Xiu Xian: My Super Portable Space

In this introduction, the protagonist's brother is unlucky and gets dumped, and his brother also dies before his eyes, and then he has to pay for it💰! 😂

The author has a question, is it necessary to practice this martial art? Can't the setting of practicing martial arts first in cultivating immortals be removed? It's all cheated! And under the premise of cultivating immortal literature, the setting of early martial arts training is really...

People who don't understand grains write about farming. They don't know how to propagate sweet potatoes or the oil yield of soybeans. Don't write about the mortal period. Directly write about cultivating immortals. They don't know how to exploit strengths and avoid weaknesses. You still have to write.

Some words that have been said are repeated again and again. I don't know if the author forgot to write them before, or if he did it deliberately to reduce the number of words. For example, I introduced the time acceleration function of the spiritual grass twice. Also, the martial arts hall's trick to entertain the protagonist is used again later, and it is introduced again when it is hinted that the protagonist Bai Zhuman will sneak attack on the protagonist. There are also some other things that are repeated again and again. I forgot about them after reading them in one go. It just feels a little watery and affects the senses. It is recommended that the author improve

This is another book about practicing martial arts for dozens of chapters before cultivating immortality 😒. Can't you cultivate immortality well?

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I've reached chapter 80 and will share my personal opinions. The author himself wants to write about mortals cultivating immortals. There is no problem with this. After all, mortals cultivating immortals has been very popular recently. It has gained some popularity and can accurately screen readers. However, the author's title does feel a bit like an ancient novel. However, I quite like this kind of novel in a portable space. It is probably due to the regret of not having a secret base when I was a child, so I really like this golden finger. The plot of the story is narrated with a warm feeling, and the development is basically reasonable. Of course, there are also appropriate ups and downs. For example, Master Wan suddenly feels uncomfortable, but there is also foreshadowing of Master Wan's teaching method of fishing for three days and drying the net for two days, which is a great advantage. But I see your posture, even three million words may not make you an immortal 🤫 This is a test of your skills, so you need to pay attention! Although the conflict plot in the recent chapters is a bit stiff, it is only eighty chapters after all, so it is normal without any foreshadowing. Let me talk about another point that I am confused about. There are descendants in Chapter 80. Do I need to cultivate the descendants? Cultivating it will inevitably weaken the protagonist's sense of existence, but it's okay for boys to be free-range and for girls to embody daily life😁 Let me talk about Goldfinger's opinions. The author's Goldfinger set up a spherical space, and it is understandable that a thin layer of soil is placed on the bottom in front of it. However, if you are thin, you should not remove half a meter of soil from a fifty-meter-diameter space. At least you should spread it two or three meters 🤫

Now for readers' request: Pig's feet can be good or bad but not stupid. This person has definitely violated this taboo

This type is too long-winded, the early development is too slow, and it is all trivial plots. At least the golden finger can strengthen it and quickly transition to the mortal plot. This golden finger has really not had the slightest effect in promoting the protagonist to become stronger quickly. After all, it is a resource space type. The result is that the protagonist is fifty chapters old and is still a mortal. He has not touched the immortal at all.

Chapter 130 has not yet begun to cultivate immortality, and I only practice martial arts every now and then. The progress of upgrading is already slow, and there is such a nonsense plot. The whole family earns 50 a month, and a woman pounces on me and suddenly takes on more than 2,000 in debt. It doesn't matter, I gave up.

The writing is very good, and the subject matter is not outrageous in all aspects. It is much better than the kind that matures overnight and matures in three or five days, or uses some kind of ripening agent. It will not cause price collapse. It also has the ability to control cash flow in detail. It is not the kind of world view that hits the market and treats everyone like fools. Come on, write well. I dare not say that I will become a god or a god. But fans will get one. 14 Monthly tickets. Please accept it as a small note.

The plot moves too slowly. It doesn't matter if you don't pay for it. If it's already on the shelves and it's still so slow, then...

After reading Chapter 225, becoming a monk is the beginning of cultivating immortality.

Big brother, you haven't even started to practice immortality, but you've already started to indulge in sexual immorality. Now that you've become an immortal, it's okay. Don't you want the sun to rise in the east to dominate you? Isn't it funny? You haven't even started to walk yet, and you're starting a harem?

The start is very old-fashioned, the progress is very slow, and there is a high probability of failure.

Cultivation of immortality and foundation building, the road ahead is endless.

It's almost a hundred chapters and I haven't even started cultivating immortality yet. My wife is a mortal, are you ready to abandon your wife and son?

Collected it, the story is very detailed, I look forward to more exciting follow-up!

It's so silly. After reading ten chapters, it feels like I haven't read it at all. I'll write a running document here.

The book is still readable, but it's too watery. One chapter is basically explaining the ways of the world. It's too preachy. Readers won't read it. Moreover, there are too many chapters with this kind of content. Don't be so watery when you put it on the shelves.

Always plug-in space, plug-in space! Why do you have to include the word "plug-in"? The experience is too bad. Isn't it better to just write "space"? Just for two more words

This author has a great word count.

What a great book. The more you write, the more interesting it becomes. If you don't have to eat, just read it with dry food

It's not like you can't survive, why don't you engage in diversified planting And how do you plant seeds and why do you plant them successfully?

The writing is really good, don't be anxious, soaring to the sky is not suitable for farming or practicing farming.

Although the progress is slow, the writing style is good. As a farming novel, it is okay to have a slower pace. But most people come here for cultivating immortals and space. The world of cultivating immortals is obviously there, but the protagonist has been wandering around as a warrior. The progress is slow, which makes many people very anxious. They want the protagonist to fast forward to cultivating immortals, so there will be fewer people retained. Since warriors and cultivators can be seamlessly connected, it is better to change warriors to the early stage of cultivating immortals. The protagonist is cultivating immortality from the beginning, and there will definitely be more people who are willing to read on. The similar wizard stream from knight to wizard is almost over Of course, if writing a book is a hobby, take your time, but if you are writing a book for food, then either change the title of the book to highlight the development of farming, and don't make readers expect to cultivate immortality from the beginning.

It is a model of mortal flow. It is rare to see such an excellent novel without any poisonous points. This book continues to be written until the laws of the small world are sound, the world is created, and it can even accommodate humans on a very small continent. It can even create a new civilization, and borrow the power of the new civilization to create a new world, and so on. Guess, there is no problem in writing 5-6 million words, at least I haven't seen any poisonous points yet. . .

The light book is pretty good. For entertainment, just enjoy it, no need to be high-spirited😁

Just read a few chapters, it's too bad to have space for farming.

This space is even more awesome than the system space. You can harvest by just throwing the seeds. The system space is also watered and fertilized regularly. This is too reasonable