Douluo: Dragon King: I Am Planting a Sacred Tree in Douluo

For fan creations, can you post Gu Yuena's?

What kind of Riddler? It's a mess. After reading a few pictures, I can't understand what the author wants to express? What is the source beast? Who is the mysterious man? Is there a system?

I think your setting of Three-Eyed Jinni is really outrageous. In the original work, Tang Wutong was discovered by Tang San when he secretly went down to the lower world. Tang San divided his soul into two halves, one half erased the memory, and the other half sealed the memory. The person who sealed the memory was Wang Donger, the heroine of the lower world. Later, when Three-Eyed Jinni exchanged memories with Huo Yuhao, he transformed when he yearned for the human world. During the execution, Tang San took away the other part of Tang Wutong's soul, the half whose memory had been erased. This meant that the other half of Tang Wutong's soul inherited the memory of the Three-Eyed Jinni and the body of the Three-Eyed Jinni. From this moment on, From the beginning, Wang Dong'er and Wang Qiu'er were already one person. Only the two of them died, and their two souls were stitched together by Tang San. They were the real Tang Wutong and the real Tang San's daughter. Otherwise, guess where Tang Wutong got the nickname "Sewing Monster"?

Does the protagonist know the original work? I'm confused

I remember that there was a Naruto fanfic that explained the underlying logic of chakra very well. I copied it below so that the author can refer to it. Earth chakra corresponds to the solid state of matter. Water chakra corresponds to the liquid state of matter. Wind attribute chakra corresponds to the gaseous state of matter. Fire escape and thunder escape both correspond to the plasma state of matter. Fire chakra is the macroscopic thermodynamic state of matter, while thunder chakra corresponds to the behavior of microscopic particles in plasma. In addition, there are metaphysical, transcendent and purely material realms, closely related to intelligent living beings, corresponding to the yang and yin chakras of "fate" and "form". Why do we need to integrate seven attributes of chakra changes at the same time when we reach the level of Blood Succession Snare? Because not collecting all the changes is equivalent to missing a corner of Otsutsuki's creation power, which will lead to the collapse of the universe.

Why do I feel like the author made himself feel so aggrieved?

If the author doesn't kill Gu Yue directly, I feel that she is of no use and may affect the protagonist's plan 😅

The protagonist should have his own rhythm and story, instead of just surrounding the original male protagonist and pretending to be a slap in the face.

The current attitude towards Silver Dragon King and Tang Wulin is too vague. Are you going to kill them or give me some assurance?

No, you wrote it well before. Later, as soon as you wrote that the protagonist planned to indulge, it immediately collapsed. The back is like a collection of illustrated books. Are you going to have sex with a woman? Like Yali, if the original work clearly clarifies the relationship between husband and wife, you have to adapt it. Can't we take the route of focusing on genius scientific research? Do you know that people like you are very awkward when you start out as a genius and then suddenly become a stallion? Another point is that the author, your emotional drama is terrible.

Why are you so focused on recruiting girls? You can't show your various escape skills and scientific research geniuses at all. If you compressed all those ladies and focused on your career, it would look better. Now this

The settings in many places are a bit abstract The strength of the first protagonist has never been written. The 100,000-year-old soul beast at the beginning has no mention of combat power and mental strength. The second protagonist uses the Sharingan illusion to control Xie Xie at the beginning of the promotion match. Tang Wulin (there is an explanation that Tang did not let Tang San take action) is understandable. As for Gu Yue, she has no brains but no strength. The first-level god was controlled by the protagonist's rebuilt great soul master with illusion, and her mental power is only at the psychic level. Or should we say that in the author's setting, Gu Yue retrained and voluntarily fell down from the first-level god position. A first-level god has only a little talent for retraining. He is a ten-year-old psychic realm and has a small twenty-level soul.

Since you want to avoid Tang Hao's sledgehammer, why go to Donghai Academy? Isn't it enough to achieve success?

Why is it written in such a mess? Does the protagonist know the plot?

Even if the original work is very retarded, you don't have to keep emphasizing this throughout the whole book, despising everyone else because you are the noble Naruto? It feels like Tang's story is limitless, and the book speaks to the mind, and those who write fan fiction can make their own rationalizations. You write all the characters in the original work as if they are mentally retarded, so is that all readers will read? I came to see the original character, not to see you create a finished Hokage dutiful son to despise everyone. In the final analysis, fan authors are just here to pick up garbage. If you don't want to write, just get out. You write for money, not to make others look retarded.

It's extremely watery, the emotional lines are written in a mess, I can't care anymore, because it's too watery, I showed more than 40 photos of the person in charge of the Tang Sect, picture 5, the protagonist was seriously injured due to the Tang Sect problem, and he brought someone to the door to make a fool of himself, and he said that he was decisive and decisive in killing. It's really poisonous and watery.

Good guy, Gu Yuena has been taken back by Tang Wulin and you still let her be the heroine. There is something wrong with her, right? You can't live without Gu Yuena, right? Gu Yuena is the heroine, but she has to engage in a series of bizarre operations

In a certain timeline, Xiao Wu, the scabbard of the Tang God King who became the Supreme God King, died again Conspired by the will of the universe, he fell into a rage and killed Tang Daer, Tang Princess, Dai Yuhao, Ji Dong, Lie Yan, Silver Arowana, Zhou Weiqing and other Tang God Kings in one breath After regaining some consciousness, he ordered other God Kings in the Great God Circle to split him in half One half is the Blue Silver King who inherited Tang San's wisdom and kindness The other half is the Haotian King who inherited Tang San's violent and violent temper And ordered that people with the Tang surname, people from the Tang sect, and people whose martial spirits are Blue Silver Grass or Haotian Hammer cannot become gods Only those who inherit the power of both the Blue Silver King and the Haotian King and complete the Tang Divine King assessment can settle their grudges.

Just like why Leng Yaolai appeared to kill the 100,000-year-old sea soul beast for you, I will explain it later. It had been used to get out 500 years ago using secret methods. Planning for a long time

Sure enough, whether it's the original novel or a fanfic, Gu Yuena is still as disgusting as ever. A piece of shit.

What does it mean that you know a lot of key settings but just don't know the plot? Isn't this a sign that the author not only wants the excitement and plot-promoting ability brought by the time traveler's information advantage, but also wants the protagonist to be stupid at critical moments by "not knowing the plot" and reasonably extend the front line?

Wusiduo

Anyone who can come up with a plot where Na'er is not accepted but Gu Yue is accepted is invincible.

I suddenly remembered that Tang Wulin and Gu Yuena took a bath together when they were children. Originally, this book had a lot of poisonous points, but this seems to be more. When I think of this, the poisonous points I endured before were too weak compared to this one, so I won't read it.

Brigitte

Are there any fics with Yali as the heroine?

Update, why not? 😭😭😭

I remember Tang Wulin still likes Gu Yue now, right?

What other books has the author written?

They all ran away, why did they go to school again? Didn't understand this. In order to increase the number of words?