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The pace is too slow! There is also a protagonist who will make readers take on the role of someone who is close to psychological collapse. A child will cough today and develop ADHD and allergies tomorrow? You don't have to write like this when writing about a nanny. If you don't pray for happiness, you still have to choose the readers. Keep it simple, direct, and straightforward, and more people will accept it.

After reading Chapter 13, I looked at the table of contents. I don't know what the use of plug-ins is for the protagonist. I might as well delete the plug-ins and just write about how useless a person can be.

No, this golden finger is more useful. Are you really prepared to wait for those kids to grow up? A lot of debt and still not making any money

I came here to read the novel, not to see an old man who was incompetent and angry when he failed, got divorced, and raised a baby in middle age. The plot was too slow, and he was incompetent and angry.

After reading about ten chapters, I couldn't bear it anymore. Is the author suffering from delusions of persecution? The protagonist died suddenly while working overtime and finally came back to life. It's normal to have unstable emotions. But you didn't write the three golden chapters like this. The first few chapters were all about the protagonist Goldfinger awakening and seeing that he was a waste. He didn't ask anyone else, so he kept denying himself. Then he saw that his son also had a waste on his head and started to shut down. Then I asked the teacher if he was a veterinarian just like a mental patient. The first 7 chapters felt like they were all invalid articles. Later I learned how to use cheats and didn't try to make money. Then in the elevator, the leading Gonghuo master kept poking at the protagonist's pain points, while the child was still watching. To be honest, it's just a novel. In reality, your personality is not called a gentle southern man, it's called 🐢. Do you understand? When others scold you and insult you, you don't even dare to let out a fart. Are you a waste? The author has succeeded in shaping the protagonist. It doesn't mean that you will become a different person after you get the golden finger. Why do you keep putting pressure on your son? If the child's mother is gone, you will put pressure on your son. Waste

This book will be very fascinating for people with children and people who are not understood. If you calm down and read it, you will be fascinated.

I can't understand

He is indeed a loser. He has worked for so many years and has no opinion. As a father, he doesn't solve the problem and yells at his own children. He doesn't want to be written by humans.

Watched for a while. The protagonist is indeed a loser. His son was bullied and he didn't dare to fight back. It was his aunt who helped fight back. I can't stand it anymore.

It's a really weird book. You can't use Goldfinger at all. You keep talking about children. What's wrong with the stars? No dude, I came here because of the title Goldfinger. You keep talking about children, and I can't relate to it.