Douluo, Immortal Lord of All Dharma in This World

This author took advantage of Jiang Mingzi's popularity and even made Xianjun OOC

This book will not be on the shelves, let alone a member. I also know that my writing is not good. I have read almost everyone's comments and sorted out the questions, so I can learn from experience. However, there is really no way to change this book at this point. It would be better to open a new book when the time comes. But if the author is rubbish, no matter how good the story is, it will be written as rubbish, so this book will basically not be cut off. I have to bite the bullet and finish it, otherwise the next book will still be rubbish and unreadable. This book should be regarded as a lesson learned, foreshadowing, characterization, storyline... You have to learn these things. What you think in your mind is one thing, but writing it down on paper is another thing~ Everyone is welcome to comment, leave messages, and make suggestions. It doesn't matter if you don't want to read it. It has nothing to do with the readers. It is a question of the author's level. If you have time, just support him and see if the author is still alive. For those of you who don't have time but like Sun and Moon, I'll see you in the next book~

If you want to write about Jiang Mingzi, you must first know that Jiang Mingzi was invincible the moment he was born. He was already covered by the magical power of Chang Shimingzi. He is an invincible writer.

It's a pity that it's the Holy Spirit hook, otherwise it would be pretty good.

It's just average, the feeling of fragmentation is too strong

Let me give you some popular science: Xiao Xiao is called a pocket beauty in the outer courtyard, while He Caitou is a black uncle.

Seeing the cover of the work gave me a sweet feeling

I only read it as boring, without any interest.

I don't recommend it. I've been reading this book for a long time and I don't know what I'm doing. I guess it follows the original plot and often creates some awesome characters. The protagonist has a strong background. His parents are both existences that can make Douluo Continent tremble. He himself is also an invincible existence. There is no need to push the plot. He is childish and aloof.

There is another thing. When Akiko was still practicing in the early years, he liked to call himself Xiaoye 🤭. He is arrogant but approachable. If you praise him, he will be good to you and will accept soft things rather than hard ones.

There is a lot of foreshadowing, so many original characters, but the result is still the same as the original plot, which is all water.

Chapters 19 and 17 are all about Huo Yuhao, and it's hard to distinguish the priorities.

Endless Shennong, come out! ! !

After reading Chapter 15, I don't know whether the protagonist is Jiang Mingzi or Huo Yuhao. Huo Yuhao has too many scenes, and Jiang Mingzi is like an NPC. It's so messy.

If you enter the Holy Spirit Cult, you can drive the evil soul masters to plunder resources and rob the soul masters for you to practice. If you retreat, you can directly use the cultists to practice. It doesn't matter whether you are innocent or not. Personally, as long as you join the Holy Spirit Cult, you are already defined as an evil soul master. When others scold you and kill you, they don't care whether you are a good person in the Holy Spirit Cult. In a big sense, as long as Tang San is solved, there will naturally be no plan for a ten thousand year plan. No matter how many sacrifices are made, can it be compared to one percent of the death of a ten thousand year plan? They still have to thank you. Of course, those who are ungrateful naturally do not need to be saved. If they die, they will die. Besides, if you were beaten to death, it would naturally not be considered an injustice to you.

After reading about 30 chapters, I felt that many of the original plots of Douluo could be changed, but just by following the original plot, I wanted to get some resources, but I couldn't get the big deal at all, especially after I saw that I brought so many titled Douluo and ended up not even getting the Snow Emperor 😰

It's said that you can paint a tiger from a cat and a tiger from a tiger. You are pretty good at painting a grasshopper from a tiger. What did you write at the beginning? There are a lot of names you have never heard of after one chapter. Forget it if you are just a passerby, they are all supporting characters. It's a mess. You can persuade more than half of the people to leave at the beginning.

The character selection is too bad Jiang Mingzi is a niche person, and the subject of your writing is Douluo. There are too many Douluo fans, and there are too many meal replacements. Not many people know Jiang Mingzi He is an extremely unpopular character. I don't know what to expect.

The protagonist is like a new recruit in it, the main plot is purely based on the original work, and the protagonist is like an NPC

To be honest, I can't write about anyone. Jiang Mingzi, Jiang Mingzi is still too comprehensive.

I've recommended it. It's getting better.

It's better for the time traveler to have Gao Haoguang's magical power. I think that would be more interesting.

A hammer in the east and a mallet in the west. I don't think you, the author, can understand this writing.

I'm lying to you, even if it's free, I'd hate it 🙂

Isn't the author afraid of being sanctioned by the law of causality?😰

Recommend a new book on Douluo. The protagonist studies the theory of martial arts and the cultivation of the soul. "Douluo: The soul of martial arts, I am the master"

Borrow the precious place to recommend the book "Douluo: Martial Soul Essence, I am the Master" The original Martial Soul is full of soul power, not brainless, reasonable and refreshing, exploring the Martial Soul Soul Ring is half original, half research