Crow's Law: Judgment of Power

Author, let me tell you my opinion. It's just my opinion. I don't mean to discredit it. It's just my personal opinion. I saw your complaint post on Zhihu and clicked in to read it. Let me tell you my opinion. Let's talk about the good side first First, you said that you started preparing in 2019, and you have been preparing for several years. This is commendable. You are not the kind of person who just gives up and starts writing with enthusiasm Second, the literature is relatively solid, and the description is also very delicate. I must have revised it repeatedly before publishing, which is very responsible Then it's gone. Let me tell you what I think your problem is First, the title of your book, I can't even understand what you are writing? I think one of the functions of a long book title is that it is equivalent to an advertising slogan, but your title is too literary and I can't understand what you want to write. There is also an introduction. There is no useful information at all. You only write that this is a different story. The two together alone will hardly interest the readers. The second point is that your foreshadowing is too slow. I read your prologue and part of the first and second chapters. I actually need to read them word for word to ensure that the information is not missed. This is the attitude I have when I am watching Ten Days End. Do you know what I feel when I read a novel? I felt like I was not reading an online novel, but a classic. This feeling can only be felt when reading classics. At the end of ten days, the sky will be covered, no matter how hard it is, it is all said in very ordinary words at the beginning, which allowed me to quickly enter the story. I had to calm down to read what you wrote, and it didn't have the refreshing feeling of online writing. Yours was full of dialogues, so I just gave up reading it. Because I don't know what you want to talk about. Regarding the theme of fantasy in a different world, other people have conflicts or fascinating foreshadowing and suspense in the first three chapters, but you really can't do this. This is my opinion. If you don't like it, don't comment 😁😁😁