The First Sword of Rebirth, First Kill Bai Yueguang

Even after being reborn, you still lick. Licking a dog means licking a dog.

Don't be a licking dog. Go and see what the hell Li is. If you want to write about turning around, that's not how you write it.

The writing is quite good, and the writing and characters are good. However, it's hard to get started with the first book of a new account. I'll try to find some recommendations from colleagues.

I feel that the highlight is that I have a sense of responsibility and independence in my relationship. I want to be single-minded and have a harem at the same time. I treat the heroine in the article like a tool and have an indifferent attitude. It is difficult to maintain such a protagonist. It is difficult to stand up as a protagonist. You can follow the Chen Hansheng route. Apart from this, everything else is very good. The flaws are not concealed. Come on, author!

It's so similar to my whitest one

The writing is good. If you continue to stick to it, your grades will definitely be good.

What I wrote later is much better than the previous one, and it's getting better and better.

Sorry, the heroine's name reminds me of the hook-nosed male host.

I'm convinced. I'm really convinced. And the author is ntr, right?