When the Copy Comes

It's pretty good, but the plot is too vague and some things are not written clearly. The protagonist is also the Riddler. You didn't tell the story well. The personality split at the end was abrupt and the plot was poorly prepared. The description of the main characters is strange. The relationship between the protagonist and the girl is strange. Why do the two get along harmoniously? It can be a foreshadowing. However, the author throws out too little information, and the Riddler is also included, which makes the impression unsatisfactory. After reading the latest 20 chapters in the first copy, I can only say that it is unsatisfactory. The protagonist and the supporting characters did not obtain much useful information during the exploration. Then the protagonist suddenly started talking about split personality. There was no sense of decryption, and it felt like a forced explanation. Of course, I am still very optimistic about this book. There are still quite few supernatural books of this kind. I hope that the storytelling and logic behind it will be improved.

The plot looks weird, the paragraphs are a bit long, there are too many descriptions of the atmosphere, and there are few dialogues. It is confusing and there is nothing to read. Hay

As for what happiness is, I don't know.

Why are all the new books I read recently about eunuchs?

The chapters I posted have all been reviewed and are not public chapters 😰

I found that I am a bit bad at naming. The title of the book and the introduction are all quite poor. I want to collect the names of the supporting characters I also want people to mention the advantages and disadvantages, and I want to optimize the optimization. Copies, practical problems can be talked about, accept it with an open mind, but please don't make nonsense.