Follow the Wind, Nothing Happens in the World

After reading about 10 chapters, the previous set of settings were immediately poisonous. This is all because the author is too self-indulgent. I suggest you learn more Internet writing routines and perspective changes, and don't switch perspectives at every turn, as it is difficult to substitute. Moreover, the protagonist only has a slight sense of existence at the beginning of Chapter 7. Still called boys and girls short. Then the segmentation is also very poor, which increases visual fatigue. You have to know that nowadays most people watch it on their mobile phones. The whole writing feels like Pharaoh lost his teeth, ten or twenty years ago. The author should be greatly influenced by traditional literature. There are no conflicts or emotions at all. The character descriptions and plot are scattered, with a hammer in the east and a stick in the west. The whole thing looks messy and the main line is unclear. But the truth is that it is very difficult to persist until the third chapter. The author is also crazy about himself under each chapter, which is very childish. Then, the advantage is that the author's writing is good, but in online articles, the writing is the icing on the cake and increases the upper limit. It is useless to put it here. First of all, you should focus on the protagonist from the first chapter, allowing readers to figure out who he is, where he is, and what he is going to do? Rather than a lot of bells and whistles. Looking at your writing style and ideas, it may be in the direction of literary youth, such as Mao Ni,,. Manager, but you don't know other people's techniques, structures, and narrative techniques at all. Finally, I came here to read your cover from a certain website. I hope you can wake up soon. 😴

I hope to rekindle or even surpass the heroic spirit of the opening chapter, the arrogant young man who leaned on his gun and drank heavily, resisting the enemy in front of the city gate. It is not easy to update new books, I hope all fellow Taoists can help! Collect+FollowThe author keeps reading!

This cover was my idea, and the illustrator basically restored what I had in mind. Haha, I am more motivated to continue writing~ I hope fellow Taoists will also like the new cover!

Make some adjustments and change the update time to 19:00-20:00~

Because I have a lot to plan recently, such as the operation of Bilibili account and the expansion of my photography business. In addition, interested friends are welcome to follow my Bilibili account~ It may be helpful to friends who want to learn how to retouch pictures. ID: A photo retoucher who doesn't want to retouch photos A part-time writer who doesn't know how to retouch photos is not a good photographer~

Let's talk about the conclusion first. It's worth reading. Reading too many fast-food articles will damage your brain. It's rare to come across something like this that you can calm down and read. The writing style is like a cat, very delicate, and the characters are well created. It has such a down-to-earth Jianghu flavor. I haven't seen it for a long time.

I haven't watched it yet, but I want to dominate the sofa first. No one can compete with me. Oh, I'm Yue'er's number one fan!

Because there are a lot of things happening in my job recently, I will update two chapters a day instead of a single update~

Come on! 😁

I also wish fellow Taoists: There will be no homesickness during the Mid-Autumn Festival, and the moon will be full, people will be full and families will be happy.