Begging for a Divine King of All Dharma from Human Skin

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First of all, let me say something. It's purely subjective. It's purely personal. If you feel uncomfortable, please leave. How can I put it? It feels like the reincarnation of an old lamp, because the overall writing is very smooth, and there are no poisonous points. Not to mention fairy grass, at least it is more than food and grass. The specifics still depend on the individual. Take a look for yourself, and can there be more? Who are you showing this to? It's really not enough to fill the gap between teeth.

60-68 Have always talked about opening casinos, selling pornographic pictures, and connecting with brothels. It's boring enough, the latest 69-70 is so good, I spent two chapters just licking my dick. Do you want to go to a Vietnamese and Japanese street and then write the article after you come back? . . . . The whole young boy is dazzling and depressed. . . . .

Copying ancient poems is poison. Ancient poems, like painters, take a long time from writing to becoming famous. For example, Du Mu became famous after he collected thousands of poems four hundred years after the Qingming Dynasty. Li Du was generally average when he was alive, and he became famous only after he published three hundred Tang poems.

To suppress the fighting power, one dose of medicine takes 5 days, and one dose costs 5 taels. A local painting costs 2 liang per painting, and the average price is 1 liang for the sky. I can't think of other comparisons at the moment. Anyway, the price of goods is very low, and the price of medicine is extremely high. Practicing martial arts is a long-term matter. According to this algorithm, it is impossible for a well-off person to be a wealthy family if he wants to practice martial arts well. He has to have a family of several people who practice too much and have not enough money. The pace is slow, and more than 70 chapters are nothing. At most he can be considered as a little gangster Chen Haonan, but he is still Chen Haonan without a younger brother. The plot is dull, if you don't follow the plot, if you don't quickly unlock a new career, you will help the gangster open a gambling house to make a lot of money. The gangster will not pay you a salary. The protagonist earns money to buy medicine by working part-time, and there is nothing wrong with practicing martial arts. The progress is extremely slow if there is a hangup. 12 Postures or how many postures? I have only practiced one posture now. The recent plot of Aunt Liu was even more subdued, she made a dumpling with revealing fillings just for a little jealousy. Two low-level gangsters, Blue Lantern-level juniors, secretly collected protection fees without telling their elder brother. The elder brother came to collect it and said it was confiscated when confronted. This younger brother is so brave. The eldest brother saw it and didn't say anything, so he charged another sum. Forget it, the protagonist comes and says that I am also a gangster and hangs out with Mr. Qian, and the other side says "Old Dog Qian, the casino gatekeeper." You must know that Mr. Qian was the third-ranking figure in the gang. Chen Yao, the money manager in Young and Dangerous, is on the level. A character who is more awesome than Big B, but a gangster who dared to talk about Qian Laogou was beaten with lime by the protagonist after training for a long time. After training for so long, he spent so much money, and he still had to use lime to defeat several gangsters. The little gangster went back and asked the boss, Liangkun, to find a place. The protagonist was calm enough to step forward and slap the mouth of the little gangster who had been beaten before. He slapped the gangster several times repeatedly. The other gangster just watched and finished the slap. The boss stood up and became angry. The protagonist said, "I will teach you a lesson." Because they say money is an old dog and they don't give me boss face. What the boss of the other party said in his heart was that I usually call him this way, and they learned from me. I am speechless, what kind of gang is this, so mentally retarded, so indifferent to superiority and inferiority, so intellectually subdued. I didn't continue after seeing this. The recent progress of the plot has been too slow and very watery.

Shennong is here! The beginning is innovative and the rhythm is smooth. After Chapter 20, it becomes more and more outrageous. The plot is like an ocean and the pace is dragging. At Chapter 70, the protagonist has not yet started practicing martial arts. Do you think it is outrageous?

There were no problems in the first few chapters, but when Emperor Ruyan came out, I had to read it hard and hold on until the poem writing stage. The gold content of Sanjiang is really bad.

The protagonists in the latest two chapters are like a pig brother and a chicken saying a few words, and the protagonists directly use their wits to act like a licking dog. This plot feels like the brainless Long Ao Tianwen from more than ten years ago

The beginning, the title, and the content are not very amazing, but they are all very interesting and can be read into. It is the kind of plot that takes a lot of thought.

Why are you so obedient to a prostitute? Even if she is related to the plot, you shouldn't write the plot like this. It's so messed up. The prostitute just says whatever the protagonist says. It's really very brainless.

Even AI can't write such a cowardly time travel novel.

It's boring. It's chapter 60, and he's still a gangster, still hanging around in a gambling house, and the protagonist is still showing off his modern knowledge to increase traffic in the gambling house. Forget it if you are in an ordinary world, this is a martial arts world, and it can even be said that it will definitely lead to the high martial arts world in the future, where you can conquer a city with just one punch. You have 60 cards, and you are still spinning in a small gambling house. The pace cannot be said to be too slow, it is simply too slow.

How should I put it? The protagonist who has system plug-ins but is a complete waste

He also works to open a casino, but the protagonist cannot see the people harmed by the gambling? The main character is not a good guy. Other protagonists have robbed or killed casinos seventy-nine or eighty times. How good is your book? They become casino lackeys.

Has the author never seen a woman? What was he writing about in Chapters 70-71? He licked it for a long time, and he was so impressed.

Well, the writing is terrible, basically copying routines, and the logic is basically illogical. The first three pictures looked like this, and I probably read them later. They were basically written in a mess. For example, beggars in ancient times were very mobile. There was no fixed share of what they had to hand over. It was usually a percentage of how much money they got from begging today, and then they paid 20 to 50%. If you can't get enough money from begging, you don't have to pay. What will happen if you say you beat the beggar? I will change the city, brother. Damn it, just change the city. Well, as for the kind of government documents you mentioned that require road guidance, in fact, even if the Ming and Qing Dynasties were stricter, they would not care about beggars. The main thing is that if you care about him, you have to care about food for him. There is no need for this, he has no productivity and no production work. Tool, you don't need to lock it in that field. If the author understands some human nature or ancient systems, he will not write in such a speechless manner. He just read a novel and copied it. Alas, it is quite speechless. The following routines are basically the same, with no innovation at all.

What the hell are the latest two chapters about? When people wink at the protagonist, the protagonist ignores everything and exposes himself without getting anything. Written like a loser pig brother

1. A beggar begged for 2 taels of silver. Oh my God, I can't stand it when I see it. 2 Liang what concept. No matter what, it is equivalent to more than 1,500 yuan today. 2. I don't know how this gang exists. It has no real effect on treating beggars in the area. Do these beggars have no legs? They are all homeless and beggars anyway. If they can't survive here, why don't they run away? You pay 3 cents every day. If you don't pay enough, you will be whipped to death. If you say yes, the protagonist gets 2 taels of silver, but after handing it in, there is no substantial help or reward. How can this kind of gang survive? How could anyone come?

There are so many starting points for this kind of book, there are so many people praising them in the comments section, haha.

In the latest two chapters, the brain has become a pig's brain. The author is 100% licking the dog, and the kind that licks the dog until there is nothing left. Otherwise, I would never be able to write something so intellectual.

Frankly speaking, there are too many professions for the protagonists. To be honest, many authors, including you, don't write so many professions if they don't have such a big brain capacity, because they can't write well at all. This is my impression after reading many novels. It's true that many authors don't have the skills to count, and don't have the brains to write a lot of professions. This is just to make people laugh.

There's a reason why it's not popular. If you look at the duration of the event, you'll find that the protagonist turns into a turtle man later on. It's disgusting.

💩, It's not as good as martial arts eight-part essay. At least it has a main line. Unlike this defense, it has no other advantages except writing. I haven't seen you doing anything after reading ten chapters. I don't know where so many people praise it.

Is there something wrong with your IQ? Don't you know that carrying a yellow leather bag will make other beggars jealous? You have to forcibly create a conflict, take a detour and go directly to the neighbor and then tell the person who went with you not to tell him to go out. You have to let other beggars see him before he goes out. This is a trick used to portray the protagonist as stupid and ignorant. Have you traveled through time in vain? Being a beggar is a good person?

After reading Chapter 71, the overall situation stood out as a mess. I originally thought that the main plot was that a beggar changed his job and stole luck from a demon. Then rely on this profession to steal luck and get various opportunities to practice martial arts and become powerful. The author has appeared in various professions such as painter, chef, martial artist, and makeup artist. He transformed the casino into a Macau casino and worked part-time as a makeup artist for brothel prostitutes and painted erotic pictures. Obviously the author has failed to write the main plot. Go off topic a thousand miles away

After the girl comes out, it will be a plot to reduce intelligence.

See Chapter 78...! The protagonist doesn't know what he's doing! The little gangster who drinks every day is like a pig! There will be no more after asking for closure! Make a living every day! I practiced martial arts for a while, and learned a lot for a while. After a long time of preparation, I was still a little loser...!

AI writing, the first dozen or so chapters were okay, I revised it, but after more than 20 chapters, I didn't even bother to revise it anymore

The skill "Defeng" has no cooldown and no consumption, so you keep using it? Why do you have so many fancy jobs? Isn't this just sacrificing the basics for the sake of the bottom?

The protagonist has never seen a woman before. When the brothel oiran comes out, the protagonist is purely out of his wits. Everything about the protagonist is exposed. Why don't you let the protagonist kneel down and bark?