Sorry, You Can Do Whatever You Want If You Have a Thick Health Bar

When I saw the author's comment on station b, I said it straight away, it's just average. In the first chapter of Cause and Effect, I didn't even know who the protagonist was.

I also read it after seeing it on station b. Because I am not an experienced reader and am just a new writer, I took a look at your novel. I feel like, well, there aren't many big problems, but there aren't any big highlights either. I don't know if you had a lot of investment in him when you were writing it. If so, the problem may be that it doesn't quite fit into this cool writing mode. Your introduction and the novel as a whole have a very online feel. But the plot seems to be almost a bit flat. It seems to me that you are reborn, right? This should actually be easy to write. I'm quite interested too. Just read and read. Maybe after gambling, the desire to follow up will not be so strong. Is that Yu Feng the protagonist? Maybe you need to research what popular novels are like and see how others write them, but I think the core issue is to make the conflict clearer, stronger and more interesting. When I saw the strong conflict at the beginning, I wanted to read on. I can tolerate up to three chapters. If I still can't read it, I think the direction is very clear and I have a lot of expectations, so I might give up. Well, some small suggestions. 😃