Taiyin True Immortal

666, You are so damn good at killing an enemy and then you have to fight him for how many days? What's the point here? How? You still want to influence the enemy, right? After the reformation is completed, then kill? This author is also a genius. He has come up with all kinds of methods just to keep the word count down. Is this all the rubbish he has been doing these past few days? Abandoned

It's really too wordy and pointless. I have written some water characters that are not there, and I have reached the foundation-building stage. I also work on Chinese medicine to treat pneumonia, and I also engage in theory.

The writing is quite good, but the content is like a positive energy composition for junior high school students. You have to skip half a chapter to read it

The world in the novel is full of ghosts and monsters that harm people. . . Why are there still ordinary people? What world view. .

The last few chapters are just like copying and pasting from Baidu Encyclopedia. I have no desire to read them at all. It feels like a waste of time just to read them.

The villain dies because he talks too much. Moreover, this supporting role does not have any highlights. We are not interested in his life history.

If you have invested, if you like to watch classics like Cultivation and Immortality, just read it and turn to the last page. Then you can sign the contract by voting for recommendations. Otherwise, the investment will fail and it will be a waste of time.

The writing style is okay, it can be regarded as a breath of fresh air, but the sense of substitution is too poor. There is a lack of psychological description of the protagonist throughout the whole process. Maybe it is written from a God's perspective, but the beauty of God's perspective cannot be written. There is no delicate action and narration to replace the psychological description. The atmosphere of the whole story is depressing, and there are no soothing chapters. It is like watching a robot. In summary, the protagonist has only bones and no flesh and blood. The whole story is tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it.

There are really fewer and fewer authors with perseverance

The writing is very detailed, but the main character is too bad. He is obviously a time traveler and there are many things that I can't understand.

I saw this book again. It's too compact, with conflicts one after another and no buffering.

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The words are fluent and somewhat humanistic, but the writing is too tense and lacks room for relaxation and thinking. Too involved in the world, without a proper description of the superstructure.

The latest chapter is not good to read. It's the same thing as Heavenly Court again. From personal cultivation to being a backstage person.

These few recent chapters are so good that I don't even want to click on them when I see them.

It doesn't matter if Chapter 32 is completely deleted. Chapters 57 to 65 kill a little brat and preach the entire story. I don't know what the author was thinking. The advantage is that the protagonist of this book practices spiritual practice and walks with the people. He practices Taiyin but is not high. I hope it can be written better!

Isn't it expressly stipulated by civilization that eunuchs are not allowed to be produced? Why do you still do such inhumane things? The eunuch is pitiful and shameful

I feel like the plot went a bit off track when it comes to eradicating the plague, but it's not so much that it's a direct cut, right?

Are classical immortals so aggressive?

I'll give you two monthly passes, please give me more

I can only talk about the flow of literature, the flow of dialogue, and the flow of talk. If you like watching this kind of thing, you can continue to watch it.

? I left it for a while and didn't look at it directly, right?

It's a very good book that suits my taste. I hope the author will continue to work hard and add more books.

The writing is getting better and better. Come on, author, more and more! It's not enough!