Cultivation of Immortality: Start with a Fighting Cock

There are really very few exotic beasts nowadays. I think this book is pretty good. Especially this title.

The protagonist of the finale

The current trend is that the author wants to make the protagonist stronger but is afraid that it will be too strong and the combat power will be overwhelmed. However, the plug-in is strong, but even if it suppresses the protagonist, the protagonist actively challenges other chickens or kills monsters and kills without counting the number of times, which already overwhelms the combat power. In addition, the protagonist's participation in the plot is still very low, and there is very little interaction between the protagonist and the characters. There are more pages devoted to the characters of the Zhao family than to the protagonists. If this trend continues, the best thing that will happen to this book is that it will end up being mediocre.

I didn't expect that so many guys with erroneous views would pop up all at once. Mr. Zhao [I don't know] the protagonist's kindness to the Zhao family, but he is still willing to sacrifice his life for the protagonist. And in the eyes of Mr. Zhao, that blow would kill the protagonist, so he risked his life to save him. This is grace, the undisputed life-saving grace. In contrast. The protagonist [knows] the kindness of Mr. Zhao, but still remains the niece of the Tauren family, still in a deceptive way. This is also a well-documented way of repaying kindness with hatred!

Author, you are simply trying to kill yourself. Even if the harem is widely opened, not many people can accept this kind of flower-picking and thieves-style way of recruiting girls. This is so demoralizing. Let me just say this so you can do it yourself.

Now that I have been directly poisoned, you said that you have transformed into another person and you have done such a thing, why not just write an annulment?

I said, chickens don't just eat rice, they also eat bugs.

It was originally a good grass, but it turned out to be poisoned in Chapter 2 today. . .

If you think there are any other interesting chickens, please tell us in the comment area.

First, everyone said that Mr. Zhao was kind and kind to the protagonist. Youen will take the protagonist to a cockfight? I'll put you in a cage and let you fight to the death. Are you willing? Mr. Zhao Erye bought the protagonist originally for cockfighting, but this became a problem for the protagonist. Well, he originally used the protagonist as a consumable. What happened? Are you being abused? Second, what does it mean that Mr. Zhao is kind in blocking attacks? Why didn't Mr. Zhao forget to block the attack from others? Why didn't he block the attack for himself? That's because the protagonist has created a lot of wealth for the Zhao family. If it weren't for the protagonist, the Zhao family would have been destroyed countless times. Why do everyone feel that the protagonist should owe others? Are any of you prone to masochism?

Why are you being scolded in these chapters of Marrying Someone? It's because the plot setting is not good enough. Come on, let me revise it for you. You can increase your title through cockfighting, wouldn't it be better if you just add a [human cock] title before getting married? Human Rooster: The protagonist can obtain a male human clone. The clone can be condensed by the system, or the host can choose a person who died within a stick of incense as the clone. Then Zhao Kun died of illness a day or two before the wedding due to poor health, and the protagonist took the opportunity to possess his body as a clone. Then move the settings of the Nascent Soul's remnant soul to his elder brother Zhao Qian, and even use the remnant soul to absorb the power of medicine to explain the plot of the eldest brother's failure in blood training. At this point, messing with other people's wives is no longer a problem, because I am really Zhao Kun. Finally, there is also a branch line of human clones, so there are many more plots that can be written. The plot is reasonable and the logic is smooth, done!

Cultivation of immortality: Start by making chicken! This name will definitely trick a group of people into coming and killing them!

TMD the author wrote a very disgusting plot. Mr. Zhao blocked the protagonist's attack and became a paraplegic. The protagonist TMD gave up the wife of Mr. Zhao's nephew on the wedding night!

It stinks so bad. Does the protagonist lose even basic morals when he is reincarnated into a chicken? She went to sleep when the system issued a task. It smelled so bad that I was persuaded to leave.

It depends on what you write later. If you continue like this, you will definitely become a street or eunuch.

Is this the end of the update? Not even a notification now? I think the current author is still doing too well

It's better not to write the fighting scenes. It's so embarrassing that they even start fighting, and we still talk about it. If you do it, don't push it, you'll act like a fool. The previous one can fight against the third level, and the next one cannot beat the second level. This is the contrast. Otherwise, the fighting scene would have been just brushed off. It was so awkward and stupid to write.

The main reason is that the author's character creation is really amazing. The protagonist in his novel is a two-faced chicken who can act according to the circumstances. The author created the characters of the Zhao family. Each character is very unique and not stereotyped, and none of them are particularly evil people. But the author's protagonist, who lives in such an atmosphere, is an image that is difficult to comment on. When he needs to protect this place, he will take whatever the wind brings and just want to run if he encounters some difficulties. The key is that this section is meaningless, because he ran back to save the dog later. In other words, the author's purpose in writing this paragraph is to create a duplicitous image of the protagonist? It's just that I don't understand it very well. I haven't seen the back part yet, so I don't know whether the author created such an image of the protagonist to serve the plot behind it?

Maybe something happened to the author, the updates were very stable before.

With the author's writing style, if the protagonist dominates and becomes the great demon, this book may still be a high-quality book, and it should be like this now.

Change the cover, it's weird, and come back and write the novel quickly, don't stop updating it as soon as you leave the novice village, I'm really impressed, write the first 100 or so chapters clearly, with such details

I think it looks great, but it's a pity that it wasn't updated as soon as it came out of Novice Village.

Hey, it looks good 🤔

The first 20 or 30 chapters are indeed well written and can retain people, but from the time the Zhou family entered the scene and started to deeply portray the protagonist, it became very uncomfortable to watch. I gave up when I saw this. When the neighbor's house was on fire, I helped carry two buckets of water. I think most people thought it was normal, but the protagonist just wanted to stay away quickly to avoid burning himself. The three views were inconsistent. It's very uncomfortable. I think my outlook is similar to that of most readers who have received nine years of compulsory education, so this book is like what I expected, because the author wanted to portray a rational, calm protagonist who puts his own safety first, but instead he portrayed a cold, heartless and inhumane protagonist, even though the protagonist is indeed not a human being, haha. The most important reason here is that the novice boss arranged by the author is too weak. It is obvious that the chance of winning two-on-one with Rhubarb is very high, but the protagonist only wants to run. If it is two-on-one, the chance of winning is very small. It is understandable that the protagonist just runs. From my personal point of view, I wrote so much just because it was a pity that the beginning was really good. I hope the author gets better and better.

I think the results are good and the writing is good. I ordered them all. Why is it dead?

It's quite interesting, but if the author doesn't write enough in the follow-up, it will be difficult to form a huge world view.

Finish spreading flowers 🔨

It was originally written very well, but it fell apart from the beginning of my apprenticeship.

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