Legend of Sword and Wind: This Brand Is Not Quite Right

Book lovers of Branded Warrior are really starving, they can endure such a god-man plot and a god-man protagonist.

The protagonist spent three days in a graveyard looking for his way home. Did the author also spend three days in the toilet looking for his pants?

There are fewer protagonists who have just traveled through the system and become a body, but still don't understand the form and want to go home.

This is not Japan, trash protagonists are not popular

After looking at the author's previous works, I found that literary youth is even his smallest fault, and it's not worth spending money on.

The protagonist is too anthropomorphic. He wanted to go home for three days at the beginning and ignored the system tasks. How come you didn't starve to death? You actually admitted that you were a spy when you were in jail. You said that you were a refugee/wanted to join the gang/a deserter/a wandering knight. Why did you not choose a hostile identity? What is outrageous is that in Jianfeng's prison, you only received one whip? You've been tricked as soon as I've been beaten, right? And when you're jailbreaking and you have the key, you rush out alone without letting a few people muddy the waters. It's really too anthropomorphic, and your brain probably doesn't allow the earth to pass through it.

It's rare to see Jian Feng, and I was stunned when I entered it. Is this protagonist still from Earth? Waste three days to find the way home after crossing. Meeting a local who was helpless, he was bombed with gold coins. In the melee of the castle, others were attacked and others went crazy. I have been whipped but it shows that I have not broken away from modern thinking. Let me ask - is this a human being?

Let's just say that living is the most important thing... Playing games and doing quests is fine. 🙂 You write that you got sick after being bitten by a dog in a mass grave, lay down for a few days and missed the quest... You were picked up by a kind person, and then the kind person was hacked to death by the rebels, and you were arrested... I think it is better than your explanation of wandering around and wanting to go home.

There is actually a template for this. For a common theme in online articles, it is caution, because everyone would rather see someone who is more cautious and has made a lot of preparations, rather than someone who is stupid. For example, if you, the protagonist, start in your birthplace, you should be more cautious, observe the environment, think about countermeasures, and put these thoughts into practice. After describing the physical activities and actual actions, you have a very good initial evaluation. You are being caught, tortured, and humiliated. It is difficult to make people feel happy. In the current environment, people generally do not want to read particularly frustrating Internet articles. Now you can still change it at the beginning. It is difficult to have good data.

No brother, why is the waste material flow so popular now? It's okay if it's well written. Whatever you write, you're already suffering from stupidity, right?

It's difficult to comment on the history. The protagonist of an online novel can be bad, unlucky, and have flaws of one kind or another, but he should not be a fool who can be recognized by almost all readers. If you don't change this, your subsequent writing will be at the same level as the masters, and at least 80% of the readers will be screened out at the beginning.

Legend of Sword and Wind is still popular, and some people watch and praise the protagonist who is written so tangibly. I can't even imagine how good a normal protagonist could be.

As we all know, the protagonist's brain and the author's brain are shared. So the author is what the protagonist is.

I read the first three chapters with a frown. The poisonous points in the beginning are all slander, and I will never change them. Why is this?

The books are worse than the others. They are either literary youths, or they are the protagonists, or they are both literary youths and Ruozhi and follow the plot. None of them look human. They have hundreds of monthly tickets. They love history so much. No wonder these guys are always immersed in their own art and don't know what the world is.

The author is not suitable for writing today's online articles. There is no market for writing articles that overwhelm the protagonist at the beginning and reduce intelligence and ability at the beginning.

You wasted three days thinking about going home, and then you were caught and failed the initial mission. It was so frustrating. Nowadays, readers who read books will be drawn into the protagonist, like me, and it will be difficult for most readers to read it. Because they all feel that they are not mentally retarded

After traveling through time and having a system, the first thing I did was not to study the system or adapt to the environment, but to find my way home in a panic. I was caught halfway and the novice mission failed. I'm so stupid that I don't know what to say. I couldn't even think about this for three whole days. Anyone who has any brains should know that this is something that can only be done by strong people. Then Kakeya's inexplicable flow state suddenly changed from pure waste to capable of killing everyone...

You can no longer write novels that are real without giving the protagonist the intelligence of a real person.

The opening plot doesn't look like an old author, but like an old street fighter.

How can we still write such a punishing mission system in this age? Moreover, it is not an emotional interactive daily work that uses punishment to add interest to the plot, but is a real upgrade flow. It is a bit strange.

Come on, come on, it's rare to write a sword-style legend

Thank you. Jianfeng is very popular. Thank you for posting this book.

I said at the beginning of my post that this subject matter would 100% lead to a violent death, because the comic "Jianfeng" has a lot of hardcore fans posting on the Internet, but it is actually very niche and very few people have read it.

Disrespect, disrespect 🙏

The author is dead, another dead eunuch.

When will the author update 😭

It's not really a fanfic. Essentially, it's a small copy of a martial arts book, with only about 50 chapters in total. The author is zhttty, yes, the author of Infinite Horror. The title of the book is "Xia Xing Tian Xia", a journey of seeking the Tao. I personally feel that it should be the best Jianfeng fanfic. After all, the popularity of Jianfeng itself is not very high. The author is still a top-level author, and the quality is still guaranteed.

The first three chapters were painful to read. It took at least 15 chapters for me to feel smooth. Author, can you find a chance to revise the first dozen chapters?