The Love Healing Handbook

Can you write a book? I haven't seen the protagonist poop until now, so why doesn't the protagonist need to poop?

This author had this kind of virtue in the last book. He made a good start with a good subject, but in the middle, the content started to smell strange. Then he stopped updating without warning and deleted the group. After a few weeks, he came back with an insincere apology and updated intermittently. He ruined the initial good character creation and plot planning bit by bit. The ending was messy. What I didn't expect was that so many people would be fooled by her second book.

Let me put it bluntly, this book is of average quality, and its ability to persist for so long is all due to the author's little ingenuity and innovation in writing about training animal girlfriends. Let's talk about the characters first. The first thing is the protagonist. I was convinced as soon as I saw it. Brother, you write love novels. Do you know that falling in love is a two-way street? You write a fascinating protagonist, and you wish you could only interact with people for the reason of always seeing a doctor. Then there is Kitagawa, too little characterization, too ordinary, and Nishimiya, the portrayal is too poor to be bothered to say, Gong Cheng will say below. In terms of the plot, I can't go into details. The role of Miyagi is purely for fun. Miyagi is the only one who knows about such an important thing as his illness. His aunt doesn't know about it. She has never even met Miyagi. When they brought people to the house, they thought they were taking Kitagawa there. She didn't even leave any information to herself when she was sick. The reason was also nonsense. The fragmented memory logic during the onset of the illness will be confusing. If you dedicate your body to Miyagi, it can lengthen and then lead to reshape. The reason for not contacting now is to avoid the mental fluctuations caused by distance that lead to emotional imbalance. You are writing a Qiong Yao drama, it is too harsh. See for yourself if there is any logic. At the beginning, the author also said that Miyagi was not tortured for the sake of torture. Human turtles can be anything. I am too lazy to say it. Also, if the main palace seat is confirmed, it will be meaningless to watch the party struggle. In short, amnesia is chosen as the core link. Building a husband-chasing crematorium is too lucrative. You might as well be an ordinary medical student as the protagonist. After unlocking the system, you use points to pretend once and you become addicted. Various tests also come one after another. Not only did they complete more healing activities to gain points, unlocked various patients, and finally rose to prominence, but the heroines not only discovered that the protagonist's coldness at the beginning was fake, but gradually discovered that they liked the protagonist, and realized that they must work harder if they have a love rival. There are so many simple things about party fighting, but there is no youthful flavor in writing about love. I don't know how the author did it. Finally, the writing skills need to be trained urgently. The parents don't have it, the aunt takes care of it, the eldest daughter belongs to the chaebol, and there are bodyguards in black beside her, and the senior sister is a robot master. Everything is too classic, which is not to say that there are no better ones, but the various characters are not full of life, seem lifeless, and divorced from reality. A good novel must be above reality but not divorced from reality. Writing more can make up for it. The key update is still slow.

At a level between grain grass and grass jelly, for those who like Riqing, Riqing tastes quite good and can be considered a grass jelly. In addition, the perspective setting is very novel, starting from the perspective of a doctor, and it is not a traditional novel.

This author is amazing

Paralyzed. This is the author's moral character. He has no professional ethics. In the beginning, the book was always short and then he apologized for various reasons. When the update was stopped, there was no news at all. This book even ran away after completing it. After spending money, can you care about this starting point?

The group will most likely be cut off after the group is disbanded. Just like the book, everyone can disperse. It will take a few days to enter the weekly update and then eunuch. This book also starts high and ends low. I can't grasp it in the middle and later stages. I made up a disease for the protagonist in the early stage so that the plot can advance in the early stage. In the middle and later stages, the circle will not come back. The third heroine also collapsed. How can there be many people who like it? I don't understand how some authors just love Of course you can feel "I'm happy, I like it" when you write something that readers don't like. But if you have the idea and the ability, don't break it. If you have the ability, don't cut it. If you want results, you don't want to write something that the readers will like. How is it possible? I didn't invest much in this book. When the third heroine came out, I felt something was wrong and might break it. I thought about raising it, but as expected, the book died.

It feels like the protagonist's character becomes more and more indifferent as the game goes on. At the beginning, it seems that he is just self-disciplined and rational, but later on he becomes more and more indifferent. I don't know if the author went off the rails or if he deliberately showed the protagonist's condition getting worse, but it's really awkward and unlikable.

If the author can keep writing according to this standard until the end, this can become a foundation for your future writing career. Even if you come back from fantasy wandering like a crow, you will still have a fan base. I can only say this

I hope it doesn't appear that the heroine is made of other men's gold. This makes me feel that the hero is made of other men's gold!