Across the Sea of ​​​​Stars, Awaken the S-Level Mechanical Talent at the Beginning

Has no one read the introduction to the book? "Reborn from a hundred years ago" is obviously written backwards!

The author said that it is an imitation of the Super Mechanic. Indeed, many obvious things have a visual feel, but they have been slightly changed. However, some things have been changed, but they are no longer so reasonable. For example, the protagonist goes to work as a porter in a bakery in order to steal the mechanical drawings. He shows off his mechanical maintenance ability at the beginning (in Super God, Technician Han goes to a mechanical repair shop to show off his maintenance ability), then changes the store type and the position he is applying for, and the sense of inconsistency comes out. You have such advanced maintenance ability, and you still say that you just want to find a job to support yourself? Wouldn't it be better to go directly to the mechanical maintenance center? Moreover, the boss said to the black market businessman that I am the only one who can repair this energy core in the city, and the protagonist will come out and let it slip... It is too obvious that he has other agendas There is no reasonable tact of Technician Han, and he takes advantage of the situation. Does the author think that also writing about the machine repair shop where the boss and his daughter live in seclusion would be considered plagiarism? So you changed your skin a little bit? But I might as well change it to something more thorough. The result of half the change is that the plot seems stiff and unreasonable, and it can also be seen at a glance by readers like me who have watched The Super Mechanic. For me, there is no difference between half-skinning and no-skinning of this bridge section. I don't mean to scold the author. In fact, the writing style is passable and readable. I just want to talk about what I think is a bad imitation. I personally think there is nothing wrong with imitation, but the structure and creativity of imitation are fine. The specific plot must have its own innovation. Otherwise, it is better to write fan fiction directly and directly attract fans of the original work

You yourself said that you imitated the super god mechanic, and the eunuch, imitating his eunuch, right?

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Since I imitated it, the author might as well give the protagonist a different career advancement route, which contains many potential late-stage careers!

Didn't I say it was cut? Why is there still an update 🤤

In fact, there is no need to write about mechanics. In my opinion, the world view of "Super Mechanic" is already very complete. You can completely change the genre when writing fan fiction, such as the supernatural system or the magic system. I think there really could be one for the superpower department.

This is too flamboyant. It has a retro aesthetic. This kind of novel is no longer popular nowadays. . . . You only write when there is no traffic

How was it cut? Suddenly I found that the notification update did not pop up😫

What does this book say? It was a certain author who took advantage of this novel, and then came in to read it. Some of the plots in the early part were very stiff, not natural and rounded enough, and lacked logic, but it gradually became more interesting later on. The author's improvement is obvious, and the author should not take it for granted, but should occasionally review his own book from the reader's perspective to avoid being too aggressive.

The plot is indeed not rounded enough, and it feels a bit like a novice novel. I think before I think about the future, and I don't think about the future when I think about the future. Can you watch it?

It was really clever to go on a mission with Qin Miaomiao and actually ask Qin Miaomiao, who had never drank before, to drink. What if Qin Miaomiao drank one glass or was allergic to alcohol?

You can read it without thinking, it's a standard novel about everyone's intelligence.

Why didn't it update when I started watching it? It took me several days to find out 😭😭😭

Let me tell the author about the equipment upgrade route First of all, the exoskeleton is at the basic level from the most basic non-power-assisted exoskeleton to the power-assisted exoskeleton. Further up is the exoskeleton armor (note that the exoskeleton armor is similar to a crab shell. When worn, it is similar to ancient knight armor. It has power assistance, but is limited to running and jumping. It ends with a glider or jetpack on the back. For details, please refer to the nano armor in Crysis). The above are two branches: powered armor and large powered exoskeletons. The former has thick armor and is not low in flexibility, such as the power armor of the Fallout series and the power armor of the Astartes monks in 40K. The latter prefers to use heavily armed exoskeletons, such as the large exoskeletons with machine guns in The Matrix. On top are power armor and large exoskeleton armor. The former has thicker armor and integrates a full set of combat systems, such as the 40K Brother Astartes' Terminator heavy power armor. The latter is mostly plug-in equipment for power armor, such as the 40K Centurion system and Iron Man's Hulkbuster armor. Other branches are exoskeleton power armor and exoskeleton construction. The former has more powerful comprehensive combat capabilities, such as Iron Man's Mark series suit and the Strong Breeding Armor series of biological strong breeding armor and the Space Knight series of exoskeleton suits. The latter is used to strengthen the former, such as the giant colonization equipment of the strong colonization armor series. Weapons range from gunpowder chemical energy propelled ammunition to electromagnetic Gauss accelerated ammunition (StarCraft Marine Gunner's machine gun), from rocket propelled ammunition (40K bolt rounds) to plasma energy ammunition (40K plasma hand cannon), from laser beam irradiation (40K laser cannon) to concentrated energy projection (StarCraft Yamato Cannon). For mechanics, drones and mechanical dogs are better low-end options in the early stage. Mechanical soldiers are more embodied in heavy weapon projection platforms rather than close combat. Mechanical octopus is a better melee platform. Having a gun and using it is the truth, keeping a distance and blasting the opponent to pieces is the way to go.

It has not been updated for a while and I have completely forgotten the plot. To be honest, it would be best to start a new one.

Dead? , I have already made a habit of it

Like the title, which book did you write about intimacy?