The Reborn Me Doesn't Need to Try Hard

I've never met this author before. I read about 30 chapters, but couldn't continue. It's scattered and disjointed, lacks a main plot, and has no satisfying moments. It seems to describe many industries and people, offering a few shallow observations before moving on to the next scene. It would be a miracle if anyone could finish this book.

Two books have been cut short, both around 110,000 words. This one also needs careful consideration; we'll see how it goes once it reaches 200,000 words. All I can say is, once a eunuch, always a eunuch.

Does the author have an outline? The industry the protagonist has invested in is already competitive enough to make him a billionaire in ten years. How should the story proceed from here? Either the author needs to delve deeply into the industry, or they should include some romantic subplots. Otherwise, it will just become a rambling, disjointed narrative.

With the protagonist involved in so many industries, can he manage them all? Does he have enough talent to manage them all? Forget about finance, he has no background (his country isn't strong), no military power (no mercenaries), he's a complete novice (he only knows the general direction of buying), and it's a multinational operation!

It's all very disorganized; everything is just glossed over. I've read dozens of chapters and my mind is completely blank. It seems like I wrote a lot, but I don't remember anything at all.

There's too much personal bias involved. They go on and on about national trends and industry prospects, adding dry, uninformed stuff into entire chapters.

Well, the writing style is acceptable, but it's hard to get immersed in the story. There's very little narrative; it feels like a third-person perspective, with no plot, only the outcome.

I've read up to chapter 30 and still have no idea what the main plot is. It's like a diary entry, with everyone trying to get involved in everything, yet hesitant and timid. There's no exciting part; it's just a jumble of random investments with no clear direction, and the conversations with this person and that person seem aimless.

It's written like an AI script—messy, dry, and boring.

No, what exactly is the protagonist supposed to do? Should we focus on core technologies or the internet? The protagonist has never had a goal and is always shrouded in mystery.