He Is in Tokyo and Is the Mastermind Behind the Scenes.

Because the emotional dramas written by virgin authors are often the supreme sexual fantasies of young virgins, the heroine in his novels is not a real woman but a perfect fantasy creature, and everything will develop according to his imagination. The author of Marriage will naturally become more realistic after getting in touch with real human beings. Marriage is just firewood, rice, oil, salt, soy sauce, vinegar and tea. Usually the passion of love can be worn away in the first few years. The rest is to see whether the two people can blend into the middle zone of love and family. If they don't blend in well, they will be like feathers. I'm not saying it's bad to have a beautiful fantasy. Everyone has the right to dream. As long as you don't substitute your fantasy into reality when interacting with the opposite sex, it's easy to make a joke.

Whether the protagonist and his sister are poisonous depends on whether the author dares to fight in the entrance hall. If he dares, he will become a god. If he dares not, it will be poisonous. Taking up depiction resources and not accepting women

The image of the protagonist is too thin. Although I know it is unlikely, I still hope that the protagonist's label will be more solid After reading, I only have this label left in my mind, light novel, Tokyo, Japanese manga Finally, as a writer Or you must not have a sister or a 16-year-old sister. The image of the sister you wrote is too typical of Japanese comics, which makes me a little bit confused when reading it.

The writing is pretty good, and there is a lot to be done if it continues. I suggest that there should be more supernatural forces, and more people should die. After all, who doesn't like rivers of blood when reading this type of book? I have read many books of this type before that don't kill people! Isn't it just to make the story more lawless?

The winner is always the righteous side, and the ending is dumplings? Can't you write that the earth spider successfully arrived but was eaten by a more terrifying existence, and a big hole was dug into the entire Tokyo? Being pushed down by a ghoul is too low.

It's okay to use real-life characters, but it's boring to make the hero look like a clown.

The first plot developed too fast, especially the response speed of Tokyo officials was extremely fast. Not to mention that the police locked on and found the suspect almost immediately. Just when the gunman was shot and turned into a semi-Hero who killed the police, someone immediately reported the matter to the Prime Minister. After receiving the report, the Prime Minister immediately made a judgment and gathered all the core members of Japan's top management for a meeting. At the end of the meeting, key general instructions were given. The whole process of dispatching the Self-Defense Forces did not take more than half an hour. It was outrageous. Even Black Watch was not this efficient.

An assembly-line behind-the-scenes story about Tokyo.

The plot feels exactly the same as the few books I have read before. I feel that the outline is the same after sorting it out.

Most writing about sisters is a failure (writing about brothers and sisters is more useful than this one). The extra space is a waste of resources. Most people don't have sisters. They don't think they are cute and they don't treat them as family members. They are just a drag. So this kind of character has too many scenes and can't help the protagonist and cannot be accepted. What's the use?

The little Japanese dad likes to play tricks on official dogs so much

I don't know what the author thinks. His employees work for him for free, and they work hard without complaint. Why do they want to make things difficult for his subordinates?

The protagonist still had a sense of existence in the first few chapters, but then completely disappeared. The world was about to be destroyed, and the protagonist completely disappeared. Then the supporting characters broke out to save the world, and there was no sense of immersion at all.

，，     ，？ Or will you not be able to advance the plot if you break away from the mythical skin? A hundred behind-the-scenes articles about Tokyo, 99.9% Of them have to have a background story It's really aesthetically exhausting to read.

There is a question, why are the execution capabilities of those departments in Japan so high? The same is true for the US military stationed in Japan. Aren't they tax thieves? Doesn't fit my stereotype of the Japanese department and U. S. Troops stationed in Japan

Do the Self-Defense Forces have that strength? It starts with a Falcon helicopter. The key is, just a second ago, you said you wanted to block the message. Author, please check the information before writing.

The main character's name is Taiyi, and the whole surname is forced to be Lin. Regardless of whether Lin Taiyi is different or not, one glance at the studio's assembly line writing shows that 90% of the protagonist's surname is assembly line writing.

Okay, Tokyo Behind the Scenes finally has another work you can watch.

David Martinez - whose mother died in a gang fight and was taunted by students. Obito——When the person you like dies, it feels like hell. Blonsky - Abomination, kicked away by the Hulk

The protagonist basically has no sense of participation and is boring to watch. The protagonist either hides his identity and participates in some events, or sneaks into the Japanese official role and becomes a bastard for more space, instead of being like a panel and occasionally pushing a few lines at the back.

Not bad

The abilities are given too casually, which leads to a lack of enjoyment behind the scenes.

I wrote a book by myself, "I Started a Revitalization of Spiritual Energy in America" ​​and I hope everyone will support it.

Giving others superpowers in novels requires the author to rack his brains and rely on mythological backgrounds. However, the reality is too magical and does not require logical reference. Just look at the magical America. You can just let others figure it out after pig's feet give others powers.

Eunuch, another dead eunuch was born