Pirate: Volunteer! Luffy Is Calling You to Get on the Boat.

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Even if Demon Slayer doesn't kill demons, he won't be a pirate. Of course, I haven't watched Demon Slayer, but I know a lot about it from various fans.

My understanding of Giyu comes entirely from Uchiha Giyu's book

For those who don't know what Tomiku Volunteers are,...

Boss, boss, when will our volunteers treat Yang Guo? The value will surely increase by then! Increased dramatically! Explosive increase! Mouth too.

The author is still thinking about his group portrait flow, and even messed up the order of appearance of all the characters in the original plot, and refused to give more perspective to the protagonist group. The group portraits written by fans, even the famous ones behind the scenes, are a lot of crap. The focus of the problem lies in the handling of the protagonist. The fast pace of the novel requires too much for the excitement. How to bring in and shape a character, and trigger the climax of the plot within a reasonable length. Without these two brushes, can't we write the changes brought about by the protagonist well? Those who read the fanfic will have a rough impression of the plot of the original work. I ask you to write about the fanfic because you have a high level of advice, not just to make impromptu graffiti. If the non-main characters are not important, just mention them in one go. The content you wrote is just foreshadowing before the climax, the bullet used to fire the gun. Rambling here and there does not contribute to the main line in any way. It does not provide any growth to the protagonist, and it is not even a literary novel. Once or twice can be regarded as enriching the content of the plot and complementing the image of the protagonist. If it is done too many times, it will be a mess for the audience to watch it with their own cameras. Do you think Brother Li is playing LOL? If you want to write fan fiction, then write fan fiction, and if you want to write group portraits, write group portraits. It's not like there are no well-written fan portraits next door. For example, there are some works about Naruto and other timelines. There is no protagonist or even the protagonist disappears after the beginning of the story. But it revolves around a core event that runs throughout and is ongoing. In the final analysis, it is such a big place, so it can be focused very well, and the characters' behaviors are all strongly related. Where are the pirates? Do readers care about what unrelated characters are doing in places thousands of miles away at the same time? What is the significance of their appearance? Inexplicably, this is an originally good pirate fanfic. The author doesn't even know the core positioning of his novel. He tricked readers who like the character Giyu into killing him. In fact, the amount of pen and ink given is less than the sum of several unrelated characters. What on earth was he thinking? !

Do you also want to make a name for yourself in the era of great repression?

It was too overwhelming to fight. In order to suppress the fighting force, Yiyong began to focus on learning other breathing techniques, but forgot about the other two pieces of the 3-piece set - Transparent World and He Dao. In the previous battle, it was entirely possible to use the He Dao to break the lion's head and severely injure the Golden Lion, and defeat Moria with the World Transmitter Box, instead of dealing with Breath of Wind and Breath of Thunder, which was completely putting the cart before the horse. Water Pillar Yong, should continue to follow the path of water breathing and self-creation. Other breathing techniques are at most a reference, or a combination of special skills, don't go all the way.

Several strengthening directions for Giyu The first is to change the sword (after all, the Nichirin sword is an item from the Demon Slayer world. I feel it is better not to change it. It has its own characteristics. It is also best to change the team uniform and keep it. It would not feel good if it was smashed in the world of One Piece.) Or strengthen the sword or give the sword a Devil Fruit The second one is to add Devil Fruit to restore the body like a broken hand. Level, but a person who plays with water breathing and can't swim always feels like he has a sense of humor Third, the water breathing is strengthened into a situation like fishman karate that can control water. Demon Slayer's breathing methods are all special effects, but in a world with so much water and vapor like One Piece, some chemical reactions can completely occur to upgrade the level. Doesn't the Revolutionary Army have a teacher of fishman karate? Just say that when I saw Suihu, I seemed to be able to control water and fish-man karate, so I ran over to upgrade Suihu. The fourth one, transparency, is about the same as the sight color in the pirate world. It can also be two in one. After all, transparency can directly see the muscles and internal organs and hide one's breath. It seems that the sight color is not good enough. The gap between Kai and One Piece is too big. In the early stage of One Piece, Giyuu can be roughly equivalent to a level of iron swordsman with high attack and low defense and low health (compared to the various sit-ups in One Piece, all the humans in Demon Slayer are squishy). But in the middle and later stages, it is the flying and slashing mages who are starting to become more fantasy. Except for one Feng brother who relies on breathing magic to cut sword energy alone, the others are either blood ghost techniques or simple special effects

I don't know how to choose the growth and strengthening route in the later period, and I even lost one hand. After the decisive battle, Giyuu's strength was okay in the early stages of One Piece. The gap in combat power between the two worlds became more obvious later on. Simply practicing domineering and using swordsmanship was too similar to Zoro.

The subject matter is good, but the writing skills are not very good

When will Robin appear? I want to see the scheming big sister teasing the innocent and brave girl!

In every sense it should be in Yang Persimmon's book

Was the author transported to Infinite City? Even less

There used to be vigilantes running for Naruto, now there are vigilantes running for pirates, there won't be vigilantes running for Shinigami in the future🐶

I hope Zoro can be more handsome, Usopp's desperate rescue more extreme, Luffy more charming, Sanji more graceful, and the friendship with Vivi more profound 😁😁😁 That's all I ask, but it's not too much 🤓🤓🤓 ps: Attached is a monthly pass

Seriously, even if Giyuu loses one of his hands, he can't be so weak, right?

I originally thought I would read it after a while, but why didn't I update it again? It's hard to find a good book. Please don't be a eunuch.

I have read a lot of One Piece fanfiction, and I have been following this one for a few months. I seem to have found a bit of the feeling I had when reading comics. One thing to say, this is not a perfect fan work, but the flaws do not hide the advantages. I can tell that the author is a very thoughtful person, and a lot of the content does not follow the flow of the original work, which makes me very curious about the development of the plot later. (If Ace is written to death, I will find someone to mess with you) By the way, what is commendable is that the author did not reduce the Straw Hats to background just because the protagonist is a volunteer. This is a good point. Even Usopp, who was marginalized in other works, is vivid and real here. This may be what a group portrait should look like! I really like the interaction between the volunteers and the Straw Hats. I can't be the only reader who prefers to watch daily life, right? !

Also, I saw that the author was stuck in publishing at 23:59:59 several times. He was so busy meeting the deadline. OMG 🤦‍♀️

It looks pretty good so far. Generally speaking, it follows the ship, but there are some changes in many plots, and the portrayal of Yiyong is also in line with the original work.

There was already something wrong at the beginning... Giyuu had already cut his hair short after Mugen City, and besides, Giyuu's left ear has become deaf...

Come on, author, I hope there will be no female protagonist 😭

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I'm thinking about one thing, if Giyong and Robin really get along, will the height difference be a bit too big?