I Can Load Entrance Effects

The author's writing style and elite protagonist have a very small audience. It is a genre that is mostly enjoyed by middle school and high school students. However, this group of people mainly watch pirated versions.

I thought it was one world and one special effect... Except for the first time, I haven't seen anything else yet!

I don't want to see the whole world running away from the savior. If you want to write about personal power, don't write so many supporting characters.

The author didn't seem to strongly connect the two when constructing the title and outline of the book. When I first read this book, I didn't want to read it when I saw the title. After reading it twice, I found it quite interesting. The protagonist uses personal force to solve world crises. The government uses strong organizational power to suppress dangerous outbreaks, and constantly explores the technological power of various worlds.

The beginning is very attractive, I hope it will get better in the middle and later stages. I couldn't follow the first two books until the middle stage.

I can't stand it. This pussy is not round enough and too stiff.

Damn it, it looks like driving a hundred-ton king into another world.

The first two chapters look a bit like trench crosses.

It's normal for fans to turn original ideas into original ones, it's too convoluted. When writing a fanfic, at least you have the plot of the original novel to back it up, and you follow the main storyline and it's more planned. It's hard to get ahead with originality all by yourself. Unless you're really talented, you should go back to your comfort zone later on. I've read both of your Pirates books, and they're both on par. I only read your book twice because of the first two books. The original characters were a bit dry and flat. The characters in the previous pirate novels at least had original characters that I could make up for, but I really can't imagine this one. Go back to the fandom area and practice some more, and accumulate some fans. At least it's guaranteed. Didn't you have a few pirate chapters before? If you write again, I will read it and support it. How long will it take to open a new book?

The title of the book, the comments, and the content. Each has its own characteristics. Personally, I think the content is okay, but the others are too fragmented. I would like to call it a novel.