Master of the World: Start with the Dragon Gate Card

The writing is incomprehensible. Your dragon gate has not been established yet. How do you know that the fish in your small world has the blood of Yinglong? Also, don't write so many speculations. It gives you a headache.

According to traditional customs, the position of the cave heaven is above the blessed land. There are 36 cave heavens and 72 blessed lands in Daomen. Have you considered changing the locations of Dongtian and Blessed Land?

It's hard to imagine how this ethnic group survived if there were alien spies in the basic colleges on the bad streets. Shouldn't they be almost exterminated?

It's still the same routine as Uemoto Dodou, almost the same plot. There is no progress or change at all. This lump of love may only be loved by Lao Ba.

1 The way to practice is very strange. The world of the Lord of the World cannot feed the Lord of the World back, and can only rely on the materials produced to practice. 2 Take multiple extraordinary paths. The protagonist's main extraordinary should be the Lord of the World, but after entering the fantasy path, he does not continue to enter other paths to obtain resources 3 It is written about Dragon Gate. His main subordinates are humans, and fish and dragons are cultivation resources. It is unclear why the protagonist chooses human beings as his subordinates. Their fertility is not as good as that of fish, their combat power is probably not as good as that of dragons, and they also need more resources than fish. 4 The opportunities that the protagonist gets are all for cultivating immortals, such as (Guimenguan, Longmen, Taoist priests). These do not follow the system of cultivating immortals. I don't understand

There is a BUG Taoist boy in the two books of the author. This Taoist boy has incredible qualifications and is obtained from cards. The cards are not very rare. The promotion of the small world is closely related to the breakthroughs of the people in the small world. It can be said that a Taoist boy with incredible qualifications can lead the Lord of the World, but the protagonist just obtains a Taoist boy with incredible qualifications and is then taken away by this Taoist boy. It can be said that the Tao Tong card is the most critical card for the protagonist to take off, but such cards are actually not rare in the book. The Tao Tong card used by the protagonist is no different from other people's, but the protagonist's card can open the Tao Tong, just like opening a box in the game. A copper box can only open up to silver, but the protagonist can open colorful ones. If you want a citizen who defies heaven, I think it is more reasonable to directly arrange for the small world to give birth to one. This can also show that the protagonist's small world is more special and the protagonist is more talented.

I read Chapter 60 of the novel, and the plot is too slow, referred to as "Water". I have doubts about this and that, and the thing that makes me speechless the most is that I usually listen to books, and when I talk to people in the world, some dialogues that are neither clear nor clear, make my head hurt listening to them... I'm gone...

Basically useless. Does the author have an outline? Do you know what effect you want to write? You have to advance the plot. Stop the water.

It's the same routine regardless of changing the soup or the medicine. The key is that I don't know what's going on with the author. He always likes to want all kinds of systems and mix them into a mess 😅

It's a meaningless thing to say over and over again. It's too watery and it lowers the quality. If you remove these things, you can go up to two levels and watch more smoothly.

There are many conjectures and inferences that appear out of nowhere

Human energy is limited. The protagonist walks five paths alone, which is purely s and b. It is obviously based on the small world, but the protagonist behaves as if he were there.

Can the setting with the traitor be removed? There is a traitor in a small county, and they are also high-level officials of the college. Then it is discovered that geniuses are not dared to cultivate, including the protagonist. Do you have persecution delusions?

The author is a student and his grades are neither good nor bad

If you haven't read the old book, it should look good. It's an old wine in a completely new bottle, no changes.

I want to write something big, but I can't.

There are too many things, and the author lays them all out at once.

If you can't continue writing, just finish the old book.

Should I have it cut off or should I take leave and send a message?

Now that you are a eunuch, go and write old books.