The Master Said That the Drawn Entries Should Not Be Wasted

A beautiful book, this is a novel that is both harem and pure love. They say it's a harem, but it's actually a bunch of losers. Can the author write more about the protagonist Bruce and less about the pendant He Zha🙂🙂🙂, no one likes to read it🙂🙂🙂😁😁😁

There are too few and it's not enough to read. I feel that the pace is a bit slow in terms of the number of words, but the world is written quite delicately, which is fine. The story is quite natural, and the pace is not slow in terms of plot. (Some of the small dungeons in the early stage still feel a bit redundant and procrastinating, and the shop settings and world view affect the feeling of mainline upgrades.) Maybe I watch too many fast upgrades. The original fantasy genre has a high upper limit and a low lower limit, so this is a good book. Then, the role of the dog protagonist was relatively discouraged. If I hadn't watched it for a while, I would have missed it. In fact, it would be better to put Bruce in a supporting role. Then now I have written about the academy. I feel that the author is not very good at writing. The academy can only be regarded as good grass. It may also be because the space is too short and has not been expanded on. So it is still a problem of too little. More is fairy grass.

The profile has been changed well. I just came up with the meme and it took a few days to come up with it. The writing and plot are good, and there are no sentences that look awkward or poisonous. The protagonist is a bit of a loner and has a very upright outlook. It is recommended to increase Bruce's role. Friendship and bonding are a must-have part of the adventure. Ignore the prostitute who wants a single heroine in the comments section. There are a lot of people criticizing him. As far as I can see the progress; the plot is well written. And Bruce, I hope he is a brave and caring puppy, just not too mean. I have seen enough of mean pets (I really like Doro's second creation, I recommend the author to refer to it)

Sweet love

I have never played DND. This book is very beautiful, fine-grained, and very detailed in its descriptions. It is an absolute fairy tale. There are a lot of foreshadowings, and most of them can be filled in very well, but there are too many branch lines, which makes it a little bloated. I prefer not to skip time and skip a month directly. The protagonist is a genius, but he also needs to develop step by step and grow quickly. However, the progress of the timeline is slow, which makes the protagonist's combat power upgrade slower.

Good grass, good-looking, too little, please write more

20 Monthly votes have been cast, and you are only short of the top 50 in last month's vote list.

Bruce has too few scenes.

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But there is one thing. If you don't accept the female characters you spent so much time describing, then the author Driftwood will really fly into the sky. The worst thing is if you don't accept the female characters you wrote about or speculate in the stock market.

Can you write a book? Why are the heroines all female? I'm really vomiting... (There are references for academic integrity) 🤓

If you are tired of clichéd stories where the main character is targeted wherever he goes, then this book may be the most healing touch of color in your bookshelf. It does not tell a grand narrative, but at its core is a joyful adventure of traveling around the world with a dog and easily upgrading it - the reading experience is like a safe and interesting free travel in a different world. This world is very reader-friendly It borrows a bit of the "form" of DND - it has occupations, skills, and adventure tasks, but there are no complicated rule thresholds at all. You can think of it as an online game with a rich fantasy background. You can immerse yourself in it directly without doing any homework. And its "cheap finger" is also well designed: it extracts entries by improving other people's favor. This is not only a tool to strengthen oneself, but also fundamentally changes the protagonist's behavioral logic - kindness and social interaction become a core resource that can be accumulated and transformed. Every interaction lurks new possibilities, making the growth path full of fun and positive feedback The rhythm is solid, and the more you read, the more you read The first three chapters are very stable, and you can see that the author is serious. The beginning is a little slow, but once you get into the mood, it gradually gets better, and the main line of exploration, monster killing, and upgrading is clear and smooth. The author doesn't deliberately stress the level, and gives enough positive feedback, making it a smooth read. Although some classic routines are used, it is handled in a natural and comfortable manner, which is much easier to read than those works that lose the story for the sake of "unconventional". The style is relaxed, with a good balance between daily life and adventure The overall style is relaxed and relaxed for daily life. Finally, we no longer have to watch plots where the protagonist is covered in a "halo of ridicule" and is chased and beaten wherever he goes. The adventures in this book have a sense of tension, and the daily life has a sense of relaxation, especially the interaction between the protagonist and the dog Bruce - this dog is simply a spirit, can complain and have ideas, and contributes most of the laughter and warmth in the book. It is the real soul character. The characters are vivid and the emotional lines are unexpectedly comfortable The protagonist is a genius mage, and he is protected by a powerful teacher behind him. The growth path is not frustrating or disgusting, so you can read it with confidence. The occasional ambiguity with the heroine is also just right. Summary: A reassuring and enjoyable "Electronic Travel Companion" In general, this is a Western fantasy light comedy with a friendly setting, vivid characters, and no burden to read. It does not involve bitterness and hatred, but tells an interesting, warm and refreshing story within the classic adventure framework. It is especially suitable for the following readers: · Readers who want to find an "electronic pickle" to relax; · Readers who like adventure and relaxed interaction with partners; · Readers who are fed up with the routine of bitter and bitter books and making enemies everywhere. The remaining monthly votes are given to you, but it's a pity that I found them a little late, otherwise I could have voted for you a few more times. If you can keep writing at this level, you will definitely have a place among the Twelve Heavenly Kings next time. Then don't forget those of us book friends who supported you in the early stages of your writing😢😢

It's been on the shelves for so long, why is it still free? I don't understand.

rt

Does the author really only use AI to help check and polish? The quality of the later plot is obviously lower than that of the previous one. Let's not talk about it. The protagonist's emotional intelligence fluctuates high and low. Sometimes he always likes to push his limits and provokes too many female supporting characters, but his writing style cannot control so many emotional lines. What surprised me the most was that the emotional line with Zoya was written very naturally, and there were no clichés such as missing and chasing his wife, misunderstanding but not speaking, and falling out of control. But the emotional line with Flora is very "classic". You have to ignore that she is a legendary mage to accept it. For example, "the protagonist makes a move in disheveled clothes and is almost discovered by Lidona (where is your illusion?)" "Can't react to the protagonist's little moves", these classic routines

The introduction is exaggerated and the content is solid I originally thought it was a boring book with no brain upgrades and an invincible start But after taking a closer look at the content, it is indeed an excellent Western fantasy adventure with solid writing Good to read

Hello, can you turn off the anti-theft function? 🙂

After two votes, we need more female protagonists. Now there are too many eunuch stories. I'm tired of reading them.

I really should change the title of the book. This book is really well written, at least similar to the Goblin book.

I will also vote to see which one

I recently heard a review from a book friend saying that this book was originally labeled as a harem, but Zoya had to go offline to let other harems catch up. The author's girlfriend actually found out about it, and was forced to change it to Zoya's one-liner? Is this going to be changed to a single-heroine pure love route?

Gg, only those whose AI is higher than a certain percentage will be killed.

rt

If the author has done it once, he will never be able to write about this heroine.

To be honest, I first watched Unlimited next door, and then I couldn't get into this one. The first part was pretty good, but then I started playing The Lone Ranger and I couldn't get into it. Sure enough, Western Fantasy still needs a team bond to be able to keep up with it!

The writing is very good, but don't label it as having multiple female protagonists, and then the whole party fights over who will be the one, and in the end, it's just a single female protagonist. It's disgusting.

Personally, I prefer 0-4, 0 is a pure career protagonist with a good plot, 1 needs to be able to write pure love clearly, or it can be written dryly, as long as you don't write all the time, and keep creating a sense of presence. 2-4 Depends on the author's writing skills. If the writing skills are good and the writing conveys the feeling, you will like it very much. As for why I don't like it if there are more than four heroines (not that I don't like it at all), it's because if there are more than four female protagonists, my personal viewing experience is that if they are purely in love, there will be no room for career plots. Personally, I am most concerned about the plot of the career development of the male protagonist. In addition, in reality, for some reasons, that group does have particularly severe PTSD, so novels without female protagonists are also the most comfortable reading experience for me recently. Actually, the problem with the heroines depends on their writing skills. As long as they are written well, it doesn't matter at all. (Personal feeling) There is still some point of discussion between no heroine and one with a heroine. After all, it is an obvious difference in satisfaction. . .

I feel happy when I see that the number of monthly votes is higher than that of the one I am heavily dependent on. That Bend has not been suitable for too long.

Write about women, not about heroines. 99.999999% Of the women in the world have nothing to do with you. Among the women who have a relationship with you, 99% will not have a relationship with you. This is the normal state of readers. The author must grasp the relationship here. Women will not like someone for no reason, nor will they fall in love with someone just because they save their lives. Women will not give up their hobbies and dreams because of a man. Women will miss men because they are lonely, but they will not be lonely because of men. They can do other things. It is not that they cannot live without men. The essence of why women cannot survive without men is that they leave their familiar environment, not because of love. In the same way, the same goes for men. Write women as normal people. There are many powerful women in the world, there are also many stupid women, and there are even more normal women.

The author doesn't know if you have read the book by Brother Next Door, Bulin Killer. You can learn it, but don't imitate him. The mage can have more skills, otherwise it will easily lead to fatigue. It doesn't have to be full attack, auxiliary ones can also be used, summoning, tracking, and amplification. This is what a mage should be like.