There's Something Off About My Supernatural Profession

Chapter 1 There is a serious mismatch between productivity and production relations. Technology has entered the era of psychic energy, and photon weapons are available. Slavery still exists. This is the greatest waste of labor. The world structure needs to be changed.

Don't procrastinate, just go there when you're done. After reading a paragraph, you'll know what you want to talk about. It took a few chapters to describe it, but it's not the main plot.

The current outline seems to be okay, but there are a few small flaws. The first one is that the level is blurred, or the protagonist's mechanism blurs the level system, and he can hit people at will. There is no difference between level one and level five. Just hold a gun. The role of level is to use weapons. The difference between level one and level five is how many shots you can fire. Other than that, there is no difference. The second is that the characteristics of the profession are not written. The profession of "letting a hundred flowers bloom" is not highlighted, but at present, this characteristic of the profession is almost non-existent. The characteristic of the function writing method is the characteristic ability of the profession. The third is that the combat process is too simple, which is also the reason why I had the first feeling. Every time I fight, no matter what level I am, I will be defeated by one shot.

The quality is so high that it doesn't look like it was written by a novice at all, but what's even more strange is that the results are so poor.

Plot: When I opened the map of the Imperial City, I felt that the protagonist was too weak. For example, the current practice of competing for the title of king in another world feels that it has nothing to do with the protagonist of the seventh level. The title of king of level 20 and above is too far away from the protagonist, and there is no sense of participation and satisfaction. Setting: Then there's the cool thing about Lantern Walker, which develops infinitely over time, isn't it just Gou? The development conflict with the son of God who wants to join the world and cause trouble will make it less enjoyable. There is absolutely no introduction to the refreshing feeling of stepping on your left foot and stepping on your right foot to reach the sky. Advantages: It's a cool article that's above the grain level, but it's not cool enough.

It's so good that after reading it, I want to see what the author's previous book was like

After reading it, the writing is okay, but the protagonist deserves to have a priesthood and is quite hypocritical. The villain Bai Long is right. The protagonist and he are actually the same kind of people, but they need different things. The protagonist just uses the people under him as a tool to gain faith.

Bai Long is right, the hypocritical protagonist

The setting is pretty good, but both the protagonist and the supporting characters have no brains 😅. It's a tasteless novel.

No, how could you directly identify the protagonist as the military slave they hired? And then directly determine that he wants to force him to trade?