God's Heir - a Commission from the World

Crying to death, no one is watching. 😭The only option is to use the knife 🤓

Let's watch and comment on each other. The author's setting is very interesting. God is a candidate. God does not necessarily want to save the world or do any great deeds. Saving some small regrets in history is a pretty good highlight. In fact, you can arrange several more candidates to form a group similar to a running game. Everyone uses various methods to achieve the same goal, which also adds some competitive relationships, which will make the story more attractive. ps: Let's complain about the current employment environment. After all, even security jobs are competitive now, let alone God. The author's short story is quite interesting, and it can be seen that the writing is quite good, but the content needs to be refined more, and the protagonist's personal story line hopes to be clearer. The above are just some personal opinions. The author does not need to take them to heart. Please read my book and give me some suggestions. Even if you are in a bad mood, it is okay to curse a few words. Come on, and thanks.

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It's really nice to watch😰

I haven't finished reading it yet, so let's draw a conclusion first It's very good. I think you have a very good idea. If you polish it, you may have a chance to sign it. But I am talking about the next one 😁 The setting is great and the writing is well controlled. Writing can serve the plot. Let me talk about the biggest problem first, you have to remove the traces of AI polishing. In the third chapter, the traces are too heavy. Study the following text, a non-key sentence with two or more modifiers. Just kill him. Otherwise, this is really not a humane text. That's all for now, continue to comment after reading.