I Created the Timeline with My Own Hands

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This should be classified as a suspense supernatural story, come on

Quick update, quick update, by the way, can you please read my book? What kind of immortal can you become if you stay in the Demon Sect?

To be honest, there are a lot of loopholes in the plot. The first one is that the ecological niche of the martial arts school is destined to have little influence, but I have nothing to say if you insist on practicing this to maintain health. Secondly, if the martial arts gym is really powerful, then why do you risk your life to surround and suppress Huaying yourself? And no matter how great the favor is, can a group of martial arts masters be invited to fight with their own lives? Are they all dozens of years old and don't care about their lives?

Although there are many questions, I think I can continue writing.

There is one more thing I forgot to complain about, that is, the phone call made to provoke Hua Ying in real life was simply inexplicable and unnecessary. I don't see the effect at all, and if the other party follows the clues and finds me, it will cause trouble for myself.

The writing was quite good, but it was a bit strange for the protagonist and Hua Ying to meet and provoke each other on the phone. Is it really necessary to kill the jacaranda? Shouldn't a doctor protect his thighs slowly?

It can be seen that he is not an experienced writer, but he is not considered a newbie, right? The writing is still sophisticated, but there are a lot of logical loopholes in the plot, and the author lacks consideration. But it still has potential