China Entertainment 2006: I Come from the First Saint Demon Sect

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A place where one feels personally deficient. First, the exciting points of the protagonist's film and television endorsements and other achievements were not written down. Secondly, the protagonist pursues too much concreteness and spirituality, and always feels that the methods used are a bit vulgar and not grand enough. Thirdly, the protagonist goes around grabbing concrete objects and music spirits. After grabbing them, he doesn't find them to be of much use. They are all used for small actions. Fourthly, female celebrities feel a bit crazy when meeting the protagonist, and they are a bit homogeneous. Fifth, there are many places where the protagonist pretends to be cool, but I feel that the writing is not convincing. A few suggestions. First, add a long-term goal, such as the protagonist's goal of becoming a Taoist master and transcendence. Second, concreteness can be regarded as Tao seed. What the protagonist condenses himself can have characteristics, and he can plunder other people's to feed, and gradually change in quality. Third, you can add characteristics to the image. For example, the character of the male protagonist, the policeman, can be condensed. The temperament can be changed, so that all police officers will have a certain initial favorable impression of the protagonist when they see it. Those who have watched the movie will have more favorable impressions. Only what you condense on your own has this use. Fourth, the protagonist can be more generous in doing things. It does not necessarily have to arouse emotions to plunder. It can also be a favor and repayment. Fifth, female celebrities suggest breaking down the situation, supporting those who are lovers, and just having fun with those who are romantically involved. . . My personal opinion may not be correct!

The author's writing skills are good, the career line is also good, and the storyline is well put together. The only disconnect is the emotional line. Among the women who have slept with each other, they are all attracted to the protagonist at the beginning. The author has laid the groundwork and everything comes naturally. Then, there was nothing more. He disappeared after sleeping. There was no explanation or follow-up. Choo Ja Hyun, Xu Qing, Liu Tao, Dong Jie, Lin Chiling, all of them are left to fend for themselves. You yourself say that the entertainment industry is a Hehuan sect. If you don't arrange them well, aren't they waiting for green grass to grow on their heads and become green hair🐢? You are all on your own, and you are still afraid of starting a harem. If you have a one-night stand, what are you doing to pave the way for those women to fall in love with you? They are all concrete tools, and they will be thrown away after use.

Okay, okay, but can you continue to strengthen the protagonist's holy character˶o̴̶̷᷄‸o̴̶̷̥᷅˶? Modern novels tend to bias the protagonist's personality, which would be wrong.

I don't want to ask for money when I am building a foundation. Come to the entertainment industry.

The plot is very flat and I have no memory at all. After watching it, I only remember that the protagonist is a very useful stand-in. The magic monk is reborn like an ordinary wage earner. There is also a bit of a holy mother. The rest is gone. I wrote thirty or forty chapters for a bad movie. Who wants to watch it? Na

Author, hurry up and write. I guess in the next year, all Chinese entertainment articles will be about you.

I'll build a foundation-building real person to bravely enter the entertainment industry. I can sit at the same table with Doomsday, learn Wing Chun, and Pangu play basketball.

Entertainment Feng Shui is good and helpful for spiritual practice😏

The Demon Gate is naturally suitable for the entertainment industry, and it is quite innovative in recent entertainment articles. Come on, author.

Mo Xiu is also doing traffic-style patriotic rice writing, I can't stand it anymore

The content is mediocre and the title of the book is all about deceiving people.

How did Lust, Caution pass the review back then, what role did investors play, and how did Zhang Yimou get it to win the grand prize?

This protagonist doesn't look like someone from the Chu Sheng Sect at all. He likes to hide behind his back and take revenge like someone from the Tang Sect.

That's bullshit. It's still in the name of the birth sect.

I found it on QReading and read it in one go. I couldn't help but come over and write a review. In my teenage years, Liu Yifei and Shu Chang had a special star status: 1. They were the youngest stars I knew from the beginning, only a gold brick older than me. This is important. For example, I met Pang Bing in "Huan Zhu" too early. At that time, I was not at the age of "knowing lust and admiring Shao Ai", and I had no special thoughts. "Literary Times" is so powerful that it almost reshaped my sense of Pang Bing, but only almost. Yifei Shuchang's status is unshakable. 2. Almost all of them filmed all their representative roles before they reached adulthood (Shu Chang's Sha Niu was a little later, but she was still no more than 20 years old), so my best memories of them will always be fixed at the peak of their appearance. Even though their appearance has declined in recent years, and even body management is not very professional, "I only have one kind of heroism, which is to see her 35+ birth chart and still like her." 3. Everyone has a window period for star chasing. When I saw Deng Ziqi in Singer 2 in 2014 when she was one year younger than me, I suddenly lost interest in all film and television entertainment. From then on, I only followed the gossip in Huayu novels and complaints videos. Until some time ago, I saw "Korean City, I Have a Door in the Future" and quit after watching a few pictures (I am not familiar with Korean entertainment), but the time span of 13-25 really shocked me. So when I think about myself, I think of them again. 4. I went to Baidu again, and I also saw that Shu Chang released an album when he was 10 years old. I clicked on the theme song, and it turned out to be "Half a Home Without Mom". I really listened to it! It turns out that I had seen Shu Chang a long time ago. It was not "The Secret History of Xiaozhuang" as I thought, but "A Single-Parent Home"! That's why I got so involved when I saw the author's chapter 30 breaking Shu Chang's defenses! Because I've already had this kind of obscenity (see the attached picture for proof)!

To be honest, this setting is not very good. The main reason is because the setting of the protagonist, the First Saint Sect's foundation-building perfection, is too strong. Anyone who has read the novel of the First Saint Sect knows how outrageous this strength is in modern society. Even if the protagonist only has a little gold left, it is still outrageous. How many novels of the First Saint Sect have reached the level of a great real person? The most outrageous thing is that there are actually less than ten immortals in the Xianshu Perfection Realm. Just look at the sword sect and there is only one demon demon master. You will know how outrageous this realm is. You can beg for money right away. Are you here to join the entertainment industry? Really, you might as well give the protagonist a system directly. If the author wants to take advantage of the popularity of the Chusheng Sect, I won't say it, but the settings are really big, and the author didn't control it well!

I've read Chapter 120, and I'm a little bit upset. Could you please write less about family and relatives? It doesn't fit the character image at all.

The disciples of the First Saint became a family who loved each other.

Everyone probably prefers to see the magic method, which accounts for a larger proportion. After all, it's more fun to be the only one who can do it! There is no need to describe the plot of the film at length, I am not interested! I have to write about my interactions with women, but it's just watery and boring!

The writing is still unique due to the popularity. Let me tell you about Shen Nong. I felt bad when I saw the reincarnation of a real person with a golden nature at the beginning. Writing entertainment articles is too powerful, suppressing and disgusting. I feel that it is not handled well.

I have posted in an entertainment article before, saying that singers are not suitable as heroines (in the case of Faye Wong, I have only seen one book, "The Chinese Entertainment of Engineering Students")/one of the harem (slightly more). There are three main reasons: 1. The upper limit of the singer's appearance is low. Even Faye Wong (the female singer with the most songs in my playlist) will suffer a lot when compared with actresses across different tracks. 2. When you look at female celebrities through online articles (see where entertainment articles come from), for actors, you can naturally think of their classic roles; for singers, most of them can only think of melodies (unless the MV is very classic, but it is often because the storyline is good and the image of the singer is not good). It is very detrimental to brain supplementation. 3. Finally, there are the problems that the author encountered in these chapters: conquering actresses can be achieved naturally in a closed crew for several months (there are original arguments from the crew couple). For example, Shu Chang in the first 30 chapters is already second base; conquering female singers can almost only be achieved through daily chapters, which will inevitably lead to rhythm dragging. Especially for Faye Wong, who is known to have an awkward personality, if she wants her guide to be convincing (and the pace of the web article must be fast), it must be in an extremely special scene. To be honest, it is difficult for the author to imagine that this "no coincidence" would become a book.

I have seen water, but I have never seen water like this. You can get wet faster than a big golden retriever, and your pretense and slaps in the face are too old. You still use the writing method from more than ten years ago. This kind of crooked-mouthed dragon king-style writing is too awkward. I can't keep up with the times. Why do some people say it looks good? I was deceived.

What does it mean that the character's name is wrongly spelled, the movie title is wrong, and the comment section has pointed it out, but the author never changes it? Are you serious about your books?

Why is it suddenly popular? The problem is that you are not going to be a director or a film critic. You still miss the time when Tu Xiaobai first came out. You said "excessive force" and "a child who is afraid of being abandoned". How finely polished you were.

After all the foreshadowing of Chibi and all the hard work he helped Kurosawa, has nothing changed? Isn't there some surprising change?

The golden 12 hours have not yet come to the rescue. Probably dead.

It's useless for the protagonist to be extraordinary. Still like an ordinary person.

We're here to make trouble, and you're here to make a fuss.

It feels like the writing is a little stained.