, but there are problems in the second and third chapters. The author has never thought about the audience for his book. In the second chapter, the protagonist has no previous memories and some people have been screened out. In the third chapter, a smartphone is written. The protagonist can still choose and copy things by himself, but there is another restriction. If the author wants to write a fast-paced story, he should retain his memory. If he writes a slow-paced story, the protagonist will feel like he has amnesia and can recall some relevant memories based on the items he saw. Instead of having the left and right brains fighting each other like now, further filtering out the already small number of readers.

Travelers have no memory, and the design of taking off their pants and farting is extremely discouraging.

Very good, good in all aspects, except that the text is a bit rigid and lacks flexibility. Basically, when mentioning something, you have to talk about how it was in the 1980s. It is like a pile of brands in the small era, very deliberate.

I would like some readers not to confuse the United States in the 1980s with the United States today. Although narcotics were widely used in the United States in the 1980s, drug addicts began to appear on a large scale. But in the 1980s, the overall economy of the United States had not yet collapsed, and white middle-class families still expected their children to study well and behave properly. The America you see in movies and TV shows is actually the America promoted by Hollywood. It is still different from the actual America in most central states. The male protagonist's family is a family where the middle class is beginning to decline (the mother is unemployed, the father's business has failed, and he needs to work to pay it back slowly) The family does not have much money, but it does not mean that their concept will suddenly change to forgetting their loyalty to the money. His family is not Britney's family, where she has dreamed of making her daughter famous since she was a child. Her parents hope that their children will have a bright future, but don't be impetuous.

I vomited! ! Find a cheerleader as your girlfriend. Everyone knows that the average number of cheerleaders in the United States is really strong.

Author, congratulations on writing another blockbuster work

For example, you can pretend to be a big-tailed wolf, you can eat food indiscriminately, you can't speak indiscriminately, etc. But the follow-up did not appear. There are too few writing about entertainment nowadays. Come on, author!

People who travel through time and space and don't know what Google and Apple are doing are really a bit poisonous.

The writing is really good, the writing style is seasoned, and there are no embarrassing plots. Is he an experienced author?

It feels like there is no passion, just like a puppet.

The writing is good, but I have a small suggestion for the songs to be sung. Put it at the end of the chapter and make it an easter egg. This will make readers feel more involved

The writing is very good, I haven't seen such a detailed entertainment article in a long time. Especially in entertainment, there are very few that are of good quality.

This rebirth without memory is really confusing. If you don't have memory anymore, why don't you write about the indigenous people? ? No wonder few people read your book well.

It's a very good entertainment seedling. Compared with Lao Qi's Chicago, it has a father and a mother at the beginning and has no other plot conflicts except for the poor point. There seems to be some controversy about the fact that Goldfinger is a physical mobile phone. Wouldn't it be better if only the protagonist can see the mobile phone?

Come on, the writing is good, don't go to the palace

What's the difference between you and the indigenous people?

As title. I recommend another business article "Rebirth 1982: Sichuan Cuisine Creates a New York Empire". Whether it looks good or not, you can taste the saltiness first.

No memory of time travel, cheats with various restrictions, shit-like settings

It's a pity not to continue writing. This kind of writing actually has a fixed audience at the beginning, and the writing is not bad enough to be a eunuch.

No more? I have to tell everyone about it anyway.