Heavens, Immortality Begins with the World of the Condor Shooting

Except for the protagonist's weapons, they are all very good. The protagonist is carrying a two-meter-seven-meter three-pointed two-edged sword, and he has no secondary weapons. Long weapons are used for riding horses in battle formations. When you are traveling in the world, how can you wield a two-meter-seven long weapon in various restricted spaces? Too inconsistent

I read the title of the book as "Starting with the Condor Shooting"😵😵

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In the world of martial arts, swords are not the only ones that can be used, and long weapons are not only used by cavalry on the battlefield. Second weapon recommendation: First of all, exclude swords (as mentioned before, the protagonist is not suitable for practicing swords and is suitable for practicing heavy weapons). I recommend two types, the first is the wild goose wing knife The second is a heavy mace

Mu Wanqing, that part is really bad. The protagonist's performance is like a different person. Just because Mu Wanqing is good-looking, she must get it, be the first man to see his true face, and be his wife. What is the difference between this and robbing a common woman? The only difference is that Mu Wanqing was able to win it in just two chapters, even if he wants to be included in the harem. The first two harems were well written, but now it becomes impatient. The protagonist's performance relies on his superb martial arts skills and understanding of the plot to do whatever he wants.

For the last few pictures, I want to say that you should stop thinking about color. I have never seen a woman. What era are you in? Now is the era of fun people. What is the difference between what you write and the martial arts fandom ten years ago? We need to look at creativity, imagination, and what you are doing in this fanwuxia. Xia Li adjusts his own different ideas, whether it is to make up for regrets or to fix his life, don't put all your thoughts on women. There are two Condors in the front, which are perfect. The world starts again and the stories are all the same. The above are my personal thoughts. If you don't like my opinions, just delete them.

The comparison between Zhu Tian Tong Ren and Wu Ji Tian Xia 1. First of all, from the reader's point of view, when watching Zhu Tian Tong Ren, they generally look at the interaction between the protagonist and the characters in the original book. The feeling of being omniscient and omnipotent, and the core is the sense of immersion. But at least readers must have read the original work, but there are really not that many who have read Wu Ji. 2. Secondly, from the author's point of view, when writing Zhu Tianwen, he will borrow the characters of the original characters. The background and personality of the characters do not need a lot of secondary settings and explanations. Generally speaking, in original works with a wider audience, the author's character backgrounds do not need to be written or abbreviated. But if the audience of the original work is very narrow, then for readers who have not read the original work, if the author does not write the character background, the readers will not understand the characters and background, and it will be incomprehensible. If the author writes the character background, those who have read the original work will feel that the word count is too long. 3. Finally, most of the starting points are long novels, and it is not easy to get involved in the world of Zhutian Tongren. I accidentally wrote a world in Zhutian that was very long, but it was too simple and boring like Dagang.

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It was quite enjoyable to write, but it lacked a bit of chivalry.

It's just that there are so few people watching. I'm really scared of TJ.

There is a pile on the roadside Why don't you kill Qiu Qianren and keep it for the New Year? Qiu Qianren and other forces continue to oppress good people, rape wives and daughters, and buy and sell children. If the cancer is not removed early, disgusting people will continue to remain. The wronged souls of the victims must also remember Hong Qigong, and Hong Qigong will not have a good death.

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Speaking of traveling to the next world, how does the author plan to arrange the heroine?

When I see the protagonist's weapons, I want to learn the Eight-nine Mysterious Skills, and the physical body can become a saint, and the soul can become one and become an immortal body. It's so cool, and I can truly control the world.

Um? Has the plot of Huang Rong abducting Li Mochou been changed?

Which world are you going to write about next?

Xiao Longnu, do you want to accept it? If you don't reply, the default is not to accept it.

After flipping through the catalog, we arrived at the world of Wuji Tianxia.

Which world is next after Tianlong World? Double Dragon World (Gaowu)? Or the world of wind and cloud (super martial arts)!

No, I saw a heavy sword fused to make a weapon like Yang Jian. I stopped watching it at the time. Now I picked it up and found that I still can't accept it. The entire weapon is not foldable or telescopic. It can be carried on horseback, carried into the city, stayed in an inn, eaten on its shoulder, and made a light skill leap. Except when fighting, this thing can be said to be useless at other times. I really don't understand. If you don't want to use a sword, can you use a magic sword? If you don't want to use a sword, you can use a fan. If you don't want to use a fan, you can use a flying knife. If you don't want to use a flying knife, you can use your bare hands. According to Jin Yong's writing , there are many unarmed masters. Among the seventy-two stunts, there are many empty hands, Qiao Feng empty hand, Duan Yu empty hand, Xu Zhu empty hand, Jiumozhi empty hand, Guo Jing empty hand. I find it difficult to accept this whole thing of weapons. In my eyes, martial arts is about pretending to be 13, no matter how handsome you are, you will be handsome.