Why Does My Junior Sister Think Everyone Is a Heretic?

Many years later, facing the good and evil factions who came to encircle and suppress the sect, the players who were just having fun, and the junior brothers and sisters who were all spies, Su Ling'er, who has become the executive deputy master of the Guixi Sect, will think of that distant afternoon when the senior brother said that he would refine her into a fairy sword.

Have you ever entered the magic gate? Just scribble, taking it for granted.

The Pure Demon Sect regards human life as nothing but grass and fights endlessly. Woohoo, I'm already crying from fear.

The biggest problem with this book is that most of the players' enthusiasm only lasts a few months, and even the big bosses only have about a year. In one year, they haven't even cultivated a hair in the world of immortality. Su Ling'er was undercover and unknowingly. The senior brothers and sisters who were in seclusion in the sect never came out again.

It turned out to be "No matter how my junior sister thinks, everyone is an evil cultivator", I thought it was "No matter how my junior sister thinks, everyone is an evil cultivator"

The writing style is not particularly elegant, but it can explain things clearly The two lines of NPC and player are laid out in the game, and the real-life profile outside the game is also good The subject matter is interesting At least it is at the food and grass level, why is it not popular

A completely new subject, it is quite interesting to look at the "fourth natural disaster" such as players from the perspective of a "local" At the same time, the novel currently seems to have a lot of uncertain content, as if the author has not thought about how to write it First of all, this novel is to write a group portrait (a From the perspective of a small protagonist group), or dual protagonists but from the perspective of the heroine This is something to be clear about. My personal suggestion is the latter. After all, the author can tell that he is a newcomer, and his writing skills are a bit poor and the former cannot be controlled Secondly, it is the issue of emotional lines. Do the two protagonists have emotional lines directly? I personally feel that it can be added, otherwise the setting of setting the protagonist as a female protagonist would be a little worse, and the plot with many emotional lines can be easily unfolded. For example, the female protagonist becomes the male protagonist's AI desk pet, or the heroine electronically forces the male protagonist to marry. This kind of fun is still very interesting (fog), but this is my personal feeling, and the author needs to make his own choices Thirdly, this type of article recommends lowering the upper limit of force to a certain extent, no However, it is easy to end the story. This is the experience of old bookworms. Cultivation + online games are easy to end. Excessive combat power will make this type of novel extremely difficult to write. There is still a certain underlying conflict between online game novels and high combat power. As the combat power increases, there are too many things to complete. Therefore, it is simply recommended to limit the expansion of combat power to a certain extent, or even marginalize the combat power realm factor of cultivating immortals to a certain extent, and strengthen the label of "online games" The logic of signing (it is best to convert the label from "online games" to "games" and abandon some of the shortcomings of online games) For novels, combat power is not important, the key is the plot, or the completeness of the "story" Everything in the novel serves the plot, and the plot cannot be allowed to serve the setting This is why I suggest having an emotional line, because this way it can be ended easily, so this There is no need for this novel to step into the big pits that may appear in this subject That's all I have summarized so far The rest are just common problems that new authors will encounter, such as poor rhythm and insufficient writing power But it doesn't matter as long as you control the core. Remember that the plot is the most important. The outline and writing rhythm all serve the plot. Only by telling the story well can the story be completed

There is no necessary relationship between talking about water and good-looking. This book is actually more obvious. It seems that there are so many words in one chapter, but the information content of each chapter is actually not much. However, because of the subject matter and plot, it makes people want to continue reading - it does not hinder the fact that the information content is low... It is also commonly known as water, but this water is the same as Guo Degang and Yu Qian talking about cross talk. It can make people fall asleep while listening to it 🙂 Unlike some novels (cross talk), it has high information content and a compact and dense plot (cross talk is hot and restless). I personally don't want the plot to be overdone. If it is too dry, the novel content of 30 million words could have been wasted, so I wrote 3 million words to finish it quickly in the so-called "plot push", which means that I have lost 27 million words of content. Well, after saying so much, there is actually only one problem 😡 There are too few updates! ! ! ! ! ! You know it's easy to write when it's wet, but why don't you write more? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! More! ! ! More updates! ! ! More and more! ! ! ! If others give two updates, you must update four! ! ! ! Keep four updates and strive for six updates! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The author still needs to think more carefully about the implantation of malicious memes. Behaviors such as crying, laughing, and harassing couples cannot hide their malicious intentions even if they are separated by the cognitive filter of the game. That is to say, I just checked the information related to Jiuliumen, otherwise I would not be able to understand why such a ridiculous paragraph appears. The behavior of the protagonist (player) can be weird and misunderstood, but it must be justified from the reader's perspective.

The inner drama of the protagonist is a bit too much, and the beginning is okay. The narration of the junior sister in the middle is nagging over and over again, which is a bit annoying, and the word count is not so good The plot in the middle of the development is basically repeated every once in a while, which is a bit too fussy It's not that you can't use narration to complain, but there is no need to repeat the same things over and over again, and there is no need to repeat the same things Every time you let the junior sister complain in the narration, you can randomly change it and add some jokes, the experience will be better