The System Is Very Abstract. the Disaster I Want to Kill Is the School Beauty.

Your profile looks like a wretched guy who tortures and kills animals and stalks girls, right? 😰 Why don't you change your profile? Moreover, the profile doesn't seem to be about stalking but about killing. He's mainly like a spook.

The synopsis of the book is a bit like a mentally ill person torturing and killing kittens. I feel that it is much better to raise pigs' feet and make them weird. This is a bit scary. I suggest changing the book.

I read more than 20 chapters, and it was well written. The protagonist is decisive in doing things, but one thing is that he went into the community to save his classmates. The reason for entering the community is somewhat contrary to the description of the protagonist's character later. He entered the community to eliminate level 5 monsters just because he was worried about the safety of his classmates. Later, when the monsters counterattacked on the verge of death, they said that the protagonist was emotionally weak. It was better to change it to the protagonist who only wanted to die and find excitement.

The previous solo exploration was a bit boring. It's not that the writing was bad, but there were too many of the same type and there were no highlights. After Blood Moon was gamified later, it was much better. Isn't this game world more interesting than the lair you designed?

Why don't you change the milk cat to a round head? I don't think it works right now.

Why do you feel like your style suddenly changed?

The problem with the cat, judging from the content, is that it is actually an infected monster. It is actually acceptable. It even resurrected later. Don't worry about it. It's just that the author seems to have cut it.

After reading about 60 chapters, I felt that the world of Blood Moon was a bit overwhelming. Shouldn't the protagonist's job be to eliminate danger in reality? Why are you still thinking about going to the Blood Moon World? Later, you said it was too risky. Especially write about those people. And didn't the officials pay attention or pay attention? Whether it's the community or the library (the protagonist also took a taxi)

? , Alas, another book I think I can read has gone to Yandu

There is a huge difference between your introduction and your content... I think I should change it to a more suitable one soon, author

Friends, this book is terrible. The content is okay, but the introduction does have some problems.

I read a few of them and I think they are okay. I still recommend changing the introduction. I almost asked them to quit.

The introduction is not good, but I read the following content well.

🌿, I finished reading it without realizing it, it's so short

It is indeed the starting point. All the book-cutting experts are here. All the stars are gathered here.