Mortal: My Master Is Baohua

Talents also suggested cultivating demons, but they forgot why Baohua was in the human world at the beginning. Cultivating demons, ascending to the demon world, and giving away people's heads

After reading about thirty chapters, I feel that I have the following problems. The protagonist is very pretentious. It is said that the characterization of the protagonist comes from the author's mentality, that is, the author wants to kill everyone in this world based on mortals. I will not comment on this. Second, Baohua. In the setting of Baohua, she exists in the form of her true body and possesses the strength of the Queen of Yuan, but her true body is seriously injured and needs to fall into a deep sleep. In other words, the protagonist is equivalent to Baohua's porter, taking her to wander. So there is a paradox. Baohua doesn't have that much time, or in other words, during her awakening, she should ask the protagonist to perform more efficient resource acquisition, and she doesn't even need to acquire any resources (with half of her assets, she should be richer than the ten Great Jin sects) - she will not pay attention to the Tainan Xiaohui, the bloody forbidden land, and the invasion of demons at all, and will even stop the protagonist from participating! , If it is to allow the protagonist to refine his heart in the mortal world, then he should not have the protagonist build a foundation or even form a pill so early! Third, the protagonist's appearance changes the timeline. This setting is actually disgusting. The protagonist is happy, the author is happy, but the readers are very unhappy. For example, the original work... I won't mention it. In the anime, Hehuan ranks first among the Six Demonic Sects, Yuling is second, and Ghost Spirit is at the bottom. But later, the Demon Flame Sect took over Yuanwu, and the Ghost Spirit took over the Yue Kingdom. However, neither of these two factions appeared on the battlefield of the Yue Kingdom, nor did they have any interests in the borders of the two countries. There is only one possibility, and that is that there are more important resources and interests waiting for them. So on the frontal battlefield, there is only the Ghost Spirit Sect (note: this is the result of reasoning based on the anime), and the appearance of Old Demon Yunlu is more for Hong Fu (animation performance), rather than the war between the Ghost Spirit Sect and the Yue Kingdom sects (if it is the original work, there are actually many national sects including Yuanwu Kingdom) So, even if there are slight changes, other demon sects can deploy one or two masters to deal with it, and it is impossible to cause large-scale changes in the direction of attack of the other five major demon sects. Also, in the anime, apart from the fact that Spirit Beast Mountain and the Yuling Sect have long been in contact, Tianque Castle was a traitor in the middle, but in the early stages it was considered the backbone of the resistance against the invasion of the devil. And according to the original work, the seven sects are built on the corpses of good and evil, both good and evil, and once foreign enemies appear, they will fight back together. Therefore, in this world of underworld cultivators, Taoism and appeasement policies will not appear at all. Even if the world line changes, even if the protagonist is an anomaly, it should not destroy other people's IQ, nor should it destroy the background of this world.

Is Mortal anime so popular? There are more fans

The plot of the anime is written as a book. In the original work, Dong and Yun have nothing to do with each other. If you read the original work, you will know that her holiday is the monk in Huang Fenggu Feng's family. Come on 🤭

Seeing that now in Chapter 55, I can practice but I don't practice. The fake elixir doesn't form, so I can't continue to practice and still run around. It's totally illogical. He knew that a lot of Nascent Souls were worried about him, but they just couldn't find a place to practice safely. Now the fake elixir can kill the formed elixir. Can you kill the Nascent Soul after forming the elixir? Otherwise, you can retreat calmly. So you still need water to practice. Just for the sake of the plot, I wander around and wait for danger, then pull up and down and ride.

It's almost gone, and it's still wandering around during the most dangerous time. If you don't get rid of the elixir well, you have to drag down your emotions. If the mortal flow is really written like this, let's wait for some of it to be lost.

This kind of world of underworld cultivation. It is poisonous if you care about your family. In the case of family and oneself. Even pigs know how to choose. Conditionally. By the way, I wish to bless my family and let them talk about it. Even if you don't care about life and death for your family, you should pull him down. Besides, the protagonist has no parents. Two have no close brothers. San has never enjoyed family resources. Family is dispensable. At most, he will avenge him later. He could also plagiarize the enemy's family and sect with good reason. Make a fortune. It can also be used to refine corpses. Lianban. Kill several birds with one stone

Forgot to mention, anime is just a piece of shit

Don't be led astray by the adapter's point of view

Han Li has three wives, your protagonist takes two, and Han Li has two wives. Can't you write about other women? The anime Han Liren is pretty good, why would the protagonist cheat on him?

Don't be a holy mother, don't lick the dog, you've traveled through time and you're still a coward.

The protagonist's cultivation is too slow and his combat power is suppressed.

The author has seen mortals? Only the six poles have incarnations

The richest woman in Luan Xinghai doesn't accept the author, who are you going to give it to? ?

To force hatred, why not kill a few Avatars?

He has a low level of cultivation and can jump around with the help of his backstage.

The one who plays Hongfu on TV is Liu Yan. Nowadays, I don't seem to see many Hongfu actors. I'm not talking about the plot, but the image 🙂

Come on and write. It's not bad. Just don't use Baohua as a nanny. Baohua is actually quite cold. Just let her keep an insurance policy so that she can possess her from a distance at any time.

No, the pace is too fast. In the last chapter, we were still in Tiannan, and now we are having a good time in the Sea of ​​Stars.

There is no harem

"Mortal Plum Ningxiu Immortal Biography"

Arrange two old women in palace attire to serve as concubines for the protagonist.

Is it fixed? Or should I add it later?

Okay, okay, I'll work harder. I hope this one can be written well. The last one was pretty good, but it's a pity that the second one was unfinished. There are also many wonderful stories in the spiritual world.

The introduction is wrong. The person with the incarnation is Liuji. In the original work, Baohua did not have an incarnation.

Can I have a million words at this rate?🤭