Cultivating Demonic Arts for Immortality: Starting with Paper Dolls

For those who have abandoned two books in the past six months, guess how many words this one will last? Only those who have read at least three of the author's books should answer this.

However, it is better written than Peach Blossom Pastry; Peach Blossom Pastry's writing gets worse and worse.

I glanced at the author's biography; he's a level 5 writer. He started with a high-quality book of several hundred thousand words as a trial, followed by two more high-quality books, both with a total length of over 10,000 words, and then two unfinished books with less than 200,000 to 300,000 words. Judging from the results, there is no doubt that you have the ability.

The latest chapter is quite good. It has its own style and characteristics But the key is that it can't be left unfinished; an unfinished ending is far worse than a poorly written one.

You always write about the supernatural, writing grandiose, unrealistic stories. And you don't write well. Your descriptions of women are delicate, and your battle descriptions are superb. Why not write about a low-to-mid-level martial arts world? You also love writing about paper dolls. How many people actually like paper dolls and leatherworking?

All I can say is, wow, how can someone have the nerve to finish the book like that? Do they think the readers are idiots or haven't read it at all?

Many people who claim to be immortal simply lie down and become invincible. It's not that simple. Almost everyone gets what they want. If you really just lie down and wait to become invincible, that's it. This is much more realistic. It's normal for Bloodvine to go too far. Everyone has experienced being in a difficult situation and feeling like they're doomed a few times in their life.

Having read so many of the author's books, and seeing how many books the author has adapted, my biggest takeaway is that the author is only suited for short stories. Each time, the opening is captivating, drawing the reader in immediately, then gradually becoming disjointed, jumping from one topic to another, then seemingly invincible, and then completely collapsing and unable to continue. 🤔

I remember someone saying before that if the book was abandoned again, they would open the box (a euphemism for a plot device), but it seems the box wasn't opened.

But ever since I found out he was a smaller version of Peach Blossom Pastry, I've always had a feeling he's going to poop a huge pile on the Devouring Yin Vine.