Traveling Across the Heavens Starts from Mantuo Villa

Just by looking at the introduction, I have no desire to read on. Other novels are from low to high, or there is no hope in the super-magic world, so I go to the small world to seek opportunities! ! ! Looking at the introduction, I ran from Tianlong to Xiaoao, and then ran to the snow to be Xu Xiao's son-in-law. I didn't like Xu Fengnian's family in the original novel. They were simply a replica of Tang San's family, even more disgusting than the little Zha San...

The whole novel is full of weird plots that seem to be taken for granted. He was dragged by Mrs. Wang to make fertilizer, and with a few sweet words, Wang Yuyan let him go and taught martial arts. The second time he sneaked into the Langhuan Jade Cave of Mandala Villa as soon as he had the inner strength. He took out the account book and told Wang Yuyan that this was a small Wuxiang Kung Fu with code words. Wang Yuyan herself didn't know or doubt where the information the protagonist said came from! The strongest person in the entire villa is not as strong as the main character who has just started practicing martial arts for a few days and has the inner strength to fight. The entire villa is made up of women and yet they are so weak. I don't know why they haven't been destroyed for so long! Suddenly a group of water bandits and a gang of beggars hijacked everyone in the village to interrogate the whereabouts of Langhuan Jade Cave and killed many people. The protagonist actually wanted to pretend to be Murong Fu to scare off the enemy. What kind of brain circuit is this? ... Anyway, I've only been here for about ten chapters and I'm so poisonous.

After reading the introduction, I feel that the protagonist Tianlong starts from the beginning, and there is no need to go to the other Condor and Swordsman. You can definitely read the works of other martial arts writers. The collision and integration of different systems is far better than going to the next level to help the poor and show off. And I hope that the author will not make these old maps, but can add martial arts or similar martial arts works in recent years, such as Pillow Sword Song, Assassin Wu Liuqi, Jianghu series, Lotus Tower, Under One Man, Who is the Hero (preferably novels, TV series martial arts are too rubbish and completely lose the characteristics of the original characters), Golden Light and Pili Puppetry, etc. I'm really tired of those formulaic worlds in the starting point.

When I read the introduction, I felt thunder rolling from the sky. Damn it, Mrs. Wang uses people as fertilizer, how could Wang Yuyan not know? Why should we save the protagonist? So, she, who has never saved anyone, saves the protagonist. What kind of development is this? Got knocked down by the protagonist? Can anyone explain this?

If you're trying to be logical, you can't survive three chapters. You were rescued by Wang Yuyan on an island and let go. Mrs. Wang probably didn't care about you, even if she loved her daughter. You still went to hook up with his daughter and took you to a place where martial arts secrets were hidden. Not to mention that Mrs. Wang didn't know about it. With her ruthless actions of killing people and raising flowers, no one on this island would dare to hide it from her. If you say a few words to Wang Yuyan, you will be reported.

Funny, Wang Yuyan grew up in an environment like Mantuo Villa where people often kill people to enrich themselves. She is not kind-hearted at all and will not save the protagonist.

Dacheng's Xiao Wuxiang Kung Fu is a top-notch master, but the author's nonsense is to forcefully reduce the intelligence and suppress the combat power of pig's feet! Li Qiu Shui, a member of the Three Heavenly Dragons, specializes in internal energy, which is Xiao Wuxiang Kung! ! ! ! What is your Dacheng, Li Qiushui?

Is this protagonist sick? What are you doing in the apricot forest? You are like a brother, Qiao Feng also treats you as a brother, and then Xingzilin just watches the show! When fighting, if you don't detoxify the poison of Sadness Qingfeng first, you have to pinch the antidote in your hand and hit it halfway until it falls down.

The male protagonist's outlook on life is simply not normal. He empathizes with Yun Zhonghe. If someone attacks you, you "don't want to take the blame" so you don't kill him! ?

It would be a pity not to allow "Mrs. Wang" to have a few children!

The main character is like a fucking bitch. Things don't make sense.

The main character is so stupid. There are cheats and you still jump like that, you can't be docile. There is no big poison, small poisons are constant

The writing smells like licking. If a woman has something to do, she will lick it and help her.

I won't talk about the protagonist paddling the whole time. Maybe the author is afraid of changing the plot and doesn't know how to write it down. But when I saw Ye Erniang throwing the dead baby at the protagonist as a hidden weapon, the protagonist got angry and then got angry for a while. This really made me sick.

Even a body that is invulnerable to all poisons cannot withstand it! ! !

He first promised Qiao Feng to take care of his parents, then turned around and said that Qiao Feng's adoptive parents considered death as home and arranged to stay at a neighbor's house while he went to find Qiao Feng.

Is it necessary for such a person to travel through time? Isn't it better to watch the Tian Long Ba Part again than to watch this kind of drama stealing Duan Yu?

Don't think about forcing Wang Yuyan to be sent to the protagonist. Duan Yu even licked her like that and couldn't win her heart. You still write like this

It's nearly 1 million words, and there are less than 100 comments so far. I have an idea of ​​whether it's good or not.

Didn't take advantage of the small phaseless power at all

It's really baffling for many fans✍️to ask Wang Yuyan to practice martial arts. Considering the way Wang Yuyan licked Murong Fu in the early stage, and the burden she had all the way after leaving the world, wouldn't she want to practice internal martial arts and better help her cousin? Then why doesn't she practice? Because her qualifications are too poor, even worse than her mother's qualifications! After Wang Yuyan was cut into Wang Yuyan, only her understanding was left! Her physical aptitude makes it impossible for her to learn internal skills!

Recommended worlds that the protagonist travels through: Japanese comics (Naruto and Boruto, Space Knight, Bleach, Fate/Stay Night, One Piece, Dragon Ball, Fate Zero, Fate Grand order, Apocrypha of Destiny, Magical Girl Yin Liya, Tsukihime, Night of the Magicians, Dragon Ball, Saint Seiya, Halberd Shouting Spirit, The Little Master of China, Light Messenger, Dragon Fighter, Shaman King, Yu-Gi-Oh, Showy Magician, Red Eyes, Gao Seed, Gundam 00, Gundam Unicorn, EVA, Lelouch of the Rebellion, Macross and Macross Frontier, Demon of Destruction, Pokémon, Digimon 1-5, Stigma of the Wind, The Rising of the Shield Hero, Demon Slayer, Lost Hero Knight Tan, Steel Shell City Reggios, Inuyasha, Attack on Titan, Tokyo Ghoul, Cross and Vampire, Slam Dunk, Football Player, Highly Intelligent Formula Racing, Kuroko's Basketball, Four-wheel Drive Brothers, Slippery's Grandson, Demon God Altar Fighter, Life in a Different World from Scratch, God Killer, Is It Wrong to Seek Encounter in the Dungeon, Blessings for a Beautiful World, Fairy Tail, Magic's Index of Forbidden Books and a certain scientific electromagnetic gun, One Punch Man, Spell Return). National Comics (The Origin of the White Snake, The Bright Moon of the New Qin Dynasty, Nine Songs of the Sky, The Rebirth of Nezha on the New God List, The Return of the Great Sage, Devouring the Starry Sky, The Transformation of the Stars, Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, Fengyun Jue, The Dragon of the Qin Dynasty Bright Moon Soaring Ten Thousand Miles, Wu Geng Ji, Young Song Xing, Legend of the Dark River, The Young White Horse Drunken in the Spring Breeze, Killing the Immortal, Covering the Sky, Becoming a God through Hundred Refiners, Immortal Rebellion, Dragon and Snake Romance , Battle against the Sky, The Great Master, Senior Brother, Senior Brother, Cangyuan Tu, Chang'an Thirty Thousand Miles, Journey to the West, Journey to the West, Eternal Life, Perfect World, Honorable One, Yang Jian on the New God List, Nezha's Demon Boy Comes to the World, Jiang Ziya, The World of Immortality, God's Tomb, The God of Shepherd, The Martial Universe, The Gate of the Mysterious Realm, The Wilderness, Yang Shen, The Devil's Sky, Beyond Time, The Other Side of Deep Space). Movies (Man of Steel, Wonder Woman, Justice League, The Incredible Hulk, Iron Man, Thor, The Avengers, Captain Marvel, The Mummy 1-3, Resident Evil, Alien, Shushan, Ant-Man, Spider-Man 1- 3. Fantastic Four, My Girlfriend, New Crane, Super School Bully, Underworld, Fist Fighter, My Girlfriend, X-Men Series, Chinese Heroes, Dominate the World, The Storm 2, Super Out of Control, Never Ending, Transformers). Hong Kong comics (Legend of the Son of Heaven 1-8, Mysterious Weapons 1-3 and side stories and prequels and F, Heroes of the Spring and Autumn Period, The Four Famous Catchers, The Peerless Two Prides, The Eight Parts of the Dragon, The Legend of the Condor Heroes, The Legend of the Condor Heroes, The Journey of the Knight, The Deer and the Cauldron, Wen Ruian's Heroes Legends 1 and 2, The Great Sage King, Jin's Dragon and Tiger Gate, the new Dragon and Tiger Gate and its prequels and spin-offs, The Killer, Journey to the West, Chronicles of the Gods, Iron Generals 2012, Mountains and Seas Counterattack, Legend of the Frontier, Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty, Rain and Clouds, Shattered Void, Looking for Qin Ji, Feng Yun 1-3 and Shenwuji, Haihu, Wushen, Shenzhang Longjianfei, Huang Yulang Drunken Master, battle record, fist fight, Eight Immortals, Realm of Gods, Super God Z, Wesley Z, Dragon God, King of Fighters, The Eighth Bronze Man of Shaolin Temple, Gaiden, Kung Fu, Divine Weapons of the Three Kingdoms, Wu Ba III Kingdom, Great Swordsman, Dragon and Tiger Five 1st and 2nd and 3rd, Dragon and Tiger 5th and Third Revenge, Great Warlord, Heaven Slaying the Dragon, Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon, Evil God 1 and 2, Invincible Sword Evil God, Creation Divine Weapon, Yiyongmen, Book of Six Paths, Demon Martial Crossing, Emperor Assassination, Xiao Li Flying Knife). TV series (Black Robe Picket, Water Moon Cave, Eight Formations, Dragon Balls of the Demon World, Battle for Hegemony, Palm of the Tathagata, Number One in the World, Magic Sword Chess of Life and Death, Jiang Qinqin's Version of the White-haired Witch, Journey to the East, Chen Haomin's Version of the List of Gods, Zombie and I A Date, Legend of Heaven and Earth: The Mermaid, Legend of Heaven and Earth: Lotus Lantern, Heroes of the Heavenly Sword, Oolong's Passion, Yunhai Jade Bow, A Chinese Ghost Story, Shameless, Superwoman, Agents of S. H. I. E. L. D., Meng Hua Lu, Do you know if it should be green, fat, red and thin, The Story of Rose). Games (Legend of Sword and Fairy 1-7, Xuanyuan Sword: Traces of the Sky, Legend of the Ancient Sword 1, Dynasty Warriors, Swordsman Love, Chronicles of the Three Kingdoms, Journey to the West, Legend of Heroes of the Three Kingdoms) Recommended protagonists: The power of nothingness, divine power and magical skills in the Chinese comic Wu Geng Ji (adapted from the Hong Kong comic Fengshen Ji), such as Zhenwu Big Thunderbolt and Tiandou Shaoyue, Qi refining techniques such as Tianyi Secret Technique, and the soul power of the underworld. Introduction to divine power: the exclusive ability of the gods. Most members of the Protoss unlock their abilities in their youth, which is called "Apocalypse". Usually during the "apocalypse", there must be a guardian with high-end divine power to prevent the power from backlash. (Representative: Black Dragon) Type of divine power: Colorless realm divine power—the rarest type of divine power, used to suppress sound, smell, strength, light, etc., Making all abilities significantly reduced and colorless. The divine power of the Primordial Realm—the most special type of divine power, belongs to the "ancient divine beasts". The divine power of the Shura Realm—calling the undead and spiritual beasts to assist in the battle. The higher the divine power, the stronger the thing summoned. The divine power of the King Kong Realm - mainly focused on attack and defense, greatly enhancing combat capabilities. The divine power of the Ksitigarbha Realm—can use dark abilities related to poison, decay, death, etc. The Divine Power of the Vientiane Realm—can control all phenomena of heaven and earth for one's own use, and use the power of nature to fight. The divine power of the void consciousness world - the ability to sense, communicate, share, etc. Those with the highest divine power can also glimpse the future and predict prophecies. The divine power of immortality—the secret of controlling life, recovery, medical treatment and other abilities. Qi Refining Technique: The technique of controlling 'Qi' by Wanqu people/human beings. The prerequisite for the user is to have a 'mind's eye', which can see the existence and flow of 'Qi'. Then use 'qi' to construct other shapes, such as weapons, organs, items, etc. The higher the ability, the more similar the objects constructed are to the real thing. Those at the top can also add other elements to the finished object, such as 'fire' to burn divine energy and soul, and 'gold' to enhance hardness and increase attack power, etc. The secret method of Tianyi - the unique secret method of the people of Wanqu, using the natural gas-refining body to build a hegemonic body with different attributes. The Secret Technique of Moving Stars—Use the secret technique to summon the arrival of the fantasy island and open the bridge between the two worlds. The method of rebirth - using Qi refining to transform the bodies of mortals, so that mortals can also use the secret Qi refining method of Wanqu Kingdom. Soul Power Introduction: The unique ability of the Hades to burn one's own soul to gain power. Introduction to Soul Power: Life Weapons into the Soul—Netherworld warriors burn their souls and then infuse them into specific weapons to obtain high combat capabilities. Enter the soul and break the limit - exert the limit of the life weapon into the soul, and use the highest level of soul power. Soul transfer - Hades warriors can inject their souls into other people's bodies to improve their abilities. Escape Technique: A teleportation technique exclusive to the Nether Clan. The higher the technique, the farther the movement range. The [Seven Heavens of Ice and Fire] created by the [Dark Clone] of [The First Ancestor of Eastern Zen Sect - Bodhidharma] in the new Hong Kong comic book Dragon Tiger Gate: Created by combining [Lihuo Xuanbing Gong] and [Yin and Yang Theory of the Book of Changes], it can make the cultivator have powerful [Ice and Fire Energy], as well as [violent] [Attack Power] [Counter Shock Power], and can absorb [heat energy and ice energy] from the outside world to [evolve oneself]! It emphasizes the continuous stimulation of the body by alternating hot and cold, breaking through the limits, and cultivating deep internal power of ice and fire from the outside in. The progress is rapid, but the process is dangerous! There are seven heavens in total: [First Heaven] Practicing luck can endure blows from sticks and punch with a hundred pounds of force. [Second Heaven] Luck can lift three times more weight than his body weight, and can withstand attacks from hard metal objects, but the joints, vagina, throat and head are still vulnerable parts. His punches can weigh up to two hundred pounds, and he can easily break bricks and rocks. [Third Heaven] After reaching the foundation of both internal and external training, the muscles of the hands, feet and limbs are strong and can penetrate into boiling water with a boiling point of 100 degrees. The skin of the beginners will be red, swollen and blistered, which is painful... What is even worse is that the practitioners immediately insert the burned limbs into a zero-degree water bucket filled with ice cubes. The skin is tortured by one heat and one freeze, and the exercise is cycled until the muscles are not afraid of cold and heat. At this stage, the hands and feet have become harder than steel. However, except for the limbs, the other external and internal organs of the human body are still unable to withstand high heat and extreme cold. Cooking and freezing will undoubtedly lead to death. After that, every step is a full-body exercise, which is several times more painful and difficult. [Fourth Heaven] For training, you need to borrow the barbecue room and frozen snow room of a large food factory to enter the initial stage of ice and fire that challenges endurance. First, adjust all the barbecue stoves to the maximum firepower. The practitioner puts up a yoga pose and silently endures the room temperature of 150 degrees. The longer the time, the better. The water in the practitioner's body evaporates rapidly. The burning heat is like a sharp needle piercing. The airway during breathing seems to be burned by fire, and everything inside is burned. The practitioner can also smell the burnt smell of his own barbecue, which is extremely nauseating and uncomfortable... After enduring the high fever, he immediately moved to the snow room, where the extreme cold suddenly changed to minus 15 degrees, and the experience was another story... The practitioner's body was stiff and frozen, as if thousands of knives were being chopped and scraped, and the muscles of the cone bones were sharpened. If the exercise failed to compete, the blood would coagulate and the nerves would be ruined and die. [Fifth Heaven] Also known as "Ice·Fifth Heaven", practitioners dive into a glacial lake at minus 200 degrees Celsius, and their body temperature drops to the verge of death. They practice under the high-pressure resistance at the bottom of the lake until they can move freely, and then they are successful. [Sixth Heaven] Also known as "Fire·Sixth Heaven", practitioners use the cold power of the "Fifth Heaven of Ice" to protect their bodies, endure the pain of burning in a thousand-degree furnace, and absorb the high heat for their own use. Those who succeed can condense air into ice and melt ice. The two powers of mist, ice and fire can be used at will, alternating at will. The Sixth Heaven of Ice and Fire is also called the "ice and fire enemy body". It is the result of cultivating the innate Qi to a subtle state, and then penetrates into every cell to transform and strengthen the body. . [Seventh Heaven] Repeated training in the Xuanbing Lake and the furnace of the steel mill, using the cyclic confrontation between ice and fire energy and high heat and extreme cold, as well as internal and external checks and balances, to force the improvement of skills. Starting from the high temperature of 1,000 degrees to 1,500 degrees, each practice increases by 500 degrees, until it reaches the high heat of 2,500 degrees that only titanium can withstand; in the Xuanbing Lake, the diving training time continues to increase. Practitioners are often in danger of almost death, but as long as they can reach the almost impossible seventh level, their internal and external skills will be astonishing, and they will have no rivals in the world. The Seventh Heaven of Ice and Fire (an upgraded and enhanced version of the Seventh Heaven of Ice and Fire, twice as powerful as Wang Haijiao's Seventh Heaven of Ice and Fire. When used for the first time, the heart will burst due to the overwhelming power, and each blow is so overbearing that it will shatter the bones of the hand). The Seventh Heaven of Ice and Fire of the Sun and Moon (Use the heart of the sword demon with the Divine Mirror of the Sun and the Moon to push the Seventh Heaven of Ice and Fire. Its power is greater than the Seventh Heaven of Ice and Fire of Wang Haijiao, but less than the ultimate Seventh Heaven of Ice and Fire). Ice and Fire Rebirth Power (Fifth Heaven): With the help of God Hunter Yu Yihang, Feng Lei successfully repaired the out-of-control Dark Evil Fist Power, and then developed an Ice and Fire Rebirth Power that surpassed the Seventh Heaven of Ice and Fire. When the rebirth energy reaches its peak in the seventh heaven, the two energies of ice and fire intersect and penetrate each other, returning to the first heaven of ice and fire. It seems to be a return to the original point, but in fact, the attack power and defense power have been almost doubled. The second level of rebirth strength is nearly doubled again, and so on. Ice and Fire Mantis (a martial arts created with the Seven Heavens of Ice and Fire, the moves are sinister and vicious). Drunken Mantis Fist: A boxing technique created specially for Wang Fenglei by Hong Dong, the leader of the Beggar Clan, based on Drunken Boxing and Praying Mantis Fist, but it is rarely used. Thunder Fire Ice Wind: Wang Fenglei created his own moves based on his own name and martial arts; Thunder Fire is mainly heavy and fierce, Ice Wind is mainly fast and accurate, and both fists and kicks can be used. Thunder, Fire, Ice and Wind Kill: It contains seven layers of ice and fire that repeatedly blast each other, layer by layer, causing a series of explosions. Ice and Fire Tai Chi Shield: Use the rotating hot and cold airflow to block the incoming force and withstand damage through polarization. Thunderbolt Crazy Dragon: Kicks out six consecutive kicks at the same time, attacking the Tianling, eyebrows, throat, heart, Dantian, Xia Yin and other fatal points. Breaking the World: Not letting go of every feeling and reaction of the body, feeling the opponent's intention, position, direction, blood flow, etc., And finding loopholes to attack the opponent. Subsequently, use strength to create a space to control the enemy to find the opponent's vulnerabilities and attack. Destroy Hell: Turn the world-shattering space into a stagnant movement, split the ice and fire energy into two, and drive the compressed powerful fire energy into the enemy's heart like a bullet to detonate the enemy's heart, thus achieving a one-hit kill. Seventh Heaven of Dark Ice and Fire: The First Heaven: Time Pause: Can pause time for 0.1 Seconds. Second Heaven: Reversal of Thinking: You can reverse the opponent's thinking through physical contact and confuse the enemy's brain. Third Heaven: Wushuang Awakening: Use gas to form and create clones. Fourth Heaven: Deeply Abominable: It doubles the pain after being injured, and the power of being blown by the wind is as terrifying as being cut into pieces by a thousand knives. When people are injured, they not only feel physical pain, but also endure mental torture and consume their willpower. Fifth Heaven: Originally set as a black hole-like attraction force to correspond to the Yi Jin Jing that uses the power of the universe. Later it was modified to Kagewu Residue: Similar to knocking a person's soul out of the body, the victim will see that he is not inside the body. In Ishiguroden 2, it seems to have been changed to four clones with a total of five colors as the main body. (The five colors were originally used to represent the afterimage of the soul being blasted out of the body) The Sixth Heaven: Originally set to allow oneself to enter a defenseless state to withstand the opponent's attack, thereby perceiving the opponent's martial arts methods and methods of movement, and thus understanding the power of the opponent's martial arts and how to break them. After reading the secret manual of the fifth and sixth heavens, Feng Lei met Konga, experienced the power of the Marrow Cleansing Sutra and realized it. He said that if the sixth heaven is used properly, he can become almost invincible Later it was modified to unbounded space: it allows the opponent to enter the world of emptiness and fantasy, and the opponent will not notice it at all. The Seventh Heaven: Unknown

Generally speaking, the protagonists of this kind of astronomy finish picking up girls in one world, and then directly break the void and go to other worlds. The girls in the previous world are not written at all. In order to read this novel, I flipped through the table of contents of nearly 200 chapters and looked at it. It seems that Wang Yuyan has never written more. I don't know which boss can tell me, has Wang Yuyan been taken to the next world together? I only saw that when I arrived in the next world, I started picking up girls directly.

It's written like a dog... Can't you kill more decisively? What the hell? You're like a bitch... They're all here to threaten you, but you're still letting others go? Cheap or not?

Which world story do you most want to see? You can express your opinion in the comment area. For the next world, I want to choose one among Datang, Fengyun and Rui Yu Fan Yun. Personally, I prefer Rui Yu Fan Yun. What do you think? The second world is in preparation.

Could you please watch Shennong Heroes?