Swallowed Star: Starting with Cloud-Raising Luo Feng

At thirty, author, how can you gain a foothold in the online literature circle when you write less than 30 chapters in a day?

I suggest you delete the "Bolan" column in the introduction. Luo Feng's space law has caught up with Bolan's after practicing it for decades from scratch. Even a garbage talent like Bolan deserves to be rewarded!

The best part about the last book is that it doesn't overwhelm the protagonist, and the rapid growth in combat power is not a problem in my opinion. After all, the chat group next door has been suppressing the combat power, so forget it. There are too many water characters, and it looks so good in the early stage. The problematic part lies in the beginning of the early stage, such as defrauding Luo Feng for a loan at the beginning and then opening up about it. One is the use of certain items after the loan, such as the tree that swallows monster corpses. The valuable parts are repaid to the system, and the worthless flesh and blood parts are absorbed by the tree. In the end, all the parts are thrown to the tree. I personally prefer the mid to late stage. As for the later stages, such as when Luo Feng became the Lord of the Universe, since it was mainly a snowballing improvement, the entire rhythm was directly used. Personally, I think this way of writing is more supportive. After all, if you write slowly, it may become watermarks. But I still hope that the author can put more rhythm into the new book. Finally, it's about updates. The author does not need to be anxious, the key is to control the rhythm well and the content is exciting. Just update 50 chapters a day, I don't care.

I've grown to 500,000 words. Come on and kick me.

Wrong writing! How can you be a domain master without a domain?

As we all know, the tricks played by the original protagonist Luo Feng in the original work are even more exaggerated than those played by many fans (some fans have different timelines from the original work), such as the planet-level golden-horned giant beast that ordinary immortal-level powerhouses look up to, the universe-level (or domain lord level), the Nine Tribulations Secret Book created by the god-king-level powerhouse, and the realm lord, who was raped by the god king. Some people think it is a weapon of the God King, but it is actually a more powerful weapon... (What kind of tower is it? Forget it, let's call him Luo Feng Tower (~_~;)) So you can't play it without cheating, and the author of this novel has written very well, and the cheats are large, and he does not stress the level at all. He will not go out of his way to write more articles and make more money.

This book should focus more on the original universe. The previous book got to the origin and then stopped. It felt boring. From now on, it seems that it ended without even writing many chapters.

I haven't read the last one, so I found out there's a new one on the shelves.

The new book is great, keep it up! I can't stand a lot of Devouring fanfics, but this one is very interesting. Maybe it's because I'm particularly disgusted with the protagonists in other fanfics trying to steal Luo Feng's opportunity. After all, readers who like to swallow the starry sky cannot hate Luo Feng, and the protagonists of fan fiction usually have golden fingers given by the author, and they still have to grab the resources of the original protagonist. However, their personality charm is not one ten thousandth as good as Luo Feng. They are either selfish and greedy, or greedy for life, or lustful, or greasy... The author's ideas in both the previous book and this one are very good. Growing together with Luo Feng, mutual benefit, not robbing others of opportunities, and getting benefits behind the scenes. It feels like it has opened a new path among Devouring fandoms.

The pacing of the previous book felt pretty good, and it didn't overwhelm the protagonist. I hope this one maintains that feeling. Come on!