Kowtow to the Supreme Being

This is a fantasy world full of imagination, guided by "revenge", and gradually unfolding a grand conspiracy network. The advantages are novel setting, strong visual sense of battle scenes, and tension-filled character relationships. If the narrative rhythm and foreshadowing can be optimized, I personally think it will become a masterpiece with both depth and excitement! Come on!

The author opens the chapter with the harsh environment of two suspended days, creating a doomsday-like sense of oppression and quickly drawing readers into a fantasy world. The protagonist Ye Jingchen's humiliation and embarrassment when he is forced to transport a mysterious coffin forms a strong contrast with the strength and coldness of the mysterious girl, creating repeated suspense. The plot broke out at the focal point of the conflict at the wedding of the Chishui City Lin Mansion. The girl used the name of "congratulatory gift" to seek revenge, revealing the Lin family's old case of brutally killing a friend to seize the treasure ten years ago. The narrative runs on two lines. On one side, the girl confronts the Lin family with overwhelming strength and accuses them of their crimes; on the other side, Ye Jingchen unexpectedly encounters Lin Yu, an enemy who repays kindness with revenge, and performs a hearty beating and revenge. Conflicts escalate layer by layer, and the truth is gradually revealed, from personal grudges to dark family secrets. The language style is rough and vivid, especially in the section where Ye Jingchen angrily beats up Lin Yu. The use of onomatopoeia of "papapapa" is very visual and emotionally cathartic. The overall rhythm is bright and compact, and the characters (such as Ye Jingchen's stubbornness and outburst, the girl's calmness and ruthlessness) are clearly established in the fierce conflict. The joy of revenge is intertwined with the cruel laws of the world of knocking, creating a fascinating dramatic tension. If five points is a perfect score, four points will be given first, and the rest will depend on the following chapters. It is very good so far, keep going! ! !

I know you from afar, but I don't know how deep the clouds are and how deep the sea is.

It seems that I'm getting older and can't keep up with the author's jumping thinking.