Comics, They Are All My Wings!

The plot is good, but the writing style is a bit unfamiliar, half vernacular and half classical, and the integration is not very appropriate. It feels like writing prose but not complete prose. . .

The voltage of 220v can't defeat the electrician of 250v I can tell whether there is electricity or not by just touching it! Ulbian, you have regressed!

And it's soul piercing. How much do you people hate your own body, or do you think it's exciting to play with other people's bodies?

The subject matter is very good, but I really can't stand your writing style. It's weird.

The cat smell is too strong and the style is funny, which is a bit unacceptable. The protagonist can prepare a shelter in the later stage, become self-sufficient, and learn advanced technologies such as science and magic. Otherwise, there is no security at all like this. Big things pop up from behind (Beng II, Warhammer, Cthulhu, Day of Wrath, etc.), And the protagonist can only eat them. Otherwise, in the later stage of writing, I can only write about daily life, which is too boring.

What kind of manga do you think you are? You are at most a fan of a few second games combined.

What about the picture that fights with Universiade and refuses to travel through time?

Well, I don't want to talk about other things. I just want to say that the author is really having fun in his fantasy world.

Like the title, I think many people are struggling with the issue of soul travel, but actually the author wrote it very well. Yes, I am not being ironic, because this book is mainly about going to various anime worlds to open harems. The biggest attraction is that readers take on the role of the protagonist and imagine that they are the protagonist. But! The protagonist has taken on someone else's body, which makes some readers who want to take on the role of the protagonist uncomfortable and feel uncomfortable. Actually, these are not the key points. There is only one key point, and that is that the author updates too slowly. In fact, as long as you, the author, write an outline, use a writer's assistant, and write one hundred chapters and two hundred thousand words, there will always be an audience to read it. But! But the author spends his limited time talking to readers? The author actually wants to educate readers! ? Please🙏🏻, you write novels to screen readers. Readers who feel bad can't bear to say a few words and you ignore them and leave. But the more you ignore them, the more people will come to confront you. Do you still have time to write?

Write more, the cat book is too short

It feels like reading a historical text 🤔