Strange Eyes: Three Realms of Cyberspace

The novel setting is the biggest highlight! I really hope to unlock the machine domain dungeon soon. It is currently in the initial stage, and the several dungeons in the Masterless Wilderness are quite creative! Come on, author!

This is the first time I see such a blurred boundary between science and metaphysics!

I'm a newbie just writing. Please give me some suggestions and read mine 🙂

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This novel is so imaginative Cyber+Cultivation+Cthulhu The setting is awesome

Fellow Taoists are really like-minded people. The themes are similar. Can you thank me for "Gui Xu Tu"?

Regarding segmentation, it is better to segment it into more segments. There is no charge for segmentation. Important things must be said three times. The same goes for the previous plot segmentation. The latest chapter already has a sense of technology, but the settings of the mirror and shadow companions feel a bit confusing. Maybe I didn't look carefully. The design is quite good. The design of the mirror is a completely opposite mirror enemy, and the design of the shadow is just one more target to be attacked. The design of the shadow can be richer. For example, the body will not be injured when it is attacked, but only the shadow will be injured. The damage judgment of the body and the shadow is swapped. The same is true for the enemy. The perspective of both sides is on the body, but it is only effective when the shadow is attacked, and the shadow must exist, otherwise you will die. This can also use light to affect shadows, making attacks more diverse and harder to predict. Of course, the above is just my personal opinion, and there is no need to take it seriously.

Your book, to be honest, can't pass the signing stage, so I'll just say it. Your writing style really wants to express details, but there are many small problems. It's not too tiring to read, but the language problem is very discouraging. The key is that I can still read the very obvious AI flavor. Polish it, let's not talk about your writing skills and plot. Your writing habit is very bad, really bad. You probably didn't use AI to generate the text, but used some polishing. The parts you wrote are really separated from AI. I read one chapter and there was nothing wrong with the plot. Take another look.

I feel that the cyberpunk feel is somewhat lacking. The current plot content is all about cultivating immortals and supernatural beings, and the cyberpunk feel is relatively weak. Artificial AI, virtual reality, Internet drugs, artificial prosthetics, body modification, anarchism, giant corporations and other things that are more on the technological side are rarely described in articles. If the content of cultivating immortality is compared to a gentle river, then cyberpunk is a rapid torrent, which is more stimulating for people to read. There is also the danger of the world. We currently know that there is, but this is on the supernatural side. The cyberpunk side can also have some wandering AI or malfunctioning machines, just like in Cyberpunk 2077. Ask the author if he is imitating the feel of Foxtail's pen when writing a book, trying to describe a feeling of true and false, false and true.

Sir, please comment on my book and give me some suggestions. Some of the settings in my book are a bit similar to yours.