Late Qing Dynasty: Seven Seas Silver Sail

Don't rebel if you wear it clean, use an electric drill to pierce the chrysanthemum🌼

The writing is fine, but if you have cheats, it's better to rebel and go to the Manchu bastard.

First of all, the author's background is the late Qing Dynasty. The Qing Dynasty has been pillaged. You, a person with no power and background, are going to rebel? Instead of competing in the soon-to-be-chaotic mainland, it would be better to occupy more territory for the Chinese overseas and then use corrupt immigrants from the Qing Dynasty. Secondly, the protagonist is an indigenous fused soul of a time traveler, so he is essentially an indigenous person. Although he has more memories, he should still be afraid of the imperial court and how to rebel. Finally, Goldfinger's Heart of the Seven Seas increases maritime capabilities, so isn't colonizing the sea better than fighting on a weak continent? So don't always wear the clothes to rebel.

First of all, the introduction seems to be about semi-time travel, and there is no sense of immersion at all. Is the protagonist mainly about soul traveling? Or are they mainly indigenous? This kind of eunuch is like a eunuch, neither male nor female, neither above nor below.

Looking forward to seeing more shipwreck plots, Goldfinger➕Memory should be able to make a fortune in Southeast Asia

The writing is too detailed and a bit watery. The plot progressed too slowly, and I left early without any patience. I hope that the author will enter the main line as soon as possible, develop his power, and build his country overseas.

Some people say that my book is the same as yours. After reading it, it does have a similar beginning. God, I just saw your book today! Unjustly accused! Fortunately, we are going in a different direction.

This subject matter is still relatively new. I hope it will be updated a little faster. Today's society is more impetuous and I don't have the patience to wait.

Hello, author, I like time travel and fine historical novels with the characteristics of Goldfinger. There are very few historical novels at the starting point. All the Goldenfinger historical novels are too cool to read. When I saw you writing about the Seven Seas Yinfan in the late Qing Dynasty, I thought you would write about the family history of the Qiao Family Courtyard. From the local society and historical background and system in the late Qing Dynasty, you wrote less and less. When you wrote about women dressing up as men, you became more and more cool. I was very disappointed.

It's as watery as the Pacific Ocean. I wrote three or four chapters to confirm a site, and I kept repeating a topic like a wheel. I can't imagine that it would be waterlogged if it was published.

A bit slow, many people can't wait

I feel like there's something wrong with the author's rhythm, so I have some suggestions. The author's themes and stories are all bonus points, but there is a problem with the protagonist. If the protagonist can earn money from one fish catch that even the top fisherman cannot earn, then there is no need to struggle for survival. That means you can get rich by fishing honestly every day. The oppression by officials and the poverty and downfall of the family that were foreshadowed in the past are completely useless, and it will have no meaning and cannot be linked together. On the contrary, it would be very good to write about a poor young man who risked his life to survive on the sea, training against the wind, waves and nature. If the protagonist completes the game as soon as you start the game, you have to find other motivations for the protagonist to become an outlaw pirate. In this genre, it is best to write Goldfinger in a more realistic and serious way, because reality is cold and profound, so your plot and corresponding points must also be reflected. Otherwise, it will be incoherent and the article will lack a bold literary style. If you just want to write a short article, just pretend I didn't say this.

The author has made it clear that he originally wanted to write an anti-Qing historical article, but he thought it was difficult to control it, so he changed the subject. Do you really not read books and just oppose the Qing Dynasty when you first come up? It's a hammer. If you want to read anti-Qing books, just look for anti-Qing books and quilts. Do you have to let the author write according to your ideas? How much do you pay the author? Threatened to abandon the book? Something is wrong!

Author, don't listen to these comments, write at your own pace

Very well written. Don't listen to others.

I just joined VIP so I don't write much. If I don't update for 8 days, I'm cheating 😰

The ancients said that writing a book is to express your ambition. If you don't have something to express, writing for the sake of writing is like a person without a soul and will never succeed.