Gou Earns Entries in the Survival Game

The guarantee given in the tenth chapter of the first quarter Have you eaten the tenth chapter of the second quarter? Should I say you have a poor memory or a good memory?

The early writing was mediocre, why were everyone else so awesome, the main character was just ordinary, and there was no explanation, so it felt confusing.

Why the Son of the Wind was taken in and why he was seriously injured is very inexplicable.

We can't all be cynical, he wants to harm me, he wants to harm me, or a psychotic protagonist. It's undeniable that some of the characters are well-written, but they are too deviated from the actual situation. They have no desire or pursuit. They only think about climbing to the top and killing and killing. It's all the same. I'm tired of watching it.

The protagonist has an average IQ, and his shield value can obviously be stacked, but he is too lazy to stack it. In the end, he has to rely on luck to save his life.

The copywriting is pretty good. Can someone like Shen Nong give me a few words?

Why do I feel that many plots are inexplicable and do not resemble the normal development logic of an event.

The thought comes out as soon as it comes out. There are no patches. The data written in the front leg is wrong?

It's okay, I can read it, but some things are confusing.

Here you go, the first few chapters are exactly the same as a book by JJ.

The protagonist is a newbie and has inherent disadvantages, so why not start from the same starting line?

It's not bad. I want to encourage the author who has potential. After all, there is nothing poisonous about it. At least his outlook is similar to that of a normal person. In the end, he wrote more carefully. There are still some shortcomings. Although I am not a professional, I can say a few words. The facial expressions are a little obvious. Everyone in the sisters and the gathering place are peaceful. Like the two big guys at the beginning, I feel the author's efforts to distinguish the characters. But you can shape those who talk less, and you should learn how to shape those who talk more.

The first dungeon has 50 chapters, and the second dungeon has 50 chapters and is still unfinished. I thought it was pretty good at the beginning, but it is getting more and more inexplicable at the end. Isn't it getting longer and longer as I write it? Anyway, I'm keeping it up 😅

Good guy, I've been raising it for a while and it's getting messed up. The early stage is really good, stocking up and building a home is good, and the golden finger entry meat pigeon is also good. The problem is that the longer you write the dungeon, the longer you write it, so you have to keep it. A dungeon really can't be that long. Thirty or fifty chapters is the limit.

It looked fine from the front. The Son of the Wind can accept everything. After these latest pictures went to other worlds, he saw that that world had high technology and cameras, and he was purifying things that others could not purify in the cameras. Pure cerebral palsy, no matter what happens to him later, he will just put his life in other people's hands.

The plot is getting more and more inexplicable 😅 Yang Yang Shu!

It feels like a lot of plots written by AI are missing, and it looks like AI was devoured later in the writing.