Life Is Not Easy, so Honglong Performs as a Performer?

A book of dragon novels gave me the illusion of playing Zootopia for the second time. The protagonist's image is rich and full, which is by no means comparable to the modern imbecile protagonist who just got lucky. The world view setting is also self-contained and unique. Contradictions and contentment in the life of the lower class under the background of the peace oath, the red dragon living in the bustling modern city. These seemingly mutually exclusive concepts collide with each other, showing a completely different world picture that was born out of DND, as well as a protagonist who is as smart, intelligent, cute and ruthless as Fox Nick, which gives people a refreshing feeling. I really like the protagonist's image and world settings, and I hope the author will keep updating them.

When I first read this article, I thought it was worth mentioning. But now, it is at least above average. Longwen is a niche market, and most Longwen updates are unstable and unfinished, resulting in more readers buying books. It is normal for new authors to drop reading and subscriptions when they enter a weak period. Authors should not let normal fluctuations affect their mentality. Only by insisting on stable updates and a steady flow can they win the trust of readers. First let me talk about what I think is good about this book: 1. The biggest highlight of this book is the unique world view. In the bizarre world, there are plots that are different from the traditional dragon literature. If you think about it carefully, it is true that the red dragon can do things. 2. Secondly, a large number of flesh-and-blood, vivid and concrete supporting characters are portrayed together, and the existence and experiences of these supporting characters help readers further understand and explore this world. What impressed me most was the quilboar castrate. His tragic story only used a few strokes to describe the actual racial inequality in this federation that declared racial equality. Now let's talk about the areas where I think there is potential for improvement: 1. The level of plot control is insufficient. For example, a narration was used to insert that if Elizabeth had come earlier, she would have discovered that the person who came to build the mage tower was a strange god. An insertion outside the perspective of the protagonist immediately makes it seem like the miss is a deliberate arrangement, and the subsequent plot can be guessed and loses the sense of expectation (for example, I guess the subsequent plot is about Elizabeth and the false god from a foreign land missing each other until the conflict between the alien god and the bishop suddenly breaks out). Even if the subsequent plot is different, some people who plan to keep it first will not be able to see it. Who knows when they will come back to read it. In this regard, the author is advised to ask the editor and participate in the training of the starting point fragment class to improve the ability to control the plot. 2. The supporting characters have too many activities and take over the main role, especially plots that cannot promote the discovery of the main plot. For example, the alien false god was born from the leader of the group, the multi-headed dragon, came to register and was surrounded and confronted, etc., And also introduced the conflict between the transients and the alien false god, the internal dialogue of the wood elf family, etc. The branches took up too much content. After one chapter, the protagonist's life was complete, but the main plot of building the mage tower was basically unchanged. Is this ridiculous? 3. Updates should be of high quality and quantity, and leave some manuscripts for yourself in advance. At least a sudden leave of absence for a day or two will not affect the update. If you dare not update for two days, this book will basically not be pinned to the top of the homepage but will be placed in your favorites, or even not collected at all. Leaving three or five chapters in the manuscript to ensure stable updates is more effective in retaining reading than sometimes breaking out and sometimes asking for leave. Then I said that not doing it will have little impact, but doing it is better: 1. Change the cover to one that is not a clone. This cover is so common. I have collected this book as a clone cover for a long time, but I only clicked on it two days ago after it was recommended by other Longwen readers. Nine out of ten books with this kind of clone cover are bad. If I don't recommend them, I usually only read the ones with good reviews and good reviews. 2. Increase the interaction with readers. At least there is a reader group, so that everyone can supervise your coding, and you can also add some error correction red envelopes and other benefits. Interacting with readers can also improve your ideas. In addition, if you want to develop further later, you can also learn more about your work by looking for operators from the readership group. Some operators can even help you plan activities and promote multiple books to each other. Stably updated to ensure quality. This world has only explored the tip of the iceberg. There are still many exciting plots you can sketch. Your foundation is higher than most novices. This book is steadily updated to the end. The next book will have a higher starting point, more reading and more recommendations. Your imagination is enough to support high-quality works!

Recently, I personally like to read a dragon novel. The author has persisted with Qidian for two years and successfully signed the contract for the first time. It is a very interesting fantasy and magic novel, with a novel setting and good writing style. The character of the protagonist is quite interesting. The little red dragon who is upright and confident is very charming and vivid. The supporting characters are also vivid. There is nothing serious about it. Overall, it is relatively smooth and comfortable to watch. It can hit the mark of most readers.

Four stars, this book describes another kind of red dragon, that is, the scene of living under the real human order and civilization. It is well written. After I got a stable job, I felt strange that I disliked the life of eating magic crystals for no reason. Why haven't I seen people in reality eat cakes, porridge, and bread instead of rice? Others, he corrected this weird problem

Damn it, slandering our great red dragon clan like this

Nowadays, the rules of the book review area are corrupt and traitors are everywhere. This is due to the lack of updates. If the author diligently updates 10,000 words every day, then the traitors will be afraid and retreat, and the moral gentlemen will rejoice. This is a feat worthy of praise by Yao and Shun. I heard that calves born in sheep pens will not behave like sheep when they grow up. You are at the starting point and your computer keyboard is often used, but you have lost interest in updating it. Is this reasonable? The reason why Qidian is strong is that we have inherited the etiquette and skills of our ancestors. Stop bursting, the pressure has nowhere to release, and instead you become tired. Isn't this the same as abandoning the roots of the tree and pursuing the treetops? If this continues, great disaster will surely happen! The reason why Bai Jin can earn tens of thousands of royalties and not be harmed by villains is precisely because they are willing to listen to what upright gentlemen have to say! But Pujie cannot get royalties, and is even looked down upon by his girlfriend. This is because they are close to evil villains. I hope you can think carefully about the difference. There is one thing for which the author can cry bitterly, and six things for which the author can sigh. Since ancient times, when performing actions, the words are often very passionate. If they are not passionate, they will not be able to move the actor's heart. Harsh words are akin to slander. Author, you should think carefully about whether such a thing is right or wrong. Those authors who updated less, delayed, or missed updates had no time to feel sad about themselves, so they were drowned in the torrent of works, leaving only later authors to feel sad about them; later authors felt sad and did not learn from it, and future authors felt sad about it!

It's quite interesting, but not showy at all. The protagonist simply applied for a job, and then he kept fighting gangs. The connection between mainly fighting gangs and the title is a bit too weak, and even conflicts 😳. A dragon who is willing to be an exhibit and meditate all day long, shouldn't he be a Buddhist? If he is willing to go around robbing people with swords and swords, will he still go to the idle class? When the protagonist first meets those gangsters, he earns a bounty equivalent to 88 weeks' salary in one go. What kind of job is he supposed to do? They are all sent to prison to help him mine. Working is a waste of time for him to make a fortune.

Let's slide the rails first and then delete them later.

The author obviously didn't understand why so many people read it at the beginning, but it became the same as the regular dragon essay later. Since it is the same as the regular dragon essay, why not read someone with better writing skills.

Did Red Dragon Novel-chan still fall down? Farewell without saying goodbye 😭 Alas

First, the Lich, the most famous one, needs to hold a life box and hide it well, because the life box cannot be hidden in a demiplane or a different space. This method has great disadvantages, because you become a dead person, and you cannot enjoy many of the enjoyments of a living person. The emotional loss is inevitable, and you will eventually lead to the path of cold evil. In the end, he either becomes a dead otaku or is conscripted and purified after a long period of emotional loss! Second, race change. There are two ways to do this. One is to use professional transformation/advanced profession to try to become an immortal creature without losing CL (caster level): such as fey creatures, alien creatures, constructs, and elemental creatures. A very few advancements will change your creature type into a mud monster (a bad advancement will cause you to lose intelligence and charm) and a plant. Advancements that turn you into a plant are a trap! Plant templates will only slow down your aging, and you will still die at the end of your life! The second way to change the race is to obtain an acquired bloodline template, such as fey bloodline or half-elf bloodline, and then with the help of an advanced transformation mage or druid, perform a race transformation ceremony to completely transform into an elf or fey creature. This method cannot transform into an elemental creature, because bloodline has strength. Third, some lineages/bloodlines are strong but have a short lifespan, such as half-giants. Giant bloodlines can transform into giants through race. However, the lifespan of intermediate and low-level giants (below CR17) is up to a thousand years, and their length is not as long as that of elves. Fourth, the half-dragon template, this is a trap, it is powerful but not as good as finding a mage to use ritual magic to stuff your soul into a dragon egg. Then it develops, hatches and lives another life as a dragon. Fifth, the sacrificial ritual. I know that there is an evil ritual called the Cradle of the Scarlet Mother . It is extremely evil and requires the sacrifice of a wide range of intelligent creatures in a certain procedure. The number is about 300,000 to 500,000. The advantage is that the beneficiary/master of ceremonies can be a mortal! After the ceremony is over, one can become a legendary angel, Balor Balrog, or legendary elemental elder. However, because it is too evil, the successful completion of the ceremony will definitely attract the attention of the gods, so those who do this always find a small or medium plane to do it. It's safer to have someone to protect you... But the top celestial creatures are basically countless/have their feet, and suddenly one pops out... Gods are not all fools, okay...

A eunuch? Didn't I remember that the writing was quite interesting? Why haven't I updated for several days?

This book is very well written. I subscribed to a few more chapters and wanted to read it before I died. As expected, Qidian's new book cannot be subscribed casually.

I don't want to read those messy things at all. What I came here to read is the daily life after entering the zoo. Can those things be interspersed with writing after entering the zoo?

It's quite novel, but there is no female protagonist at the moment. Damn it, I want to see an evil kid driving a big car.

The writing is quite realistic and very similar to my experience as a dragon. It can be seen that the author has put in a lot of effort.

If you want to cut it, just say so and take the book off the shelf so that readers can contact customer service for a refund.

As the title says, if the author has time, he might as well change the cover. Today I was looking through the bookshelf and saw three books side by side and it was a bit overwhelming 😂

How come you are dying if you use incense?

Have you ever been a dragon? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

Not only technologically but also politically

Well, it's hard for an idea to become a story. To write a story seriously, you cannot have just one idea. Of course, this is not meant to be harsh, this is the only way to write a story. Let's go again next time.

There has been no update for several days. Is there something wrong or is the article abandoned? Who knows what to say?

It's really well written, and it's better than Xuan Jian and Mystery, which are on the recommendation list. I looked at those two things several times without looking in. Finally, my best friend forced herself to look in. She felt normal.

Incense! He was raised to death! ! !

It's very interesting to write, why haven't you updated it?

How about trying to write again? The beginning is very good, platinum qualification, you need to practice hard and write more to gain experience.

It's very well written. Why don't you write more 🙂

It is also a Red Dragon police article with a similar background. It takes readers to see the fantasy world through the perspective of a police officer. The author has been guided by the real dragon, and the aesthetics of the writing are guaranteed. In the 500th year of the Era, the seventh city-state where I was located was known as the city with the best security in the entire continent. I have made an indelible contribution to this. Because of me, a pure-blooded red dragon became a street justice patrolman. After the Great Collapse, the spiritual veins dried up, and rune industry replaced magic practice. The runes drive the suspended car through the clouds, and the magic terminal connects the daily life of every intelligent species. In the neon signs of rune colors, elves are innovating the rune academy, gnomes are opening rune stone futures exchanges, and succubi are thanking the top brother for the reward in the live broadcast room. And Gauss, a pure-blooded red dragon, has been practicing magic for 20 years after time travel. On the day of graduation, he found that his professional counterpart was gone. His plan to conquer the world could only be postponed a little, so he had to solve the problem of organization first. Orcs are causing trouble in their territory, goblins are stealing underwear, mysterious mages are organizing crimes, drow are trafficking in humans, etc. The orcs caused trouble in the tavern and flew away with their tails, the elves sold people on the streets, burned them to ashes with a mouthful of dragon breath, and the magicians attacked the police in the street and shattered their staffs with roars. Bring a bit of dragon justice shock to the multi-racial seventh city-state full of freedom, and help these bastards recall the fear of the dragon lord's rule in the ancient times. "Officer Goss, the civil rights organization complained that you have excessive law enforcement and are suspected of racial discrimination." "Let him go to hell, discrimination? Ben Long looks down on all races equally. This city needs bad people, and only dragons that are worse than scum can trample scum under their feet." (pseudo DND/no heroine/daily/slow heat/this dragon is a good dragon, don't talk nonsense)

Does anyone remember what the author's new book is? I forgot to read it yesterday and deleted it.