The Age of Global Hauntings

If you have any suggestions for modifications, you can tell me. I will read every one of them

Didn't the author want us to give our opinions? I'll tell you some of my opinions. After reading some, the first point is that there are too many metaphors and adjectives used to describe the environment. I feel that the author wants to test it. This is true and unnecessary. I feel tired after reading too much. I just need to write the environment normally. The second point is that this scary atmosphere is basically described by the characters' inner feelings, but in fact, readers cannot understand the inner feelings of the characters in the book. It is useless to spend a long paragraph describing the feelings of the characters in it. Just one thing is enough. The real horror needs to be imagined by the readers themselves. In other words, it requires a sense of suspense and unknown, rather than writing everything out. This is really not easy to grasp. At present, I only see these problems. If you are good enough, you should try to change them. However, these are easy to say, but it is really difficult to express them in words. Come on, author, you can do it

This isn't just a mysterious resurgence, it's all a sense of déjà vu.

The author was inspired by the plot in Mysterious Resurrection, right?

I hate the Riddler the most. Since the protagonist is going to be exposed to weird things, he will definitely explain the basic knowledge in advance and make the protagonist look like a fool.

Is this considered fanfiction? It still only partially borrows from Mystical Resurrection, so I haven't seen much of it yet.

It feels like you wrote this using AI or polished it.

The data is too bad now, please read it carefully, otherwise it will be difficult to put it on the shelves 😭😭😭

To say it's a ghost, it's better to use "cunning". It's not something in the traditional sense. It has neither human form nor resentment. It's a rule-killing thing. This reminds me of the explanation of psychic energy. "Strange" is a manifestation of psychic interference with matter. In this way, it will not affect the underlying parameters of the material world, and it is also very reasonable. Because there is a little twist on the underlying rules, and the entire universe has to be reopened. Sharen is even simpler Macroscopically and simply, air can be used as the medium for pressurization, temperature rise, and water reduction. Microscopically, all chemical molecular bonds are broken (no solution), molecules/atoms are peeled off such as: carbon atoms are peeled off (no solution). Design a simple trick, virus trick, to attack and spread in a virus-like manner, and it does not need to comply with the triangle law, transmissibility, probability, and variability. The chance of causing S is 100% (ordinary people), and the delay in death is limited to 10 days. Transmissibility (contagion upon contact), the transmission radius is within a radius of ten meters from one person to one person Variability, it is not necessary at all, it will kill if it is passed on. It is essentially a rule to kill. The more people there are, the faster the death rate, that is, the time of death is shortened, and the greater the transmissibility, that is, the radius of transmission is increased. When the first person is s, people from a city will be connected, and then a strange realm will be formed instantly. This weirdness can disintegrate human civilization, as long as the area is not too biased. Of course there are solutions 1. The location is located in rural areas or remote areas. 2. When the infection reaches a low number, they will be killed instantly. If you treat suspense as science fiction, there seems to be no problem, and weirdness becomes a toy thrown by advanced civilization. Anyway, how can a surface civilization that cannot even interstellar travel discover the weakness of weirdness? In the Three-Body Problem, the Earthlings Sophons and Mao can't do anything (if building a shelter is not counted), what is the difference between Sophons and ghosts? It seems that the mysterious resurrection of the originator does not involve microscopic weirdness, but there are quite a lot about concepts, such as prison leaves.

I feel that the progress is too fast. I should write copies within copies so that I can still write longer.