Savior's Diary: Starting in the Caribbean

It is not recommended to write about rice. This is the starting point. The starting point is generally people who hate rice. If you are a pure Mi family member, there will always be people who are willing to read it. It will be difficult for you to mix rice in the heavens. Those who are willing to read rice will not want to read it when they see that the length of your Mi family is not long. Those who are not willing to read rice will run away as soon as they see rice. Both sides are not pleased.

It's another classic game that doesn't give you pleasure Isn't it easy for the five shipgirls from the Hurricane camp to beat the Age of Navigation? Hey, the author doesn't want to. He has to add the consumption of live ammunition and energy consumption. Isn't the Mental Cube a recognized unlimited energy source? Why did my hips stretch when I fell into your hands?

Five ship girls, the Ming Dynasty is not going sideways, I don't eat beef directly, no army in this era can fight the ship girls

Start by abusing the boss, then activate the system, withdraw money from the novice gift pack, get five more ship girls, become invincible, and after a while there will be a single-player mission. The key is what ability does the protagonist have, so that the protagonist can feel aggrieved again?

Do you like to write stories where the protagonist has grown up and is carved from the same mold? Everyone is going to die when they see a dead person? People are so fragile, a lot of them will die when they go to work.

If you are writing about a ship girl, don't write about other heroines, because the protagonist still seems to be a bitch even when there is a ship girl. How many of the heroines in the second dimension can be compared with the ship girl who is dedicated to you wholeheartedly? !

As a Caribbean fan, I was originally quite interested in being able to see the Caribbean world at the starting point, but the plot of your novel has too many flaws. As a fan of a manga and a chat group, it doesn't matter if you choose the Caribbean world at the beginning. It doesn't matter if you don't kill the protagonist at the beginning and then kill the protagonist. But you have a few ship girls at the beginning, and you can walk away in the Caribbean. Although the Caribbean world also has some bugs and artifacts, it is still a low-magic world. What else can the villains of the Caribbean world do? Even if the fifth villain is dug out in advance, he can't break the ship girls' defense. The second thing is the setting. It is normal for some unpopular settings (supplemented by novels) to be wrong, but some movie settings are wrong. There is also the setting of the late Ming Dynasty. I am too lazy to say anything. Let's not mention that the movie has a clear time position. King George II of the United Kingdom who appeared in Caribbean 4 was already born in 1683, and the Ming Dynasty has been dead for almost 40 years. Even if we ignore this point, a comprehensive comic like yours insists on writing a historical plot of the late Ming Dynasty. The sense of fragmentation is too strong, especially when the protagonist can completely push the Jurchen against the ship girl. Is this plot worth watching? I can't watch how the protagonist governs the Ming Dynasty or how he governs the world as emperor. If this is a historical novel, I won't say anything. It's a comprehensive comic. Everyone is more interested in adventures in other worlds 😅

The three golden chapters at the beginning, hey, how should I put it, I have both long-term and short-term goals, and the character design is just like that, but at least I still have a look. Revolting against the Qing Dynasty and restoring the Ming Dynasty is not unacceptable. I feel like you are going to write a bad article, and I admit it even though I hold my nose. Then in Chapter 4, you suddenly cut the scene and the ship sank. ? ? ? Then what's the point of your first three chapters? Why don't you start writing from Chapter 4? Then in Chapter 5, the ship girl came out again. ? ? ? Then there is Captain Jack again. ? ? ? There is also a Zhutian chat group. ? ? ? Hakisaku, how much do you like sewing? I can't help but ask, am I reading a historical novel, a ship girl novel, or a Black Pearl fanfic? Although it is a comprehensive comic, it is not just a mess and a bowl of soup for readers to eat. What's more, you also have a ship girl. Readers of this kind of book are very taboo about human female protagonists. In addition, there are many, many logic flaws. The meaning of the golden finger itself is even more unclear. I don't understand why the editor signed you. However, now that I have signed, I will work hard to finish the book. At least I can get a basic salary of 1,500 in the first three months. That's it, the Twelve Heavenly Kings are waiting for you, young man.

The third golden chapter has no useful information.

Um, why do comics have movie worlds like Caribbean, 2012, and Train to Busan? , The first one is okay, after all, there is magic in that world, and there are deep-sea monsters that can train the ship girl and the protagonist, but I can't understand the latter two worlds. Except that the 2012 natural disaster is very troublesome, what is the point of going to these two worlds? As for the later Chinese comics, Monster List and Ace Censor are not recommended for authors to write. Nowadays, the most popular Chinese comic fics are Fox Demon and One Person. If you have to write the Chinese comic alone, it will still be interesting.