
Symbiotic AI Mecha
共生AI机甲
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 105k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Interstellar Civilization
- Updated
- 11mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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I saw it on Writer's Assistant, let's read and comment on it. Let's talk about the advantages first. The writing is relatively smooth. Although there are some flaws, it reads much better than most books on the market. Moreover, the dialogue between Xiao Hei and the protagonist is a bit reminiscent of Babata and Luo Feng. It is quite interesting and feels like the product of extraterrestrial civilization. The author reminded me of Raven from Armored Core when he came up with the code name. Of course, after talking about the advantages, it's time to turn to the disadvantages. In fact, there are no big problems. I feel that the battle description can be optimized. I can't feel the collision of iron and fire, metal frenzy, and steel torrent. This is the most attractive. The camera switching should also be optimized, otherwise it will be very affecting. After all, there are two story lines. Please also come and read my books and give me some suggestions, thank you.