Love Healing Manual

Can you write a book? I haven't seen the protagonist poop until now, so why doesn't the protagonist need to poop?

This author had this kind of virtue in the last book. He made a good start with a good subject, but in the middle, the content started to smell strange. Then he stopped updating without warning and deleted the group. After a few weeks, he came back with an insincere apology and updated intermittently. He ruined the initial good character creation and plot planning bit by bit. The ending was messy. What I didn't expect was that so many people would be fooled by her second book.

Let me put it bluntly, this book is of average quality, and its ability to persist for so long is all due to the author's little ingenuity and innovation in writing about training animal girlfriends. Let's talk about the characters first. The first thing is the protagonist. I was convinced as soon as I saw it. Brother, you write love novels. Do you know that falling in love is a two-way street? You write a fascinating protagonist, and you wish you could only interact with people for the reason of always seeing a doctor. Then there is Kitagawa, too little characterization, too ordinary, and Nishimiya, the portrayal is too poor to be bothered to say, Gong Cheng will say below. In terms of the plot, I can't go into details. The role of Miyagi is purely for fun. Miyagi is the only one who knows about such an important thing as his illness. His aunt doesn't know about it. She has never even met Miyagi. When they brought people to the house, they thought they were taking Kitagawa there. She didn't even leave any information to herself when she was sick. The reason was also nonsense. The fragmented memory logic during the onset of the illness will be confusing. If you dedicate your body to Miyagi, it can lengthen and then lead to reshape. The reason for not contacting now is to avoid the mental fluctuations caused by distance that lead to emotional imbalance. You are writing a Qiong Yao drama, it is too harsh. See for yourself if there is any logic. At the beginning, the author also said that Miyagi was not tortured for the sake of torture. Human turtles can be anything. I am too lazy to say it. Also, if the main palace seat is confirmed, it will be meaningless to watch the party struggle. In short, amnesia is chosen as the core link. Building a husband-chasing crematorium is too lucrative. You might as well be an ordinary medical student as the protagonist. After unlocking the system, you use points to pretend once and you become addicted. Various tests also come one after another. Not only did they complete more healing activities to gain points, unlocked various patients, and finally rose to prominence, but the heroines not only discovered that the protagonist's coldness at the beginning was fake, but gradually discovered that they liked the protagonist, and realized that they must work harder if they have a love rival. There are so many simple things about party fighting, but there is no youthful flavor in writing about love. I don't know how the author did it. Finally, the writing skills need to be trained urgently. The parents don't have it, the aunt takes care of it, the eldest daughter belongs to the chaebol, and there are bodyguards in black beside her, and the senior sister is a robot master. Everything is too classic, which is not to say that there are no better ones, but the various characters are not full of life, seem lifeless, and divorced from reality. A good novel must be above reality but not divorced from reality. Writing more can make up for it. The key update is still slow.

At a level between grain grass and grass jelly, for those who like Riqing, Riqing tastes quite good and can be considered a grass jelly. In addition, the perspective setting is very novel, starting from the perspective of a doctor, and it is not a traditional novel.

This author is amazing

Paralyzed. This is the author's moral character. He has no professional ethics. In the beginning, the book was always short and then he apologized for various reasons. When the update was stopped, there was no news at all. This book even ran away after completing it. After spending money, can you care about this starting point?

If the author can keep writing according to this standard until the end, this can become a foundation for your future writing career. Even if you come back from fantasy wandering like a crow, you will still have a fan base. I can only say this

It feels like the protagonist's character becomes more and more indifferent as the game goes on. At the beginning, it seems that he is just self-disciplined and rational, but later on he becomes more and more indifferent. I don't know if the author went off the rails or if he deliberately showed the protagonist's condition getting worse, but it's really awkward and unlikable.

The group will most likely be cut off after the group is disbanded. Just like the book, everyone can disperse. It will take a few days to enter the weekly update and then eunuch. This book also starts high and ends low. I can't grasp it in the middle and later stages. I made up a disease for the protagonist in the early stage so that the plot can advance in the early stage. In the middle and later stages, the circle will not come back. The third heroine also collapsed. How can there be many people who like it? I don't understand how some authors just love Of course you can feel "I'm happy, I like it" when you write something that readers don't like. But if you have the idea and the ability, don't break it. If you have the ability, don't cut it. If you want results, you don't want to write something that the readers will like. How is it possible? I didn't invest much in this book. When the third heroine came out, I felt something was wrong and might break it. I thought about raising it, but as expected, the book died.

There is no need to write about the internship life of medical students in such detail, it looks a bit boring.

I hope it doesn't appear that the heroine is made of other men's gold. This makes me feel that the hero is made of other men's gold!

Real dogs don't want to study medicine. If you have a low degree, you can't find a job. If you have a higher degree, you will waste more than ten years. You have no income and have to rely on family support. A roadside wild dog with pure medical skills like me can be trampled by just one person in the hospital. He is raped every day and his leader is anthropomorphic. When will it end😭😭😭

Why haven't you appeared in Nishinomiya yet? Several chapters have been told about the protagonist's medical treatment. Do most people really like to watch this?

Nikki ranks first. At this stage, I feel that it is the Kujo book. Although some people despise that book, there is nothing to say about the results. As long as the quality of this book is maintained, it feels at least on the same level as that book.

If Nishinomiya wants to be cured, then treat it quickly. How long has the appetite been whetted? If it is not cured, then treat it quickly. No one cares.

It's really a bit humorous for the senior to plead for Nishimiya again and again. Without Miyagi at that time, there was a question mark as to whether the protagonist could come out alive Although she almost killed you, she was a good girl.

Why do you write so many chapters about treating people? I don't understand how introducing a lot of medical terms will advance the plot.

Doesn't anyone think it's strange why the book "Love Healing Manual" is being discussed in book circles?

The writing gets worse and worse. The author not only has no strength, but also no character 🙂

I cried. It was so difficult to find a Riqing article on Xiancao on Qidian. This article is worth the monthly ticket 😊. The author, please update more 🙂

What is this? Eunuch, can Qidian provide a refund channel?

I finished reading the existing 187 chapters on December 2nd. In general, it is an excellent work that depicts characters and emotions. The advantages are naturally obvious. The characters are vivid and follow the logic of the plot. There are basically no poisonous points. It is a work that can be immersed in the airwaves. At first, I thought it was a model animal harem drama, but after reading it, I can see the author's care in characterization. The heroines have distinct personalities and their emotions are not obtrusive. The male protagonist's character is too rational at this stage, but fortunately it is within a certain range, and it can be seen that there is some foreshadowing. In terms of career plot, it does not have the cheap feeling of a flowing urban novel, and it promotes the main plot, but some plot redundancies can also be seen. I hope the author can get better in the future. But this advantage has certain limitations. The vividness of the characters comes from a large number of psychological and behavioral descriptions of the characters. The plot is logical and based on the author spending a lot of space describing the interaction between the male and female protagonists, which is the main line of the male protagonist's medical career. As a result, the plot progresses slowly and the characters appear over a long period of time, which has a poor impact on the update experience. Therefore, for readers, it is better to watch it. But this is not good news for the authors, as it can be seen that the data is not very good. In summary, the male protagonist temporarily occupies the high ground rationally, but it is not a grass and trees. The heroines each have their own templates but they are not stereotypes. The relationship progresses naturally, and although the plot is routine, it is not abrupt. The plot progress is reasonable but a little slow. It's worth reading, but one or two chapters are less effective to follow. Finally, donate three monthly tickets to show your support.

It's normal even if it's cut. I haven't read dozens of chapters, but the so-called emotionless disease of the male protagonist really made me uncomfortable. There was no interaction at all. It felt like it was purely a one-sided emotional contribution from the female protagonists. I just read the novel, and it was good to read a sweet plot. But it took a long time, and in the end you told me that no one was chosen as the male lead. I wouldn't be too surprised. And I probably couldn't handle the role of the eldest lady because I couldn't even imagine the possibility of the male protagonist and her developing in the future. At this point, it's normal for the book to be cut.

I really like this book. I hope the author can continue writing it and finish it. I will always support it.

Although the circle comes back later, and I personally think the circle is pretty good but the twist of the jade pendant is definitely a thunderstorm. It's not that the guys in the comment area really want to give up when they say there is a reversal. I can only say that the author here handled it really poorly 😰

Alas, I swore before that I couldn't cut it

Also, I really like Suzuo as a character, it's such a shame.

The protagonist is a doctor, and the heroines suffer from zoonotic mental illness, and they think they are animals, and the protagonist heals them and heals himself at the same time The overall story is more realistic, the protagonist studies in medical school every day, and the heroine's disease, when it breaks out, becomes a realistic psychosis, unable to control the body, and the brain feels painful. It was only after treatment and guidance by the protagonist that this situation was turned into a mild imitation of an animal And the animal is also a portrayal of the heroine's design, which is very interesting The shortcomings and eunuchs, the author also arranged a mental illness for the protagonist - periodic amnesia, because the overall story is too realistic, and the protagonist's three views + realistic background are also the same, which is not conducive to writing a harem. Periodic amnesia can solve this problem But this conflicts with the heroine's illness, because the heroine's illness requires the help of the hero Can it be removed? No, the author hints that the tone of the story is that the patients help each other, and the hero and the heroine heal each other. This is also the author's arrangement for the male protagonist to have a harem. The heroines can accept it, because they are all patients, so they can ignore the reality But the author still collapsed, just when the male protagonist was about to lose his memory for the first time. Because the current story unfolds with a very strong male protagonist. The male protagonist has a tough character and is the main plot driver in the story. But who is responsible for the plot when the male protagonist loses his memory? The answer is no one. If the female protagonists don't fight, they are already giving the male protagonist face. At the same time, amnesia will inevitably affect daily life. This book is more realistic, but the impact is still very big Summary: The male protagonist's personality is at odds with the rationality of having a harem. The male protagonist is supposed to be the eldest male protagonist, everything depends on him, and he is also the key figure in the plot But the rationale for opening a harem is a sick club, everyone has diseases (shortcomings), if it is other novels, then there is a slow development, the male protagonist realizes his own shortcomings, and finally grows up But this book is a bit extreme, the male protagonist's shortcoming is amnesia, the female protagonist is particularly prominent + extreme because of the animal disease, and it is impossible without a male supervisor In the end, the author couldn't continue writing and didn't dare to write about the male protagonist losing his memory and becoming a eunuch.

Hey, no, buddy, you are a eunuch, your stomach hurts after reading this book.

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