Flesh and Blood

After Chapter 22, I changed my writing style and found some writing skills. The novel will become more and more exciting. I look forward to your support.

As of now, the concept of who the protagonist is and the entire level of cultivation are very vague. Secondly, there are really few daily updates.

Very good story. Come and say a few words. Join in the fun

Two synopses for one book? It started with Devouring Evolution, but what happened to the plot four years later? Where do you dream and write?

Come on, author. I finished reading it in one sitting today and it was pretty good. I originally came up with the idea of ​​devouring flesh and blood, and then it developed pretty well. But the rhythm in the middle feels a bit messy. I go to the battlefield inexplicably, and then I have to beat my heart even though I can get the fire spirit through other ways. Then he suddenly swallowed his heart and seemed to become very strong (this also exposed a small flaw, that is, although there are realm divisions, the overall strength level is too vague), and he successfully transformed into another form (the transformation was not clearly explained here. At first, it was written that the protagonist could only rely on refining the skin to cover himself, but later descriptions were obviously the transformation brought about by the increase in the protagonist's own strength). Generally speaking, the writing style and settings are pretty good, and some details are also well described. From some foreshadowings in the middle, we can see that the author still has great ideas. Personally, the biggest problem I feel is that there are some problems with the narrative rhythm, and there is an obvious lack of an outline, which makes the plot development a bit chaotic. If you don't pay attention to this point later in writing, it will easily collapse in the middle.

👍👍Looking forward to updates

Worth a look and looking forward to updates🌹

When did you end up marrying your parents?

The writing is very good, but there are too few, and there are few updates. I enjoyed reading it and then it disappeared, and I became very unhappy.

The plot is good, but the natives don't have a broad vision, and it doesn't fit in with the evolution of meat pigeons.

The author writes very well. I haven't seen such a real and flesh-and-blood story for a long time.

By the way, Cheng Sui's essence and blood can save Li Feng, right?

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When will it be released? It's not enough to see. You need to gain some fat and then look again

If it's unfinished, cut it before putting it on the shelf, otherwise it'll be disgusting. We don't need it. We only wrote a few words before we started to cut it off. It's fun.